[OOC] Flawed Perfection (A Drama Filled RP)

[TrulyAwakened]

Oh, I didn't even notice that. Yes can you? After that I'm not accepting anymore.

[Kitty]

I can't wait to startt :D

[Savi]

{Lorenzo Davis||18||Student}
{Bio}
He was born a bastard, his father not married to his mother, so he lived with his mother until his mother finally married the man that impregnanted her, or Faeya's father. This marriage was very recent, so he holds a lot of attributes that he had before the marriage and that will never change (such as his accent). Faeya and Lorenzo hate eachother and rarely communicate.
{Flaws}
Lorenzo is a huge player that uses women to rid him of his past sorrows. He holds a lot of pain and is always very depressed and angry, but hides it behind acting like an ass.
{Perfections}
Lorenzo is a huge teddy bear at heart and is very loyal behind his bad boy bravado. He actually is very protective over anyone in his family, sometimes begrudgingly. Once in a relationship, Lorenzo is almost like Prince charming, running by his motto "if she is more than good looks, then she should be treated as such."

[Apollosarcher]

Can't wait to start this!

[nerminator]

me too

[TrulyAwakened]

Accepted! If I can find my wirless keyboard I can finish the IC my pc is packed away and I'm using a PS4 -____-

[TrulyAwakened]

Okay IC's is open. I was gonna come up with some elaborate plot where everyone has problem with eachother but I'm fresh out of ideas now and just finished moving all day (and we are still not done)X ). But if the RP gets a little dry I will put all of my creative power together to make the plot a little more intersting. But for now I'm pooped. I'll be up for a little longer before I pass out from exhastion to answer questions or post to the IC etc.

[nerminator]

Ok I changed my posts a bit so a drug deal is happening in the High schools' cafeteria

[nerminator]

I kind of find it weird how nobody is noticing my character

[Apollosarcher]

I am waiting for another person, sorry.

[nerminator]

its ok bro

[Kitty]

Savi's two characters, Truly's character, and my character are in the hallway so we wouldn't even see him let alone react sorry.

[nerminator]

I have to get noticed somehow. also I am dealing with criminals. it makes sense that one would attempt to kill Grant especially since drugs cost a lot of cash

[TrulyAwakened]

Okay so what are you going to do now? I'm not trying to attack you but, I feel like you just pulled this since you wanted to get noticed, but now everyone has to drop what they are doing and developing so everything can be centered around one character...not okay. I'm not gonna argue about it, I will simply ask you to edit your post to something else more subtle. Maybe he draws the gun under the table? I don't know, but that is just a bit much. Especially since we just started the Rp.

[TrulyAwakened]

If everyone is fine with the post, then it stays at it is otherwise yeah, I would like you to change it.

[Savi]

I kinda have a problem with it, not gonna lie. I wasn't gonna say anything until someone else did.

[Kitty]

I do too, that's a bit too much...

[Kitty]

Umm nerminator. ... what the hell?! Sorry but I seriously dude...

[nerminator]

okay okay i'll change it

[TrulyAwakened]

Are you done?