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EXPERIMENT #324 HAS AWOKEN. SLIGHT ABNORMALTY DETECTED IN BRAIN WAVE PATTERN, TERMINATION UNNEEDED.

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Alright, I quite like your character, but for the time being, let's say the scientists suspect that the 'Bruce' is a mental manifestation and are ignorant to 'Bruce' supposedly dying an becoming a wraith since a wraith is kind of like a ghost. Keeping the supernatural a little toned down for the beginning.

Another thing is the weakness. Again, it's not really detrimental to yourself and in that time period of 'Bruce' controlling everything, he could pretty much wreck most things. So just add something like say he gets weak after a certain period of time or 'Bruce' is only good for a certain time period and usually is inactive. Just something to balance out his powers so that there is always a chance, even if it is unlikely, that he can be stopped if he goes on a rampage.
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Sure, I think a lab assistant would work, however, please know that you will mostly be overseeing the staff and research in general and will not have as much interaction with the test subjects themselves except for a few minor instances. Your dedication is to the director and your duty is to maintain logistics and so on. Any insubordination will not be tolerated.
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Experiment:

Name: Flippy (it's not his real name, but it's the only one people call him.)

Age: 16

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Personality (optional): Flippy can keep calm but can snap easily, and through in some emotional dis-functions and you got a train wreck with two legs.

History a.k.a insanity; Flippy when growing up was quite a violent child. When he was six he cause chaos in the classroom it started out small but grew and grew through out his life. His violent side subsided when he was nine, but he then need to get glasses he was then picked on in school for wearing glasses and always staying silent. Flippy was also diagnosed (but not fully confirmed) with multiple personality disorder it was due to the fact he would be normal one second then the next a complete monster example he was in class one day reading a book, but he than slammed the book down and started losing control of himself. Flippy at age ten was also diagnosed with a emotional disorder which most therapists believed to aid his multiple personality disorder. Flippy would always deny the fact there was more than one person inside his head (which was true) but everyone was convinced he had more than one in his head. At age twelve Flippy was finally moved to his first asylum only for close eyeing on what makes him lose control weeks after he was put in the asylum he tried to break out, but he was stopped and contained when he reached the court yard. Age fourteen Flippy now has been to more than ten different mental institutes/asylums his life has changed over that time period he hit breaking point when he was found on the brig of almost killing one of the nurses at his tenth asylum. the nurse was bringing him his dinner when Flippy was able to break out of his room and hold her hostage not wanting any of the doctors to keep him from escaping, after the nurse tried to escape Flippy caught her a second time and almost chocked her to death but stop before she lost her last breath. Flippy let her go and collapsed to the floor thinking about what he almost had done. Age sixteen Flippy was no where near better he was moved to one last place many doctors hope that it would be the place where he would finally be cured of his problem.

Power: Blood manipulation (Flippy is able to manipulate his own blood to form a solid object of his choice, he can also launch it at others than turn it into like a spike or something, he can also say if he has a puddle his own blood can use it as well.)

Weakness: Even though his ability can do a lot it also has a major weakness. First this ability only applies to his blood no one else's so it can be quite painful getting the blood out he can force it through his skin which you would imagine being quite painful, or he has to be bleeding somehow. Second he also could die from blood lost if he over does it like he can't just magically take all his blood out of him and still be able to move. Third he most of the times loses control of his emotions which apply a lot to his power, and also remember about his bad temper.

Random fact: He is mostly clam and under control when listening to music out of his headphones, and also loves to read books/anything to pass time.
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tenebrae16 said @Oscariotheguy Alright, I quite like your character, but for the time being, let's say the scientists suspect that the 'Bruce' is a mental manifestation and are ignorant to 'Bruce' supposedly dying an becoming a wraith since a wraith is kind of like a ghost. Keeping the supernatural a little toned down for the beginning.
Another thing is the weakness. Again, it's not really detrimental to yourself and in that time period of 'Bruce' controlling everything, he could pretty much wreck most things. So just add something like say he gets weak after a certain period of time or 'Bruce' is only good for a certain time period and usually is inactive. Just something to balance out his powers so that there is always a chance, even if it is unlikely, that he can be stopped if he goes on a rampage.


Alright, edited accordingly, thanks for the advice. :D
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I'm having a few problems with your post. Is it alright if you type up a paragraph of your role playing style. It can be about anything.
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Interested. I'd like to make a test subject and a scientist, or I can do either depending on what spots you have available.
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EXPERIMENT #774 HAS AWOKEN. VITAL SIGNS STABLE.

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Well as an answer to you and a note to all, places for experiments are rapidly dwindling, I'm willing to accept about 8 in total, more only if you're character is super interesting. If you wouldn't mind playing a scientist, that would be great if you could. We are current lacking staff.
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I can make a scientist then
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tenebrae16 said
@gamer5910I'm having a few problems with your post. Is it alright if you type up a paragraph of your role playing style. It can be about anything.


Can I just get an example of my style from a roleplay I was in?
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Sure. :)
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EXPERIMENT #774 HAS AWOKEN. VITAL SIGNS STABLE.


Thank you kindly :)
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(These came from an Rp I was doing on the minecraft forums it was a bioshock Rp I took to different post since most of mine were kinda short since the Rp was on the brig of dying at the time. Hopes this helps.)

1.)Riku appeared where Krystal tossed the bag of chips and caught them. He then opened them and started to eat them one by one "thanks" he said with chips in his mouth. After eating half the bag Riku teleported beside Krystal "Oh I just remembered something I wanted to ask a while ago."

2.)Riku then was wondering "Do I need to start taking these EVE things? Also how come I haven't needed them. My plasmid power seems alright and I haven't taken one of them." Riku told Krystal he then thought tried not to think about it, so he tried to think about his memories about him and his parents. Nothing came up he then tried harder, but nothing is still coming up he then started to tear up because of this.
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(These came from an Rp I was doing on the minecraft forums it was a bioshock Rp I took to different post since most of mine were kinda short since the Rp was on the brig of dying at the time. Hopes this helps.)

1.)Riku appeared where Krystal tossed the bag of chips and caught them. He then opened them and started to eat them one by one "thanks" he said with chips in his mouth. After eating half the bag Riku teleported beside Krystal "Oh I just remembered something I wanted to ask a while ago."

2.)Riku then was wondering "Do I need to start taking these EVE things? Also how come I haven't needed them. My plasmid power seems alright and I haven't taken one of them." Riku told Krystal he then thought tried not to think about it, so he tried to think about his memories about him and his parents. Nothing came up he then tried harder, but nothing is still coming up he then started to tear up because of this.
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I'm not going to join after all. Have a great rp!
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(These came from an Rp I was doing on the minecraft forums it was a bioshock Rp I took to different post since most of mine were kinda short since the Rp was on the brig of dying at the time. Hopes this helps.)1.)Riku appeared where Krystal tossed the bag of chips and caught them. He then opened them and started to eat them one by one "thanks" he said with chips in his mouth. After eating half the bag Riku teleported beside Krystal "Oh I just remembered something I wanted to ask a while ago."2.)Riku then was wondering "Do I need to start taking these EVE things? Also how come I haven't needed them. My plasmid power seems alright and I haven't taken one of them." Riku told Krystal he then thought tried not to think about it, so he tried to think about his memories about him and his parents. Nothing came up he then tried harder, but nothing is still coming up he then started to tear up because of this.


Umm, sorry, but I don't think there is a spot for you. Thank you for showing interest all the same.

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I'm not going to join after all. Have a great rp!


Aw, thanks for showing interest anyway. Have a good day.
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tenebrae16 said
Umm, sorry, but I don't think there is a spot for you. Thank you for showing interest all the same.Aw, thanks for showing interest anyway. Have a good day.


Well at least I had fun making the app anyway.... May I ask what I did wrong?
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Well, it's more of a quality problem. Certain phrases don't sit well and I think your style is just not suited for how I plan to have this rp planned out. We are rapidly filling up on places for experiments as well ><
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tenebrae16 said
Well, it's more of a quality problem. Certain phrases don't sit well and I think your style is just not suited for how I plan to have this rp planned out. We are rapidly filling up on places for experiments as well ><


Those posts were not my best but the other rp I have as a reference I have a character with the same name, so I didn't know if that would affect your decision. So mostly i'm asking if I could show one more example or I could at least get a chance to show my quality of rping is better than those two other examples.
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gamer5910 said
Those posts were not my best but the other rp I have as a reference I have a character with the same name, so I didn't know if that would affect your decision. So mostly i'm asking if I could show one more example or I could at least get a chance to show my quality of rping is better than those two other examples.


Alright then, go ahead.
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(This was from a death note Rp.)

Flippy was being driven when he saw something in the corner of his eye. He saw a car driving at high speed down the road towards the car he was in, he quickly told the driver to brace for impact. When the two cars collided Flippy was sent flying across the seat and hit the door, and he was knocked out, and when he woke up he saw that the driver was dead and that the car was upside down. He turned to the door he was next to and tried to kick it open. After his failed attempts to kick it open he grabbed the seat belt wrapped it around his fist and began punching the window. He could see a small crack forming from where he was punching, so Flippy went back to kicking the window. The window eventually busted open Flippy crawled out trying to mind the glass on the floor, so he began walking over to the side walk and sat down near a small store he turned around to read the sign in the window it read "Charlies Candy Store." Flippy just grinned and turned back around to look at the car wreck in front of him, after a while a ambulance arrived with two cop cars, and a firetruck. The ambulance picked Flippy started making its way to the hospital while waiting for the ambulance arrived Flippy asked one of the paramedics if he had any candy on him.

(I hope this was a better example than the others, I really like this Rp and want to join it.)
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