Dancing Eagle, When writing a "Role Play" think like you are writing a book or maybe a paper for school. It is all about describing the setting, the characters, their behavior, their feelings and then the actions, which come slow and almost forced. If you just write the dialogue without descriptions it is nothing. In fact, I don't Role Play, I am collaborating on a Work of Fiction. I am more of an Author than a Gamer. That is what I was getting at in the PM I sent you. Think like a Writer and you will do well.