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It won't compile until you declare Helena.


One two three four, I declare thumb war.
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This writing style is bothering me but I can't tell why. Is it over-reaching? Is it just trying too hard? I can't tell.


Ew, gross. Without even thinking about what you wrote, my first impression was "They're trying too hard." It's obvious they lack a strong grasp on the intricacies of higher English.
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One two three four, I declare thumb war.


You can't start a thumb war without it compiling first.
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You can't start a thumb war without it compiling first.


Compile the Helenas.
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This writing style is bothering me but I can't tell why. Is it over-reaching? Is it just trying too hard? I can't tell.


I figured it out. They must not be a native english speaker.
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I figured it out. They must not be a native english speaker.


I get that impression when I look at it, too.
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Ew, gross. Without even thinking about what you wrote, my first impression was "They're trying too hard." It's obvious they lack a strong grasp on the intricacies of higher English.


Yeah. I'm now convinced that they're not a native english speaker. They probably aren't to the point of skill with the language needed to think directly in it, so they're probably translating it as they write it, resulting in unnecessary words.
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Compile the Helenas.


That's not how you do it. What type is a Helena?

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Yeah. I'm now convinced that they're not a native english speaker. They probably aren't to the point of skill with the language needed to think directly in it, so they're probably translating it as they write it, resulting in unnecessary words.


It's tough to think in another language.
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That's not how you do it. What type is a Helena?

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It's tough to think in another language.


Mhm.
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Mhm.


Anyway, we were talking about Helena. You saw Dead Or Alive: Beach Volleyball on GameGrumps, right?
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Anyway, we were talking about Helena. You saw Dead Or Alive: Beach Volleyball on GameGrumps, right?


Of course. And I'm so mad that they went after Nyotengu, she's stupid. The youngest looking one was the best one and they ignored her.
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It bothers me that people who write stories that I would like have grammar problems.
Related, as much as I wish that story I showed was written in more fluid english, I'm glad it exists because I would absolutely have Accelerator's babies.
Related, I got the first volume of ACS Accelerator today and it's just making me want to read more but I have to hold off still. So conflicted.
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Of course. And I'm so mad that they went after Nyotengu, she's stupid. The youngest looking one was the best one and they ignored her.


I agree.

The other black haired girl or someone else?

It bothers me that people who write stories that I would like have grammar problems.
Related, as much as I wish that story I showed was written in more fluid english, I'm glad it exists because I would absolutely have Accelerator's babies.
Related, I got the first volume of ACS Accelerator today and it's just making me want to read more but I have to hold off still. So conflicted.


The greatest problem with that desire is your biological makeup and the minutely important fact that he's not real.

Night.
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I agree.

The other black haired girl or someone else?

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The greatest problem with that desire is your biological makeup and the minutely important fact that he's not real.

Night.


Well, the other black haired girl is good too, but I meant the blonde one who looks a lot younger. The only one who doesn't have an absurd chest.

I said I would, not that I want to. I'd date the fuck out of Yuriko though, but my interest lies in Mimi.
He's totally real and I won't listen to your blasphemy.

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Well, the other black haired girl is good too, but I meant the blonde one who looks a lot younger. The only one who doesn't have an absurd chest.

I said I would, not that I want to. I'd date the fuck out of Yuriko though, but my interest lies in Mimi.
He's totally real and I won't listen to your blasphemy.

Night.


Flat is justice.

He's as real as either of our social lives.
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Getting all the Chaos Emeralds in Sonic 2 is extremely ridiculous.
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Flat is justice.

He's as real as either of our social lives.


Everything you have said is true.

Getting all the Chaos Emeralds in Sonic 2 is extremely ridiculous.


Yes. Yes it is.
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