@ElitestpotatoI'll keep your suggestion in mind.
@DarkReconEarth has been uninhabitable for a long time. If you're trying to circumvent the age restriction with the background I believe you are going with (coughReicough), then I'll note that she can look 16 at most. I'll assume you want to PM me about the notable death that is required for your character; otherwise I'll choose one for you. As for the Framewerk, I recommend checking out what others have come up with. My suggestion would be a Framewerk focused on field repairs.
@VKAllenI'm going to assume you're describing a historic event with the mention of Earth. While I like seeing flavored text like the one in the background section, it doesn't include any background itself. You could describe the world she comes from, what she did there, if she was a victim of a Cruxi attack, the reason she applied for the Framewerk Project, that kind of stuff.
You will either have to remove the leg boosters or replace the shoulder cannons with kinetic weapons. The Armor Type section needs to mention if the armor is Light, Medium, Heavy, or something in-between. And considering the amount of firepower you described and the speed you are implying, it's going to be either Light-Medium or Medium depending on how you choose with my earlier demand; former if you choose booster removal, and the latter if you choose kinetic weapons.
EDIT: The age needs to be between 14-16.
@redbaron1234I'm going to trust you guys to be fair with this. However, I will intervene if someone calls foul play, and if enough people request it, I can set up a posting order based on your sheets. Basically it's going to go like the RP; poster A does something, possibly targeting poster B, poster B reacts and does something, possibly attacking back or retreating, poster C can intervene and so on.
@knighthawkThe mock battle will only involve the Framewerk pilots facing off against each other.