[OOC] Cherry Blossoms Under the Silver Sky

[Genkai]

I may need to call it a night and finish up in the morning. I am too tired and my Naruto muse seems to have wandered off somewhere. :/ My post feels disjointed and I'm already three paragraphs in so I may need to do some rewriting when I'm less tired.

[SoleAccord]

No problem dude, it's not going anywhere. :3

[Genkai]

I'll probably be on for the next 30 mins but my brain is just mush for some reason. Luckily I don't have much going on tomorrow so I should be on after I go to the farmer's market in the morning, I will be out tomorrow night celebrating my mom's birthday but tomorrow afternoon should be productive. I hope. ^^;

[SoleAccord]

I hope so <3 and happy birthday to your mom dude, enjoy dat cake!

And party it up!

[Genkai]

We make peach pie. Mmmmm it's always bomb. :3

I'm so broke, I wish I could do more. Maybe I should write her a poem. Bitches love poems. XD

[SoleAccord]

Pie? Fuck, that better be a good ass pie cause a birthday without cake ain't a birthday for me xD

Lol I'm broke as fuck too dude, I hope this school shit pays off for me X.X but not talking about that right now. Make her a haiku!

"O,mother,
Happiest of days,
Birthing you,
Resulted in me,
It's snowing on Mt. Fuji."

[Genkai]

Not a bad haiku expect I'm adopted and she can't have kids so that might not work. XD

But she enjoyed last night, got flowers from my brothers and chocolate from me and concert tickets from my dad.

Now it's time to read my post and see what I can salvage. I don't like stopping in middle of a post I'm working on but we shall see.

[SoleAccord]

No it still works. SHE was birthed, and it resulted in you being adopted so now she's your mother. IT WORKS!

Awesome birthday by the sounds.

I don't either but I have to do it sometimes :C

[Genkai]

She was adopted too haha. But birthed somewhere by someone yeah. It's a stretch but it could work.

I think I know what I keep doing wrong. I read a bit, reply to that, then read and reply, I should just be replying to the whole instead of trying to follow too closely with posts and their context. I'll be done with it soon I hope. ^^

[SoleAccord]

EXACTLY!

I actually did that with yours too in Symphony, only I needed to make it flow a lot more. The Mako one was huge because this is a milestone in their relationship and any wrong move or description of an action could ruin it. You should try to take in the entire scene tho :O but that's just my means of replying.

[Genkai]

I am about done with my Sakura post, I feel better about it now. I know looking at it as a whole from my post, as opposed to trying to connect posts together, is probably the better route. I know looking at the post/scene as a whole is gonna yield better stuff than worrying about making sure every little thing has been mentioned or touched upon. ^^ It's hard to see trees from the forest sometimes, you're right.

[SoleAccord]

I am? Because I don't even know what I said, I don't even know what you're saying! I'm so confused right now! BUT YAAAAY ITS COMING!

[Genkai]

Anyway, got you a post finally. ^^;

[SoleAccord]

I shot you a text btw.

I loved it, especially the part where Sakura was just ogling him by the window XD should the mistaken couple thing just be a gag for a while?

[Genkai]

It probably will be, might be even what makes them start to think a little. ^^;

[SoleAccord]

Suddenly I conjure the idea that lovers eat half-off and Kakashi just ROLLS WITH IT BECAUSE HE'S CHEAP! xD

[Genkai]

Ha!! Seriously, you better put that in your reply because that would be funny as hell and she'd then decide "Ya know dessert sounds really good to me...since my lovely boyfriend is SO amazing."

[SoleAccord]

Kakashi inches his way back to Sakura and asks, "We couldn't possibly allow people to be mistaken about our relationship status in order to get a cheaper meal ...could we?" then Sakura tries to reason with him that its not their fault they're confused and it would be rude to destroy their view of the situation xD

[Genkai]

Of course, it's so logical it has to work! "Tsunade gave our mission a strict budget, how great would it be to come back and have money to spare? Konoha is strapped, it's our duty to go along with it."

[SoleAccord]

Lol yeah and then suddenly, "Engaged couples get seventy five percent off, and newlyweds get everything free!" but it's too impossible to sell that. I think they'd get away with the boyfriend and girlfriend thing. Boy this will be fun. Should have that guy totally be implying things like, "Make sure you two keep it down tonight, okay?" -eyebrow waggle-