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Well, I see what you mean. I think I'll go with what Wraith suggested if that's okay with you?


Yeah, that's fine! Honestly I preferred Wraith's suggestion, I was just trying to give you options.
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This is what I have so far, the backstory and sample always give me trouble so I will get to those later. Otherwise tell me what you think.


| NAME(S):|
Aiden Lawe

| ALIAS(ES):|
Speedster (Name given by his mother)

| D.O.B.:|
10-12-1988

| AGE:|
26

| SEX:|
Male

| SEXUALITY:|
Heterosexual

| APPEARANCE:|
Aiden is a thin and lithe young man standing around six feet with an impressive wingspan (both arms and legs). His cold steely blue eyes and arrogant smirk prove the fact that he has an attitude and arrogance a mile long. Aiden keeps his hair short and generally slicked back.

| H-CLASS:|
Mercury

| ABILITIES: |
Aiden’s first and foremost talent is speed. Although he has never accurately tested the limits of his abilities he is certain that he can break the sound barrier with little or no effort (at least before the outbreak). Along with his ungodly speed (or rather because of it) Aiden can move fast enough to leave a temporary image of himself behind him.

| LIMITATIONS: |
On top of other things, Aiden is human and humans get tired. While it does take him longer to become exhausted he will eventually wear himself down. Because he doesn’t have access to materials that don’t wear down Aiden is frequently going through pairs of clothes and shoes so he has to either carry around spares in his backpack or go home.

| WEAKNESSES: |
As stated earlier Aiden can and will succumb to exhaustion if he runs for too long. Also because of his speed if he were to trip and fall the damage would be equivalent to a car wreck at that speed without the car. While using his speed for hand to hand combat, while the blow will be devastating it will most likely hurt him as well. If Aiden’s speed and momentum are broken it takes him a minute to recover due to his body ‘catching up’ with his exhaustion.

| APPLICATIONS: |
The obvious application is that he can run REALLY REALLY fast. In light of that he is very to hit unless targeted by some other Hype ability. Offensively, using his speed and momentum, he can add extra power behind his punches and kicks. While this is not nearly as effective as someone with an Atlas H-type, it is more than enough to feel like getting hit by a car. From a ranged perspective anything that he throw (that he can pick up within reason) can turn into a highspeed projectile.
Defensively…he just runs REALLY REALLY fast.

| SKILLS: |
Collegiate Level Track Athlete - Because of his natural affinity for running it’s only natural that Aiden followed track as his pass time.
Silver Tongued - While some don’t consider this a real skill Aiden has made a living on making other believe his every word.
Downtown Brawler- By no means is he a Shaolin master kung-fu artist, he is known to be able to fight his way out of a situation.
Smart-Ass- Not entirely different from his Sliver Tongue, Aiden relishes in tormenting the minds of those around him, not in an evil way…just to piss everyone off.


| EQUIPMENT: |
1x Backpack (clothes, shoes, cell phone, money…anything that he might need without being too heavy
1x Pair of Aviator Goggles (He says they look cooler)
What he carries depends on what he thinks he will need and will fit in his backpack without slowing him down.

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| NOTES: |


Alright while we don't have too much to say on the sheet in its current state we do have one issue.

If Aiden has never tested his powers how can he be so sure he can break the sound barrier? Two, breaking the sound barrier at a street level would be rather destructive especially in close quarters. Weaknesses and limitations are good, we like the fact that is speed is almost as harmful to him as it is to anyone he targets. We're a little iffy on the brawling skill but we can't say too much about it as the backstory is currently empty and could justify it.
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Oh the Downtown Brawler was just a catchy name I came up with to say that he uses speed to fight. After seeing it pointed out that does sound weird, that should be a simple fix. Other than those things?
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Oh the Downtown Brawler was just a catchy name I came up with to say that he uses speed to fight. After seeing it pointed out that does sound weird, that should be a simple fix. Other than those things?


Other than that there's nothing else we have until the sheet is finished.
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Cool...I will keep working on it.
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<Snipped quote by Mr Allen J>

Yeah, that's fine! Honestly I preferred Wraith's suggestion, I was just trying to give you options.


Yeah, that's cool. I'll try to get a post up later. Maybe I'll have June swing around that scene.
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@Lord Wraith That last IC post of yours just broke my brain drain. I'll get my own post up today!
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@DJAtomika Glad to hear it that was my intention!
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Hm, nope still in that corner.
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@t2wave Oh dang I forgot to add the SHIFT part. Will do that in the morning.
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@t2wave Added to my post, hopefully that should give you a nice opening. And for your benefit, here's a brief sheet for Winter.






| NAME: |
Director Winter Caspian

| ALIAS(ES): |
N/A

| SEX: |
F​

| H-CLASS: |
Neptune​

| ABILITIES: |
Connected to elemental powers such as earth or sand manipulation, thus falling into the Neptune-Class, Winter can create, shape and manipulate glass. Glass is defined as an amorphous (non-crystalline) solid material that exhibits a glass transition, which is the reversible transition in amorphous materials (or in amorphous regions within semicrystalline materials) from a hard and relatively brittle state into a molten or rubber-like state. Winter can be a deadly foe if necessary due the wide variety of glass available especially in urban environments. Without glass around, Winter can create it provided some of the basic materials are available such as sand.

Most commonly glass refers to soda-lime glass, but it includes also fulgurite and obsidian, allowing Winter a wide range of materials to manipulate to her will.​

| HISTORY: |
"I will not rest until we can be free to demonstrate our abilities the same as you and your kin!"

The current Director for the Department of Hyperhuman Equality, Logistics and Protection, Winter Caspian is a force to be reckoned with. A rare case of a student attending P.R.C.U. before transitioning to another school, Winter did just that completing the collegiate courses as Pacific Royal before attending and graduating with an Honour Bachelors of Law from Queen's University. Following this, she returned to P.R.C.U. and completed a fast track program earning a diploma in Social Relations.

Winter started her career working in H.E.L.P.'s Equality and Rights Division before eventually advancing to the position of Director in 2013. Aggressive with a take no prisoners attitude, Winter has sat the Prime Minister himself down to fight for equal rights to all Hyperhumans. A feat no previous Director had managed before, leaving Winter with quite the infamous reputation among both the organization and Canada's political system.​
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I just realised something...

...if Sam's penchant is making the things that aren't supposed to go wrong...go wrong...

...He's the anthropomorphic representation of Murphy's Law.

...and I should've named him Murphy instead of Sam so I could pull off cheesy lines like

'You just broke the law.'

'Whose?'

'Mine.'

*bad luck barry*
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@Lord Wraith Posted in the IC. Would like opinion if I wrote well, or if you find any problems with the way I write Sam.
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I had an hour to kill so I decided to make a quick post....

... Unfortunately I wasted that hour and rushed to vomit a post.
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@Lord Wraith Posted in the IC. Would like opinion if I wrote well, or if you find any problems with the way I write Sam.


I personally saw no problems with it, over all I thought it was a rather enjoyable post. Introduced us to both Sam, his personality and his abilities rather well.

I had an hour to kill so I decided to make a quick post....

... Unfortunately I wasted that hour and rushed to vomit a post.


It wasn't even bad! Now to get fellow biker Zeke to the scene haha
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@Lord Wraith Now, what else to do with Sam. XD
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As an odd question...what would you guys say would be the max speed he should ideally be able to hit?
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@Archangel89 Hm....subsonic, probably. Maybe try looking for, like, a vehicle that goes as fast as you want him to?
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Well I've been thinking about how to fix that and I was thinking of having him go up to the speed of sound. For him to do that would be him running with everything that he has or something to that effect
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We have so many bikers, holy crap.

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