[OOC] Academy 218 - Superhuman School (Always open)

[Jazzy]

Why is Henry the emblem of the red ranger?

That's racist.

[Jazzy]

Whoops

glitchy glitch glitch.

[Mixtape Ghost N]

Mephisto, I am very uncomfortable with your sheet. The personality goes without saying. Second, I really don't like his power, it seems pretty overpowered.

Sorry, I'm going have to reject him.

[Mixtape Ghost N]

Since they're in the same age group, Ethan will be Felix's room mate, and Vera will be Amanda's.

[Mixtape Ghost N]

Hey, Beebee, you didn't have to post twice. lol

For future reference, just edit in a second POV.

[Jazzy]

Dude Valjean seeme sketchy as hellll.

[InfernoBlaze]

And he is my roommate! T_T

[Mixtape Ghost N]

I just did a lot of fucking updating. First, I updated what Jake, Gabe, Jaska, Nikki, Shannon, & Deborah think of some of the people they've met.

And I also updated all the relevant hiders on the third post.

We should talk about relations between the returning students to grant even more interactivity. For a list of all the returning students, I refer you to the third post.

[Goat God]

Can a silly old Goat join this party?

[Mixtape Ghost N]

The party's always open, baby!

[Goat God]

Sweet! CS coming at you soon! its not as big as the the rest of you guy's but I hope you can accept a goat anyway.

Peace out Brothers!

[Goat God]

Posted and waiting the results!

[Jazzy]

Alrighty, time to remind everyone I'm a co-GM.

Goat God, unfortunately I have to decline your character. I will give some reasons why.

We'll start off from the bottom and go down.

First off, size. Your character is unrealistically large for a fifteen year old. 95% of fifteen year olds, while they can be tall, are not 173lbs. To give a perspective, I'm in my mid teens (older than 15), and I weigh 151lbs. I'm not a tall guy either, but I am dense. Most people my size are about 120-130. You also go into about no detail in terms of physical appearance (I have no idea what he really looks like other than the blanket terms you've given us). Your attire is a bit lacking as well, although that's not THAT important. You completely lack a personality description (I know it's optional, but it is strongly recommended), and the power section looks like something I'd cast magic missile at.

My brotha HWWB and I talked it over as well. I'll place what he said about the power here:

"His power also needs to be expounded upon: it says he can both create shadows and also that he's not capable of creating shadows. His power seems to be something of a blank check: we're not clear on what the parameters of his ability really are, and some of it seems somewhat open to interpretation (for example, being able to control the beings within the darkness, of which we know little. His weaknesses, given his powerful and versatile abilities (teleportation, blinding his enemies, creating shields, weaponizing darkness) seem somewhat lackluster: his weaknesses should be proportionate to his strengths. What does being in sync with the darkness entail? How does the darkness corrupt him, is it sentient? Having a weakness but saying that his shadows can overpower light is somewhat confusing as well, because it doesn't seem like much of a weakness. With a power as strong as his, he should need some more severe drawbacks: fatigue and exhaustion are some pretty common go-tos for powers, but you can be more creative. Given his white eyes, perhaps he has a rather severe vision impairment as a result of using his power? Regardless, it all needs to be fleshed out some more before we can accept it."
-He Who Walks Behind

I would also like to add to the fact this roleplay is interaction driven, and your character doesn't seem like the type to want to approach anyone, and those that he does he will creep out until they go away from fear of being stalked. This roleplay also will be focused on power training, and you have given nothing that could be interpreted as something he needs to practice. In essence, go into more detail in well... everything, and set the parameters up on the power a bit more. Go over what we pointed out a bit more, and we will reconsider. Hope we helped.

[Beebee2121]

Oh, yo. Right, about the posting thing. I was totally spacing out. I'll group 'em together from now on.

As for returning students and their relationships.... Are we gonna just hash it out right here, or should we take it to PMs with whom it may concern?

[Luminous Beings]

Also, friendly reminder, I am the one who knocks a co-GM as well.

[Jazzy]

Beebee2121 said
Oh, yo. Right, about the posting thing. I was totally spacing out. I'll group 'em together from now on.As for returning students and their relationships.... Are we gonna just hash it out right here, or should we take it to PMs with whom it may concern?

That's up to you. I made a list fthe returning students a few pages ago. Chris and Henry are bros after a PM conversation between me and Inferno. If you have any special plans that you dont want spoiled take it to the PM's, but otherwise it's up to you.

[Mixtape Ghost N]

And good work Jazz and HWWB. I agree with them.

Beebee2121 said
As for returning students and their relationships.... Are we gonna just hash it out right here, or should we take it to PMs with whom it may concern?

Well, in the name of simplicity I think we should all go ahead and write the relations based on personality and what we've seen of them so far, unless you have something special in mind, then throw it out there.

[Beebee2121]

Iiight. Well, since you guys are here, I'll tell you how I think mine relate to yours.

Vera's pretty friendly with everyone, but with the age gap between a lot of them, I see her being closer friends with Henry (might end up PMing you about that, actually. Since you mentioned it.), Morrison and Deborah. Dana, too. She may have even tried to heal Dana's legs and Morrison's eyes if they let her try. The thing is, she's not competitive, so she wouldn't engage in that kind of stuff with a lot of the sportier students, but she's more than happy to be a cheerleader.

I know she definitely doesn't like Valjean, but she wouldn't let him, or anyone, get under her skin. She's a master at walking away from bad situations.

Ethan's only been around for a year and he's shit at talking to people, so a lot of people he wouldn't really speak to unless they spoke to him first. However, I think he likes Tess. Like, a lot. He has a thing with transfolk, hence his thing with Vee. So, he would have made efforts to talk to her. Might he consider her a friend?

And a friend of Vee's is a friend of Ethan's at this point. He might be a little intimidated by most of them, but he can be a little more competitive than Vera.

[True Night]

Should be able to squeeze in a post before heading off to work. Graveyard shift, gotta love it.

[Mixtape Ghost N]

Those are some pretty interesting ideas. Personally, Dana, Deborah, and Theresa would think kindly of Vera and Ethan, since they're some of my nicer characters. And Theresa can consider Ethan a friend. Shannon probably wouldn't like them, because of she's super cynical and they're nice. Amanda would try to troll the hell out of them (Especially Ethan for his "tastes").

Add what your characters to your sheets, and I'll add what my characters think in return.