[OOC] Black Bullet: 20 years later

[MarshiestMallow]

Anyway, your character is good.

And I think I didn't explain it right in the op

Twenty years they have lived in relative peace. There was time before that that was similar to the manga.

[DELETED7282737]

T.T
Half of my posts (not half as in 5 out of 10 posts but as in half of the text in one post) are just ignored, non-existent
No-one cares
T.T

@Little_ninja

awwwww

-huggles and snuggles ninja while stroking the back of ninjas head-

[Jangel13]

Name: Angelo Ortega

Age: 13

Gender: male

Abilities/gifts/powers: modeled after the snake Angelo has improved leg strength allowing him advanced speed and dexterity like a cobra's strike. When he switches to his other persona he will become intimidating and radiate an aura of danger that the lowest of ranks will shy away from

weapon: the blade is actually made from Varanium and unlike a regular scythe the blade itself can go into the staff itself making it a normal staff. their is a button on the staff that allows the blade to extend and become its full scythe form

Looks: this is what he will normally look like when he is normal and generally bored and sluggish
and this is when his bipolar disorder kicks in and he starts to laugh manically like "joker" at his enemies before he kills them with a smile

History: Angelo has a bipolar disorder he was born with that makes him switch between two different persona's his regular one which is just him being board and unproductive and believing everything isn't important. His other self reveals itself during battle or stressful situation that makes him go, to put simply, insane. laughing as he kills and an aura surrounding him that makes weak people tremble and run in terror. his whole life was quick he was born, and quickly abandoned by himself and as a result of living off whatever he can find he showed signs of his other self coming through. He quickly looked for help to control himself before he went crazy completely and now he has learned to bring it out on command and suppress it along with his slow death making sure to take two shots the one that will keep him from turning into a monster and a mild sedative to keep him from killing others in his path, as a result he has earned the nickname "two face reaper"
personality: normally he is simply board and is helpful to others but rarely smiles to others. Angelo tries to be a good person but always falls short of doing a good deed by some circumstance. he is always considerate of others and he knows to try and be nice but it just doesn't matter to him most of the time. His other self is a dark and evil person who reviles in killing and blood who believes that they are the sinners who must die laughing all the while. Sometimes he is to violent and must be knocked out before he can cause harm to innocents but that has happened less and less with time.

Additional info: Modeled after the black mamba Angelo has its fast striking power

black mamba, the fastest striking snake

(let me know if I need work. I haven't gotten far into black bullet to know if im doing something wrong.)

[MarshiestMallow]

IT looks good To me, but I'm actually going to let ninja see if there's anything wrong, while I re read the manga

[Jangel13]

Well now I'm scared

[FujiwaraPhoenix]

...
Uh...
It's a light novel, as were many other series, Caits...
SAO was an LN, Index was an LN, Black Bullet was an LN...
Heck, even Toradora and Zero no Tsukaima were LNs. If you want source material, go for those.

[MarshiestMallow]

I just want to re read it.

I know the sources

[Little_ninja]

@Caits
The manga is barely translated at all, you won't even get much out of it

Also, it's very unclear that you meant that there has been more time than 20 years since the gastrea virus
From the sounds of it, it's only been 20 years

it has since been 20 years since the outbreak

@Caits

Next is that even if you take the 10 years of the original in to account
10+20 = 30 years, yet the person who took care of them for a few years was 31 years old?

Also, I wasn't saying that they were taken care of for the whole time, I was saying that the person who took care of them would be over 20 years old and yet a cursed child

Also, it seems I'm getting work pushed on me by the GM, when I ain't supposed to be a Co-GM here lol

@Jangel13
This is just a preference, but spacing please!
Enters help make things more readable, looks like a damn text blog, can't distinguish the different sections

Um... there are a few things I'd like to say, but ...
Well, mostly, what's the model?
In other words, what animal would Angelo be based on?
How do you connect that to the scythe or bipolar? (Usually these things are connected, whether it's personality, the way they attack, or another thing that they do)

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awwwww

-huggles and snuggles ninja while stroking the back of ninjas head-

@liferusher

*Starts feeling comforted*

[MarshiestMallow]

What I've found is translated. So far.

I need to edit the op.

Even at 14, the person would be just thirty years old now according to my calculations

[Jangel13]

@Little_ninja

??? I'm connected to an animal?

[Little_ninja]

What I've found is translated. So far.

I need to edit the op.

Even at 14, the person would be just thirty years old now according to my calculations

@Caits

How many chapters?
Also, didn't notice you changed it from 18 to 16

@Little_ninja

??? I'm connected to an animal?

@Jangel13

I'm making an assumption that your character is a cursed child here, which, it most likely is
All Cursed Children have a model they are based off (Or an animal they are based off), where gives rise to a variation in abilities or personality and intellect

[Jangel13]

@Little_ninja

in all honesty I was going for a snake. the scythe would be my fang, my increased speed would mean the speed of the strike, and the killer aura would be what you notice in a snake when its poised to strike. The bipolar disorder is just the personality he developed from living in the street

[Little_ninja]

I am saying you should mention it, since it is not clear at all

Edit:
I'm gonna need to do a few edits, to my character history
Things don't line up now that it has been 30 years

[Jangel13]

I put it in the powers section

[DELETED7282737]

Can we almost start? im looking forward to it!

[Jangel13]

Is my character approved?

[Jangel13]

Can I move him?

[MarshiestMallow]

yes.

I'm happy to start, but six PM my time after my first exam. so in about 27 hours

[DELETED7282737]

yes.

I'm happy to start, but six PM my time after my first exam. so in about 27 hours

@Caits

Thats fine ^-^

[MarshiestMallow]

I've half written the starter but I'm so
Tired I keep on falling asleep