[OOC] Yu-Gi-Oh! Ω [OMEGA]

[The Red Seelie]

UnendingEmpire said
No problem :)As for Black Shark, I wasn't really even aware it existed at all, and just sort of assumed it was another old-timey Normal Monster I'd never seen before. Though if that's the case, you should also add his name to Man-Eating Licorice's effect, since it affects "Man-Eating" monsters on the field.EDIT: @Charak: ...Silver Fang a "Fang" monster :| so are Flyfang and Naturia Spiderfang

yep yep and i knew that
XD because i wanted to create a natruia + this thing
and i like flyfang
XD i literally did that on purpose
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and Rethel im fixing it.

[Scarifar]

Meanwhile my Demon Lords are being ignored.

[Rethel34]

Would Flyfang technically be considered part of the archetype? I know capitalization typically matters.

Hmm . . . let me look into this

EDIT: Honestly, they look good to me, Scar. If Empire agrees I'll add them to the first post

[The Red Seelie]

Fixed

[Scarifar]

Still needs "Beast-type" instead of "beast" in that Xyz requirement. Also, is that a period instead of a comma in the name?

[The Red Seelie]

Rethel34 said
Would Flyfang technically be considered part of the archetype? I know capitalization typically matters.Hmm . . . let me look into thisEDIT: Honestly, they look good to me, Scar. If Empire agrees I'll add them to the first post

probably not but empire pointed it out so i was just going with it

[The Red Seelie]

Scarifar said
Still needs "Beast-type" instead of "beast" in that Xyz requirement. Also, is that a period instead of a comma in the name?

yes it was i didn't notcied that (fixed)
also I used beast as a placeholder XD here we go

[Rethel34]

フォング - The "Fang" part of "Silver Fang"
ファング - The "fang" part of "Naturia Spiderfang" and "Flyfang"

Japanese is different and capitalization is different. I don't think they're the same archetype. However, "Silver Fang" can be involved with the rest of the "Fang" monsters.

[The Red Seelie]

Rethel34 said
フォング - The "Fang" part of "Silver Fang"ファング - The "fang" part of "Naturia Spiderfang" and "Flyfang"Japanese is different and capitalization is different. I don't think they're the same archetype. However, "Silver Fang" can be involved with the rest of the "Fang" monsters.

HELL YEA! XD
my favorite normal monster XD

rethal can u check Charaks deck to see if anything needs changing

[UnendingEmpire]

Rethel34 said EDIT: Honestly, they look good to me, Scar. If Empire agrees I'll add them to the first post

If Rethel's cool with them, I'm not one to debate that \(=w=)/

[Rethel34]

Alright. Time to check some stuff and do some more updates. *whistles*

I really need to get a life XD

[The Red Seelie]

can someone check my first characters deck aka ME i think theirs some spelling errors in it but other wise i can't see anything wrong

[Scarifar]

Well, uh, I don't even know where to begin with your errors, Charak. Most of them are just grammar and punctuation mistakes, so they can be easily remedied. I'd explain further but I am on a phone right now and can't do much on it.

[Rethel34]

Most of this is going to be nitpicking over OGG.

Monsters

"Aurora Fang" - I think, to keep this from being too powerful, its ATK and DEF should be reduced by about 200-300 points each. Also, make it just a Spell Card or just a Trap Card that needs to be revealed. Otherwise you easily could have a direct attack every turn. Also, make sure that "Fang" in its name has a capital "F".

"Dire Fang Pack" - Good card. Just make sure that the card name mentioned in the effect has quotation marks around it.

"Fang Guardian" - Again, quotation marks. Put them things around "Fang" in the effect. Also, should be "If you control 1 other face-up 'Fang' monster . . ." This is because it counts itself if you don't have the word "other" in there.

"Flaming Dire Fang" - Make sure your "Fangs" have capital "F's" in both the name and the effect. The way the effect is right now, it's talking about "Flyfang" and "Naturia Spiderfang".

"Watcher of the Fang" - With those points it should probably be Level 4. Also, "1500 or less ATK", not "1500 or less attack". Also, you should probably include where it's Special Summoning from.

Spells

"Enlightenment of the Fang" - Needs da capital "F's".

"Fear of the Fang" - Firstly, this needs an amount way lower than 500. That puts its effect at potentially cutting 2500 ATK off of any opponent's monster. WAY too much. Needs to be nerfed. Go with 300. Still a little steep, but much more balanced than 500. Then you can probably figure out what else is wrong with it by looking at it and some of what I've already criticized.

"Full Moon Rises" - Altogether too powerful. Your "Fang" monsters gain 500 ATK, can't be destroyed, and it rewards you when your opponent finally gets around that pain in the arse. Think about some of the cards from the opponent's perspective.

"Once in a Blue Moon" - "beast" → "Beast-Type monster". You should also only be able to activate this once per turn.

"Spirit of the Fang" - Cap the "F" in the eff. Also, the card being destroyed when the monster is destroyed is given. It's an Equip Spell. Also, make it when it's removed from the field, the equipped monster is destroyed. That way no one uses "Mist Valley Falcon" to bounce the thing.

Traps and Extra Deck are next.

[The Red Seelie]

Rethel quickly ban the use of EARTHBOUND IMMORTALS IN SPEED DUALS because they can't die and they get rid of their main weakness of requiring a field spell!

[Rethel34]

Traps: Typical capitalization stuff. Then too many of these are Counter Traps, which are the highest Spell Speed there is, and can only be trumped by another Counter Trap. In fact, none of these has to be a Counter Trap. You also seem to make a lot of attack negation cards.

Xyz Monsters: "Beast-Type monsters", not "beast monsters". "Sacred White Fang" needs to have it specified whether you're increasing ATK or DEF.

[Rethel34]

Earthbound Immortals don't rise again for another who knows how long. They've been unavailable from the start.

EDIT: Oh, and the proper term is Turbo Duel, or if you're Japanese, Riding Duel. Not Speed Duel.

[The Red Seelie]

Rethel34 said
Earthbound Immortals don't rise again for another who knows how long. They've been unavailable from the start.EDIT: Oh, and the proper term is Turbo Duel, or if you're Japanese, Riding Duel. Not Speed Duel.

oh whoops XD i was writing in the heat of the moment while looking at every card ever

[The Red Seelie]

Rethel34 said
Traps: Typical capitalization stuff. Then too many of these are Counter Traps, which are the highest Spell Speed there is, and can only be trumped by another Counter Trap. In fact, none of these has to be a Counter Trap. You also seem to make a lot of attack negation cards.Xyz Monsters: "Beast-Type monsters", not "beast monsters". "Sacred White Fang" needs to have it specified whether you're increasing ATK or DEF.

k i ll get to work editing

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well Thing is Rosea's deck will have pendulum and everyone will die...
everyone will die...
Everyone will _ "halt"
huh who the hell are you
"Im here to nerf your entire deck its a travesty of justice"
okay...
Well their goes everyone dying like i originally thought XD

[Rethel34]

Now . . . I need to upload a couple more cards and make at least one of my characters today. And is no one interested in being a hero?