[OOC] Myriad Reality

[DarkwolfX37]

hey guy's how does this look?

sta.sh/01o4ua8iba1e

@Stabby

Do you want to know what you did well or what you did bad?

[Stabby]

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The hand on hip stands out to me as really well done for the perspective. The mouth, however, seems like it could use some work, and the head seems a bit too tall. I'm not very good at drawing humans myself, so take what I say with a grain of salt; those are just my observations.

@Mammalia

Would you believe me if i told you that i saw that done in another piece of art and just copied it off memory?

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Pretty good. I would suggest working most on eyes, since those are what really carry the message.

@Meta

I actually practice drawing eyes more often then not, since it was one of my weaker points when starting out.

Over all, thanks for the tips, but I'm probably not going to draw her in that style. It leans a bit too much towards a realistic style then I would like, since I want to make a cartoon/anime style. That, and in general I'm still not quite done yet, so the design might change.
I've already started working on drawing her in an style similar to the sketch in the bottom right.

[Stabby]

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Do you want to know what you did well or what you did bad?

@DarkwolfX37

oh trust me, I want both. Only started drawing 4-5 years ago, so I know it ain't great.

[DarkwolfX37]

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oh trust me, I want both. Only started drawing 4-5 years ago, so I know it ain't great.

@Stabby

Good: The knee and leg on the right side of the viewer. The finger lengths in comparison to each other.
Meh: Top of hair proportions. The X'd out eyes to the right of the final one and the perspective of the curve of the forehead into the top of the head on it.
Bad: Everything else.

[Stabby]

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[Stabby]

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Good: The knee and leg on the right side of the viewer. The finger lengths in comparison to each other.
Meh: Top of hair proportions. The X'd out eyes to the right of the final one and the perspective of the curve of the forehead into the top of the head on it.
Bad: Everything else.

@DarkwolfX37

Alright. I'm actually surprised that the knee looks good. Hair is still something I'm working on, and I still need to practice proportions/anatomy, so the everything else part makes sense. It probably doesn't help that I'm slowly learning and practicing the basics as I go.
Oh, I drew this on the ride home btw. It's probably not the best, but I like it more then the initial sketch.
sta.sh/05w4iorac68

[Meta]

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Alright. I'm actually surprised that the knee looks good. Hair is still something I'm working on, and I still need to practice proportions/anatomy, so the everything else part makes sense. It probably doesn't help that I'm slowly learning and practicing the basics as I go.
Oh, I drew this on the ride home btw. It's probably not the best, but I like it more then the initial sketch.
sta.sh/05w4iorac68

@Stabby

The face is a bit empty, but other than that, I like it.

[Stabby]

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The face is a bit empty, but other than that, I like it.

@Meta

what do you mean by empty?

[DarkwolfX37]

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Alright. I'm actually surprised that the knee looks good. Hair is still something I'm working on, and I still need to practice proportions/anatomy, so the everything else part makes sense. It probably doesn't help that I'm slowly learning and practicing the basics as I go.
Oh, I drew this on the ride home btw. It's probably not the best, but I like it more then the initial sketch.
sta.sh/05w4iorac68

@Stabby

Notably better, but something seems off and I can't tell what it is.

[Stabby]

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Notably better, but something seems off and I can't tell what it is.

@DarkwolfX37

maybe the shoulders or body proportions/angle? Oh wait, I think i have the breast's a bit low on the chest.

Oh, i forgot to mention, I still have no good clue on how to draw ears.

all in all, I'm guessing.

[Meta]

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what do you mean by empty?

@Stabby

The face looks like Saitama. The features make up a very small area and there's a lot of empty space.

[Stabby]

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The face looks like Saitama. The features make up a very small area and there's a lot of empty space.

@Meta

That just helped me figure out what's odd.
The eye on the left could be shifted right a little. I think....

[Meta]

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That just helped me figure out what's odd.
The eye on the left could be shifted right a little.

@Stabby

Sweet. I know a lot of artists use the face curve thing, though I'm not an artist, so I'm not familiar with the intricacies.

[Stabby]

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Sweet. I know a lot of artists use the face curve thing, though I'm not an artist, so I'm not familiar with the intricacies.

@Meta

Yea, using that trick would probably help me, but I'm not sure if I'm at a point where I could use it comfortably.
I draw without any guidelines most of the time, no shapes, no 3d objects, just free hand. So trying to use them can feel weird at times. Plus I don't really know how it works lel.

[Stabby]

I'm gonna go to bed, night.

[Meta]

I'm gonna go to bed, night.

@Stabby

Night; laters.

[Heroic]

Sorry for temporarily dying guys.

[Mammalia]

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Would you believe me if i told you that i saw that done in another piece of art and just copied it off memory?

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I actually practice drawing eyes more often then not, since it was one of my weaker points when starting out.

Over all, thanks for the tips, but I'm probably not going to draw her in that style. It leans a bit too much towards a realistic style then I would like, since I want to make a cartoon/anime style. That, and in general I'm still not quite done yet, so the design might change.
I've already started working on drawing her in an style similar to the sketch in the bottom right.

@Stabby

Yes, but at least you know how to draw that in particular.

[Mammalia]

Sorry for temporarily dying guys.

@Heroic

thank you for returning :]
The plot will go on for years if only one post is made for it each day, so please don't leave again.

[Meta]

Sorry for temporarily dying guys.

@Heroic

I'm glad they brought out the zappers. I guess they really do work.