I have 2 good characters. Are they acceptable?
Name: Lonmil Kaspay
Race: Rock Gnome
Age: 73
Gender: Male
Appearance: Lonmil appears to be your typical gnome; short, brown hair, big nose, the works.
Clothing/Armor: Lonmil wears dark brown leather armor with a hood, gloves and soft boots.
Weapons: Lonmil has a bow with a quiver of arrows, 4 normal daggers, an enchanted dagger and a pair of gnomish shortswords, which would look like daggers in the hands of humans.
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Skills/Abilities: Lonmil can pick pockets, open locks, find and remove traps, move silently, hide in shadows, detect noise, climb walls, track, observe, tumble, disguise himself, hunt, survive in the underdark for a short period of time, gather info and is very proficient with his shortbow, short blades and dual weapon style of fighting.
Magic: Lonmil can see 60 feet in complete darkness due to his infravision.
Backstory: Lonmil had grown up in a small cave system with his parents until he was 66. Inside and outside the caves was their town, a small farming community that rarely, if ever, saw visitors. While exploring the caves to see if they could expand the town, they needed a couple new houses for some of the families that were expanding their members, Lonmil and his friends had accidentally went too far. On their way back, they had gotten lost, which only made it worse when they ran into a monster from the underdark. One of Lonmil's friends, Hidvur, decided she would distract the monstrous beast while the others escaped. That day, Lonmil lost the only woman he ever cared about. He left home a week later, living off the land throughout his year long travel until he was caught stealing food from a school that had just been formed. One of the boys who had caught him was a half-elf mage. Needless to say, Lonmil found the prospect of a 13 year old half-elf mage allied with a Thief's School hilarious. He began teasing him, they fought and, after agreeing to join the school, Lonmil and the boy, who went by his last name, Gil, became like brothers.
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Name: Debaen Gil
Race: Half-Elf
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Appearance: Gil stands a couple inches short of five and a half feet with a lighter weight for his athletic build. His skin is a light brown with a golden tint, looking to be sun-kissed. His hair is dark brown with strands of golden blond. He has a scar on his right cheek, the only mark ever left on him.
Clothing/Armor: Gil wears a dark blue, hooded robe, dark brown bracers on his arms and legs.
Weapons: Gil's only weapons are 7 daggers, 1 of which is enchanted, and a staff. He doesn't use them often.
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Skills/Abilities: Gil can pick pockets, open locks, find and remove traps, move silently, hide in shadows, detect noise, climb walls, recognize languages he's seen before, even if he doesn't understand them, observe, appraise, tumble, cut gems, loot, disguise himself, forge items, artifacts and documents, ride most land animals and is proficient with his daggers, staff and his dual weapon fighting style.
Magic: Gil can cast the following spells;
Blur: When under this spell, the caster would become harder to hit as they did not appear to have a solid form any more. Attacks made against a blurred caster by someone who couldn't see it ignored this spell, of course, as they couldn't see the effect.
Burning Hands: The spell momentarily engulfed the wizard's hands in a burst of magical flames and then expelled them rapidly into an adjacent area of roughly twenty-five feet in diameter.
Comprehend Languages: With this spell the caster could understand a text that was otherwise incomprehensible to him or her. The caster would see or touch the object or creature with the text in order to cast the spell. Despite being able to read the text the caster would not be able to write or speak the language of the text. The inability to read did not affect the ability to use the spell and learn the meaning of the affected text. The caster can also understand the spoken words of the language.
Feather Fall: After this spell is cast, the caster and any nearby he wishes are slowed into their descent until they touch the ground.
Flameproof: When cast, this spell fully protected the recipient from normal fires and offered limited protection from magical ones. The recipient became completely immune to normal fire, lava, etc. Breath weapons, or other fire-related attacks, from creatures and fire-based spells did not cause as much harm to the recipient. This spell could not be combined with any other spell or magical item that granted resistance to fire. When cast upon an inanimate object, the spell made the object completely immune to all forms of fire both normal and magical.
Invisibility: This spell allows the caster to become invisible for 5 minutes. The spell would falter if the caster spoke or attacked anyone.
Magic Missile: The caster fires a number (for his level Gil fires 2) of missiles of energy that hit the target, though do not do much damage.
Shield: A wall of energy separates the caster and his attacker, preventing them from taking any damage.
Spider Climb: The caster's hands and feet are covered in a sticky goo that would allow them to climb on walls and ceilings like a spider.
Stoneskin: This spell would turn the caster's skin to stone, preventing any damage from being taken.
Backstory: Gil grew up with his parents until he was 12. At that age, his home was attacked by drow elves. Being the only one to survive, Gil spent the next few months of his life wandering the forest. He joined a Thief's School, finding it to be a safe place to learn to survive. A few months after he joined, a gnome had been caught by one of his classmates and pinned to the wall. Gil approached with a spell ready, only to be teased by the gnome. It took a fight for Gil and the gnome, whom he learned was named Lonmil, to respect each other. Over time, Gil began seeing the gnome as a brother.
LADIES AND GENTAL MEN MAY I INTGRODUCE YOU TO ROBERT !!!! ps the sword is on his back. will probably get added later on. but i just wanted to show it of.
