[OOC] Yu-Gi-Oh! Spirit

[UnendingEmpire]

Timeskipper said If anyone is interested to introduce their character to the story right now, or post something before the duel with the Shadow Duelist starts, please do ;-)Otherwise, me and UE will have to start the duel.

Dammit Skipper, didn't you see how hard I was trying to hide that? X3
lol, jokes aside, pretty much what he said.

[Jangel13]

is their any specific way I should introduce my character?

[Scarifar]

@Jangel not really.

Now all we need is Unending to make a GM post.

[Jangel13]

then whats going on? I cant post without some context to work with

[Timeskipper]

Well, so far let's just say that the tournament was interrupted because an unidentified criminal sneaked in the campus and killed a student via Shadow Duel. Akio (my PC), Michelle (Scarifar's PC) and Kimberly have tracked him down, and the duel is about to start.

[Jangel13]

So I should say I'm registering for the tournament or that I'm their to watch and I walked by to see you guys

[Timeskipper]

The tournament was posticipated by the Headmaster, so it's impossible to retcon Angelo into having participated.
If you want, you could have him walk by, or be attracted by the noise.

[Jangel13]

I hope its a good starter...

[UnendingEmpire]

*puts GM hat on*
I can safely say through all three sentences (which could have easily been seven or so, and yes, I counted them) that, for varying reasons, it sadly wasn't a good starting post. This is for three reasons, in order of severity:

1: Neither I nor Skipper ever gave you the green light to start posting.
2: How much of the IC did you actually read?
2.1: There was no commotion...yet. Kolman had just barely discovered the guy.
2.2: Never did we say the boy was dead.
2.3: The term "Shadow Duel" has never been directly mentioned or even implied at over the entire course of the IC.
3: <--- That's literally how many sentences your post had; three run-on sentences irk me even more than seven poorly-built ones.

You didn't come here from Free by any chance, did you? >.>

[Scarifar]

He probably has. I've seen similar posts on other rp's he's participated in. It's not pretty. And come to think of it, you're right, you never did give him the green light.

[Timeskipper]

I AM partly responsible for 2 and 2.1, as I may have explained myself badly (the commotion would be caused by the duel that is about to start). That said, it's pretty clear that you didn't read much of the IC (as the duel hadn't even started, the student was only found comatose, it's not yet clear whether he's dead or not, and the duel with the Shadow Duelist hasn't started yet...

[Jangel13]

UnendingEmpire said
*puts GM hat on*I can safely say through all three sentences (which could have easily been seven or so, and yes, I counted them) that, for varying reasons, it sadly a good starting post. This is for three reasons, in order of severity:1: Neither I nor Skipper ever gave you the green light to start posting.2: How much of the IC did you read?2.1: There was no commotion...yet. Kolman had just barely discovered the guy.2.2: Never did we say the boy was dead.2.3: The term "Shadow Duel" has never been directly mentioned or even implied at over the entire course of the IC.3: <--- That's literally how many sentences your post had; three run-on sentences irk me even more than seven poorly-built ones.You didn't come here from Free by any chance, did you? >.>

well to one im sorry I didn't realize that skipper didn't give me the green light to post yet.
2. ive read the ic post and understand the concept although to be honest I may have assumed to much when I heard it was an academy and it had slifer red, ra yellow and obelisk blue.
2.1. I can change that to say that I saw some people nearby instead if that will be better.
2.2. sorry again that I saw from someone elses post that a shadow duelist killed someone so I shouldn't assume I should know about it
2.3. same reason as 2.2.
3. knowing this means I can change it to make it better.

also who is free?

[Jangel13]

changed it, sorry about not making a good first impression.

[Shadolord]

Timeskipper said
I AM partly responsible for 2 and 2.1, as I may have explained myself badly (the commotion would be caused by the duel that is about to start). That said, it's pretty clear that you didn't read much of the IC (as the duel hadn't even started, the student was only found , it's not yet clear whether he's dead or not, and the duel with the Shadow Duelist hasn't started yet...

It isn't normal for people to see something and assume comatose. Seeing something like that makes me thing snapped neck or blow to the head. so his post may have been his characters interpretation.

[UnendingEmpire]

Jangel13 said changed it, sorry about not making a good first impression.

I can see the improvement in the updated post without even having to read it. Try to keep your grammar up to par with this update of yours.

And just keep in mind that my banhammer is now dusted off and freshly-polished. I almost used it, too; the ice you're on is quite thin.

[Jangel13]

Sigh* don't worry I got you, I'll make sure that the rest of my posts looks that good

[Timeskipper]

Waiting for posts, if you don't I'll probably go on with the duel :)

[Timeskipper]

Waiting for posts, if you don't I'll probably go on with the duel :)

[Jangel13]

Can't post. ..

[Jangel13]

Can't post. ..