[OOC] [M] Shalodud

[FrozenEcstasy]

Zhaliora said

<3

[CorruptedShadow]

Frozen, your character's picture looks like something outta' Wind Waker.

[FrozenEcstasy]

CorruptedShadow said
Frozen, your character's picture looks like something outta' Wind Waker.

SHUT UP JOHN

[CorruptedShadow]

You wanna go punk >:B?

[FrozenEcstasy]

CorruptedShadow said
You wanna go punk >:B?

LET'S GO

[Plightz]

Well then, I hope this is still open, toiled about in the background, not the best though.
EDITED.

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Appearance:
Average height for a human, has dark black hair with strands of blone hair, His only unique feature
is his scar which runs down vertically next to his mouth.

Name: Meliodias Margaden

Age: 21
Race: Human

Personality:
A cold, distant and mysterious person, he tends to do everything himself and doesn't depend on other people,
a 'lone' wolf. He has a distrust of other races and people due to an experience in his past.
Although he seems not like it, he always helps a person in need. His humor is often crude and laced with tidbits
of sarcasm.

He has another side which he only shows his loved ones and close friends, in which he puts all his guard down.
In battle he is ruthless and doesn't show hesitance in killing people who proves a threat to him, or people in general,
but tries to avoid doing this and instead choosing to leave them unconscious.

Background:
Born and raised by parents, who did not plan to have him, but nonetheless still cared and love to him.
His childhood was pretty much normal, Except that he was bullied by people his age.
He had a childhood friend, Miranda, who usually fended them off. One day, much to her horror, sees him
bleeding near his mouth, and hears children giggling and running away. This has earned him his scar and
his distrust or other people and races had started from here. He always contemplated why other people
are like this and never found an answer.

During his teenage years, he was often socially inept from people and had little to no friends. Miranda always told him
to look for more friends and stand up for himself. Miranda soon had to go away due to her parents demands, much to
Meliodias dismay. Life was pretty uneventful at the time, until one night, a group of people broke into
their home, Meliodias' mother hid him in the pantry, but he could see everything that happened. His parents
tried to give them what they demanded, and when they were given what they wanted, they were shot dead. This event has led
to both his parents death, and his personality growing ever colder and darker. The only thing he did notice from his
parents murderers were that they all had a red Z tattoo on the back of their necks.

Adopted by a mysterious man named Kreinat a retired old soldier of war, who decided to settle down.
Meliodias was always wondered why he adopted him. The old war soldier had said something
about wanting a son, or something of the sort. Meliodias dismissed it as an old man who
wanted some relatives. Harboring a feeling of vengeance for his parents murderers,
just from first glance he knew this man had experience in battle and begged him to teach him how to
fight, though reluctant, he agreed. During the training, Meliodias quickly learned all that was taught to him
at a suprising speed, but in the meantime Kreinat was instilling a sense of justice in him so that he always help people
who are in need. Now with his training complete, he is on the hunt for his parents murderers.
Skills:
He's an experienced fighter, taught by his adoptive father. Is a battle-genius and can think of many ways on how
to end battles but does not have much real battle experience since he was mostly trained.

Gear

Has a cloak, primary weapon is a katana, and chooses kunai for far range targets.

[Azaria Blue]

Hello there, Plightz! First, I'm going to comb over the character a little, but even so, I don't know if I'll take another. We shall see. Please don't take offense to this, I'm just trying to help!

First of all, the background is a bit shotty, as you mentioned. I found it a bit hard to follow, although it could work well with some work. Feel free to edit your post, perhaps consider a more linear line and checking to make sure it all fits together.

Secondly, what kind of battle training? Karate, front-line style? This adoptive, battle-master father adopted a teenager? It seems to be a bit clunky.
As for gear, it looks good around there. Also personality works as well ^_^

[Plightz]

Azaria Blue said
Hello there, Plightz! First, I'm going to comb over the character a little, but even so, I don't know if I'll take another. We shall see. Please don't take offense to this, I'm just trying to help!First of all, the background is a bit shotty, as you mentioned. I found it a bit hard to follow, although it could work well with some work. Feel free to edit your post, perhaps consider a more linear line and checking to make sure it all fits together.Secondly, what kind of battle training? Karate, front-line style? This adoptive, battle-master father adopted a teenager? It seems to be a bit clunky.As for gear, it looks good around there. Also personality works as well ^_^

Don't worry, I can take constructive criticism, as long as its constructive and can help me! Which this is, i am gonna quick review my character. Thanks
Yes, front line style is what i had in mind, Sorry bout it being a bit clunky, still trying to get used to writing character sheets lol

[Azaria Blue]

It's perfectly fine, learning and improving is good ^_^ No need to be sorry.
If you ever get lost, you can try and mirror someone else's style, or can PM me any time for help.
I'm glad to get a newbie up and through the motions :)

[Zhaliora]

Name: Emma Kratz
Age: 23
Height: 5' 6"
Weight: 154lbs
Magic user: No
Race: Human

Appearance

Emma has caramel auburn hair that stretches down just under her shoulder blades. She has green eyes, and a soft, yet pointy face. Her skin is pale, yet with a slight tan. She wears a necklace made out of a sapphire and silver and lined with gold around her neck. She wears leather and cotton vest over a linen shirt, cotton pants with a leather belt at her waist and thicker leather at her groin; she also wears knee high leather boots and leather wrist protectors. She prefers mobility over heavy protection, since her outfit only protects against a couple of blows before it'll get cut through.
The vest is lined with golden strands and silver buttons, showing off her noble heritage while it's also made out of high quality leather from different animals, made for maximal protection that leather can offer.

History: Emma Kratz was born and raised in the capitol in a minor noble family in the fancier quarters of the city. Her family had lived there for generations, even before the current ruler. The Kratz family had always supported the monarch, until the treacherous incident with the elf child; Ethel. At this point, the Kratz family started undermining the monarch, they wanted the support of the other humans that did not approve of this elf child, so they sent Emma away to one of the noble families, basically as a hostage, to gain their trust and to gain more power amongst the noble families.

In a way, it worked better than what they'd ever hope for. Instead of the people leading a revolt, Ethel left the city, leaving it in turmoil after casting a spell that wiped out her father's brother's family, a prominent merchant family in the capitol. The people became enraged with the elves, and magical users, and the Kratz family which had been speaking out quietly and sometimes publicly against those things gained more power and followers as an effect. They used the confusion and hatred to gain a better position and to gain more wealth.

Emma however, had no idea what was going on behind the scenes, she was just enraged that her cousin had gotten killed by Ethel and swore to hunt him down. While her family did not approve too well of this agenda, Emma refused to see it otherwise and her parents gave in after the third possible marriage had been turned aside by Emma's antics, since she wanted no marriage until she was ready for one and made sure the suitors gave up. This left Emma with a lot of freedom to act and go as she wished, but she had made a promise, to marry at the age of 25, at the latest.

Knowing she only had two more years, Emma left the city with her parents permission and support since it gave their family even more power since they had such a dedicated daughter. That she showed such dedication to rid the city of evils and supportive of the royal family now that Namil was in charge. She herself however, just wanted justice for her cousin's family, and find herself someone suitable for her marriage, rather than a match already made by her parents. She had been promised, that if she brought back the body of Ethel, she'd be allowed to choose anyone to marry, at least anyone her parents influence would allow.

Skills: Emma is trained in proper etiquette and diplomacy as fitting of her position while also trained to use a spear and the blade. She knows how to dance; and ride a horse. She is also a skilled archer.

Gear and fighting information: Emma carries a metal spear for when she needs to fight herself. When she fights with her spear she tries to keep the enemies back, circling the spear and poking with the tip when the opportunity arises. If poking isn't enough, she can turn the spear over and use the blade on the other side to slash at enemies. She is not against using dirty tricks, like kicks to the groin, or attacking eyes or groins and other sensitive places with her spear. She always tries to keep herself at a good distance from her opponents so that she can use the length of the spear to her advantage.

In and on her backpack, she carries the essentials. Make-up, a water-skin, a sharpening stone, some provisions, a bedroll, a small tent, a cloth bucket, some cooking gear, a tea set with some tea and honey, some clothes and some pocket change of 50 dink, 40 copper, 30 silver and 20 gold.

Personality: Emma is a very cheerful and optimistic person. She tends to speak what's on her mind, even if what's on her mind isn't the most appropriate thing to say. She almost never gets disheartened but keeps on going with a smile on her face. She is almost naive in her easiness to trust others and always think the best about them until the opposite is proven. She makes the occasional joke and she is very quick to laughter, sometimes she laughs at the most strange things. However, she carries a deep hatred towards the other races of the world, and magical users that use their powers for destruction. She, along with most humans, blame them for the troubles of the world, and Emma has seen it first hand when her cousin's family had been destroyed by magic from a hateful elf. But she's always wanted a pet.

[Azaria Blue]

Emma is accepted! ^_^

[CorruptedShadow]

So when will the IC be posted, if I may ask?

[Azaria Blue]

Probably in a couple hours to tomorrow :)

[Vantas]

yoooo this is still accepting i hope???

[CorruptedShadow]

strider :B

[Azaria Blue]

Striders gonna stride.

[CorruptedShadow]

Ayyy.

[Vantas]

egbert

ayyyy

[CorruptedShadow]

You should tots join.

[Vantas]

if you guys are accepting still i totes will
this rp seems hella wack and id like to join cause thatd be chill as hell