Brovo said
A sample I wrote on my phone at work. Was toying with the look of Idle the Moth Boss. I'd love some comments on it."The street grew quiet at the approach of the ever elegant moth, her eyes reflecting the purest beauty of the morning dew. Her figure was to die for, her fashion? Whooey boy, a few hundred men slaving in a mine could not afford the fine leather coat that draped around her back, the thick fur that covered it was unmistakable that of a mammel, and the feathers that protruded at the ends? Only the finest of eagle feathers would do for such a servant of death.Oh, and that is what she was, absolutely. Her reputation alone was enough to put fear and envy in the women around her. The emerald jewel that hung loosely from her neck was merely a sample of her vast collection of wealth, pilfered perfidiously from all manner of men and beast alike.All in all, they very model of avariciousness, contained only barely by the physical constraints of the world's pitiable rules... And only temporarily."
Oh hell that's great, Brovo. And on your phone. I want to see this finished.