[OOC] Hospital for the Unstable Liabilities

[The drunken Welshman]

Appearance:

Name: Lewis Morte

Age: 17

Unique Quality: In his sleep, he dies. His pulse flatlines and the symptons of death occur.

Weakness: He suffers from post trumatic event disorder where fragments of a past he has forgotten had brought down guilt and sorrow on him from a very young age. Which affects him today.

Also in his sleeps he experiences horrific nightmares that only help to break his bond with sanity.

Extras(Backstory from his PoV)
I can remember the nights, the nights when I was left alone. Alone, shaking in my cot as the doctors walked past us all, they would choose one and that person would be taken, the nurses would smile and say they were being brought home. I had asked why I could not go back.

I remember nothing of home, nothing but tears, smoke and death. Prehaps it had been a dream, no that was before.

I remember my turn, I remember screaning and grabbing the bedpost. I remember the cool fiery needle being injected and my body going slack. The rest was just haze, I was tired, so very tired. So I slept.

I remember feeling a feeling a hand touch my wrist, I remember the gruff person comment "No pulse." and continue.

I remember smoke, fire and noise, noise of lives being cut short.

I remember coughing, sitting up and looking around, the man saw me get up and spoke to no one around him, I remember it confusing me. People all crowded me, I remember how they offered me water and told me not to move. Then once I was seen as okay, I remember the black gloved hand grip my arm.

Now I am locked in here, I find company with all the things around me, They say if It never happened. I would be normal, I would be home.

All I have to keep me company is mere pieces of card with sketchs of designs on them. The doctor said that they would help me focus, so he taugh me to play with them. He won, he always won but it was for the time it lasted, enjoyable. Then he deemed me as a lost cause. Deviant. A freak.

But I'm perfectly normal, there is nothing wrong with me.

I want to go home.

[The drunken Welshman]

*A gruff voice

[a00000000000]

Alright, everything but your Quality/Weaknesses are good. Te Unique Qualities are supposed to be something beneficial to you, something that could also be deemed dangerous by the public/governemnt (one reason they built the facility- to protect the population and to make them unfearful of the freaks), this seems like a Weak quality but the Weak qualities are atleast beneficial in some way, but not as beneficial as Medium/OP. Your quality seemingly turns you into a corpse, and only when your sleeping. And you have one medium and one weak weakness. The reason one of them is Medium is becuase having a weakness that day-by-day makes you go insane is a medium weakness. The other is alright as a Weak weakness.

TL;DR- You have a quality that is almost completely useless, a weak-ish weakness and a medium weakness.

You'll need to make some edits, but until you do that, denied

[Ace of Jacks]

Are we moving on soon? I think for the most part we're all just waiting

[a00000000000]

Alright, I'll makea post signling for all to go inside

[a00000000000]

Also, the guards are going to be OP as fuck, meaning that they still have the mostly unbreakable power-dimming handcuffs, armor that reduces effectiveness of qualities upon impact, guns/batons that dim powers, tasers that are normal but are still tasers and other things that will make escpaing or rebelling very difficult.

Very, very, very difficult indeed.

[The drunken Welshman]

Sure, I will change him so that he has a positive ability, Also the death sleep will be mutated and the small errors I noticed will be fixed.

[The drunken Welshman]

Appearance:

Name: Lewis Morte

Age: 17

Unique Quality: He can with touch of his left hand on someone elses flesh, take part of someones lifeforce, this has the result of making him more energetic and alert but also the person becomes more tired.

Weakness: He suffers from post trumatic event disorder where fragments of a past he has forgotten had brought down guilt and sorrow on him from a very young age. Which affects him today. This means that he distrusts himself so often will wear a white glove on his left hand.

Also in his sleeps he increasingly often experiences horrific livid nightmares that only help to break his bond with sanity as he can not tell the difference between the real world and his nightmares.

Along when he sleeps, he will basically die, his pulse will flatline and he will be almost oblivious to outside stimuli. This has risks as people will asume him dead and could preform burial rights on him, like Cremation or simple burying him, leading to him suffocating when he awakes. He is not aware of this feature unless someone tells him however.

Extras(Backstory from his PoV)
I can remember the nights, the nights when I was left alone. Alone, shaking in my cot as the doctors walked past us all, they would choose one and that person would be taken, the nurses would smile and say they were being brought home. I had asked why I could not go back.

I remember nothing of home, nothing but tears, smoke and death. Prehaps it had been a dream, no that was before.

I remember my turn, I remember screaning and grabbing the bedpost. I remember the cool fiery needle being injected and my body going slack. The rest was just haze, I was tired, so very tired. So I slept.

I remember feeling feeling a hand touch my wrist, I remember the gruff voice comment "No pulse." and walk away.

I remember smoke, fire and noise, noise of lives being cut short.

I remember coughing, sitting up and looking around, the man saw me get up and spoke to no one around him, I remember it confusing me. People all crowded me, I remember how they offered me water and told me not to move. Then once I was seen as okay, I remember the black gloved hand grip my arm.

Now I am locked in here, I find company with all the things around me, They say if It never happened. I would be normal, I would be home.

All I have to keep me company is mere pieces of card with sketchs of designs on them. The doctor said that they would help me focus, so he taugh me to play with them. He won, he always won but it was for the time it lasted, enjoyable. Then he deemed me as a lost cause. Deviant. A freak.

But I'm perfectly normal, there is nothing wrong with me.

I want to go home.

[a00000000000]

Accepted, now. I will add you to the first post, do you want to already be a member of the prison or do you want to have been in the van with the Shishi and Yolanda, being taken to the Hospital?

[The drunken Welshman]

He is already in.

[Ace of Jacks]

Boboclown89 said
Also, the guards are going to be OP as fuck, meaning that they still have the mostly unbreakable power-dimming handcuffs, armor that reduces effectiveness of qualities upon impact, guns/batons that dim powers, tasers that are normal but are still tasers and other things that will make escpaing or rebelling very difficult.Very, very, very difficult indeed.

This is definitely an Alcatraz prison simulator XD Will there even be opportunities for us to use our abilities?

I'd write up a post but I'm pretty tired. Or should be. Iunno. I'm just gonna fight the insomnia and force myself to sleep. Maybe in the morning I'll be up to post n_n

[a00000000000]

Ace of Jacks said
This is definitely an Alcatraz prison simulator XD Will there even be opportunities for us to use our abilities?I'd write up a post but I'm pretty tired. Or should be. Iunno. I'm just gonna fight the insomnia and force myself to sleep. Maybe in the morning I'll be up to post n_n

Most likely
Maybe
If you beg

You're gonna have to smarter than just your abilties if you want to escape my Hospital :)

[Ace of Jacks]

I figured as much, but we made these awesome characters with weird powers and all. Either way it'll be...interesting to see if we can manage to escape

[a00000000000]

Don't ya worry, they won't always be stuck with the power-dulls, like if they manage to think up an escape planand avoid getting their handcuffs placed on them or if they go up to the way higher levels of the Hospital (nearing the roof and top story)

Also, I'm still changing things in this RP as we go, so I might change what areas they don't make you wear the handcuffs, like maybe the lunch room, bathroom, etc
And you don't wear them in your cells, so if you're needingto escape that could help.

[a00000000000]

bump

I'll be PMing everyone who hasn't responded

[Kyrianei]

I'm respectfully bowing out of this RP for now.

Replace me with someone else, I don't care but Luciana is my character and is not to be used.

Thank you anyway for letting me join, and hit me up if you have a good RP you want me to perhaps join.

~ Kyri

[AllOurPrettySongs]

I am cool for any and all changes, @Boboclown89 (:

[Song Book]

You know how it feels when you have the last post, and its been a while. Did i say something wrong? I got that evil feeling i hate being the last to post on a rp.

[Ace of Jacks]

Oh i know how you feel XD But it's not you :3 Me, personally, have just been stressed and also didn't know what to post. One thing did deter me though, not from your post, but it's fine.

[a00000000000]

I have some updates that are going to be affecting this RP in a major way. There's going to bea restart to this RP, due to the size of these changes.

As far as I know, Kyrainei is going to be in the restart

We've been PMing a bit, she is also now Co-GM and we have worked to make a few changes. I'll post these changes later.