[OOC] Myriad Reality

[DarkwolfX37]

David you've gotta get a post in the IC of the soul eater thing. I'm gonna have my char late to class but it's been a long time and we haven't posted yet.

[Techspert]

David you've gotta get a post in the IC of the soul eater thing. I'm gonna have my char late to class but it's been a long time and we haven't posted yet.

@DarkwolfX37

Alright. I'll get on that when I wake up.

[DarkwolfX37]

So I finally shaved, which means I went from looking like an ISIS member to a well-to-do white guy in like 5 minutes. Like, even the shade of my skin looks different when I don't have a beard. It's stunning to me how I can look like a standard caucasian and like I just came out of an al qaeda bootcamp in the same day.

[Techspert]

So I finally shaved, which means I went from looking like an ISIS member to a well-to-do white guy in like 5 minutes. Like, even the shade of my skin looks different when I don't have a beard. It's stunning to me how I can look like a standard caucasian and like I just came out of an al qaeda bootcamp in the same day.

@DarkwolfX37

You're too white to look like an ISIS member.

[souleaterfan320]

Who likes twenty one pilots here?

[Techspert]

Who likes twenty one pilots here?

@souleaterfan320

I don't listen to bands.

[souleaterfan320]

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I don't listen to bands.

@Techspert

It saddens me that you dont. :(

[souleaterfan320]

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You're too white to look like an ISIS member.

@Techspert

Also, dis is racist. ISIS members come in all shapes, sizes, races, colors, etc.

[Techspert]

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It saddens me that you dont. :(

@souleaterfan320

I don't enjoy the sound of the human voice.

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Also, dis is racist. ISIS members come in all shapes, sizes, races, colors, etc.

@souleaterfan320

That's not racist at all. At worst, it's profiling, and at best, it's knowing your enemy.

[Stabby]

Who likes twenty one pilots here?

@souleaterfan320

i don't listen to the radio enough these days.

[souleaterfan320]

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I don't enjoy the sound of the human voice.

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That's not racist at all. At worst, it's profiling, and at best, it's knowing your enemy.

@Techspert

Okay, profiling it is.

[souleaterfan320]

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i don't listen to the radio enough these days.

@Stabby

youtu.be/4Am6iIqPXHY

[Stabby]

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youtu.be/4Am6iIqPXHY

@souleaterfan320

nice.

[Techspert]

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Okay, profiling it is.

@souleaterfan320

It's still not, really.

[souleaterfan320]

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nice.

@Stabby

Nice indeed.

[Techspert]

[DarkwolfX37]

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You're too white to look like an ISIS member.

@Techspert

I like, take on a darker skin tone when I have a beard. It's actually amazing to see.

[Techspert]

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I like, take on a darker skin tone when I have a beard. It's actually amazing to see.

@DarkwolfX37

Optical illusions?

[DarkwolfX37]

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You're too white to look like an ISIS member.

@Techspert

I like, take on a darker skin tone when I have a beard. It's actually amazing to see.

@Techspert

Lol. I love how you rendered the vive controllers instead of hands or something.
Okay, new plan, don't have the text. It makes this seem like a child made the game, ie. someone who doesn't have experience making game trailers. It's too generic and the gameplay shown doesn't fit what's being said. "Why do I fight?" Yet no fighting is shown. "I must escape?" You don't show any reason to want to escape. I think you're doing a "trapped in a virtual world" approach but that's not shown in the trailer. It just looks like you're throwing around random generic questions for no reason.
I'd suggest reworking the trailer to show the start again, followed by the door like you had, and then go straight to fighting for a scene, preferably small enemies, followed by the "how do I do things" scene where you're trying to figure out how to play, then going to a scene where that boss monster is attacking you, preferably literally showing you getting hit by one of it's attacks, then a scene of defeating a different boss and it dying, then going to the title screen.
It would look much better and a but more experienced.

[DarkwolfX37]

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Optical illusions?

@Techspert

Mhm.