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VOTING THREAD AND CONVERSATION THREAD ALL AT THE SAME TIME!!


Voting deadline is July 20th at Midnight!


Let's get right to it, shall we? We have ten wonderful entries and miraculously, all fit into a single admin post! But only if I don't drone on for very long, so let's get right to a couple of new features.

1. If you didn't specify 'anonymous,' I checked with your previous contest entry (when available) and applied that request here. If I either did include, or did not include, your name in the way you want -- PM me directly, and I'll fix it post-haste.

2. I've broken out the poetry entries with a line break. That's not to exclude anybody from anything -- I'm simply trying to help out the critique writers, who sometimes express difficulty jumping from prose to poetry. These are all in the same voting pool.

(edit) 2.5 -- I've also now added an 'additional entries' hider, for late entries or special cases. I think we might bring that back again in the future -- if you've missed the deadline but you still want to write something, we'll include it there. No prizes, but you can still be a part of the contest.

3. We're combining the conversation and vote threads, which will make it super-hard to track down and count up all the votes -- unless we're smart about it. So! To cast your vote, use the 'Ping' tool:

I @vote for entry 11, 'RPG is the real star!'
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This will ping our vote-count account, and we'll be able to tally it up quickly. We're also gonna search the thread, to make sure we don't miss any -- but if you see someone who tries to vote, and maybe doesn't get the ping working, feel free to quote them and ping @vote yourself. As long as we can see it and read it, we'll count it. Exact wording or phrasing doesn't matter -- just make it clear what you're voting for.

That's it! If I keep talking I'll run out of space -- thanks for participating, and enjoy the rest of the contest!




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Woo woo! Can't wait to read all of these!
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Huzzah
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I'm going to try to finish my summary of what I intended to submit, as I promised @RomanAria in the previous thread. What have I learned so far by writing this summary? I should just write the summary first, then try to write the entry. If I eventually run out of time, I just submit what I have plus the summary starting from what I did not get to yet. >.<
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@Dedonus Aww. You're so sweet. Thank you for taking the effort to do this. And I would love to read what you had already written, if you wouldn't mind sharing it, anyway.
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@Dedonus Aww. You're so sweet. Thank you for taking the effort to do this. And I would love to read what you had already written, if you wouldn't mind sharing it, anyway.


Thanks. The text below is not complete. I will update as I get time to do so.

As I promised @RomanAria in the contest thread for RPGC #3, here is the summary of what I had intended to do with my entry (but never got time to complete). Once I get home, I will post what I had before I threw up the white flag. I'm going to be a little light on the summary at the beginning because I actually have text written for that part.



My main intent was to try to use the constellation "bonus" category as the foundation of my entry. I intended my entry to one piece of a fiction piece of work that would explain either how the constellations came to be or why they are called by their respective names. The constellation was going to be Ketus (the sea monster that Perseus slayed). Besides the Perseus myth reference, I was also going to be heavily inspired by Hans Christian Andersen's Little Mermaid (with the plot seeming similar to the beginning of this fairy tale, but deviating later on). This would have been the base of entry. Also, the setting is at the end of the "Homeric" or "Mythic" age of Greece.

The beginning of my piece (besides some etiological digression at the beginning that I had fun writing ) follows a similar plot as Andersen's LM: 6 daughters who, when each one comes of age, are allowed to come to the surface to explore the surface world. Some things the daughters see include the Pyramids of Giza, along with a digression about the difference between the Greek and Egyptian sphinx, and there is a scene where mortal sailors confuse one of the "mermaids" (I call them Kymatai - see the explanation when I post what I had as of last night) with a siren and th e"mermaids" laugh about it because the humans must be very stupid to mix up "mermaids" (half-fish) with sirens (half-bird).

The final daughter has a similar experience as her counterpart in Andersen's LM: encountering a ship (a Trireme in my case) and becomes infatuated with a young man aboard the ship. Then a sudden storm comes and wrecks the ship, tossing its occupants into the see. The youngest daughter saves her "crush" from suffering a watery grave and drags him ashore. After watching over the unconscious man overnight, in the morning, she hides back in the sea when th eman regains his consciousness. I planned on mixing the original scene from the Andersen fairy tale (a princess from another kingdom finding her) with Odysseus' encounter with Nausicaa in the Odyssey. The final daughter throws a rock at the girl who finds the "prince", but no one sees the "mermaid" do it.

I was also planning on incorporating the whole "soul" plot/motif that was present in Andersen's fairy tale. However, since the "mermaids" were 'related' to the Nereids (i.e. Sea Nymphs), they would be immortal biologically speaking instead of turning into sea foam after 300 years. The youngest daughter would therefore be faced with a dilimma simiilar to that of Achilles: live a long life and have no fame or live a short life (or experience death of loved ones, as mortals are, as the name hints at, do not live forever) but be remembered forever. The youngest daughter uses the exemplum of Thetis (mother of Achilles) to motivate herself.

Next, the youngest daughter sets out to weave a tapestry that depicts the story of Perseus (and possibly the story of Peleus and Thetis if time permitted), as the first is relevant to the constellation aspect, while the latter is relevant because of the marriage between a mortal and immortal. She does this so that she can "beat out" the mortal girl who found the young "prince" on the beach (in Andersen's fairy tale, the prince does in fact is married to the girl who finds him on the beach). After working on it for two years (perfectionist!), she finally undertook the journey for a second time.

I will update this as soon as I can.
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*snip*


If you like, I'll edit a link to your post here after the entry bank.... in fact, that seems like it would be a good option to work into all our contests -- in case people miss the deadline, but still want to write something and maybe get some review action, they can post a late story. I mean for the sake of fairness, I don't think that could be eligible for prizes, but I see no reason why we can't include late stuff in other ways.
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If you like, I'll edit a link to your post here after the entry bank.... in fact, that seems like it would be a good option to work into all our contests -- in case people miss the deadline, but still want to write something and maybe get some review action, they can post a late story. I mean for the sake of fairness, I don't think that could be eligible for prizes, but I see no reason why we can't include late stuff in other ways.

Sounds fine by me. If I wanted a prize, I would have to first turn in an entry on time next time.
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Read 'em all. Got a quality batch of entries here, reviews shall be in the coming days. Faster than the last time!
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No reviews have been written yet, just humble ol' me putting up the list and getting the coding down to make this easier when I get back to it. Okay. Cool.

REVIEW CHECKLIST: I've reviewed the poems. Prose will be next.

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POETRY

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We've got a smaller batch this time, but it's a good one!
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Sorry to anyone who eagerly awaits my reviews—(exactly nobody, I presume)—but I'm a busy kid. I've been writing about one a day, starting yesterday, so I hope to finish them around the end of this coming week.

The good thing about this, though, is that I'm spending more time on each entry's review.

also spoiler alert, i liked the first two
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Hey folks! I'm settling in to write my reviews, but also expecting to be interrupted at some point -- but also I realized a short while ago that I forgot to put a voting deadline into the OP, and then just now I realized that I forgot to do anything at all about that. DROPPING THE BALL!

Voting deadline is midnight on the 20th of July.
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I may as well go ahead now then.

My @vote just has to go to Per Aspera, Ad Astra.
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Well, I'm going to actually vote this time!

@vote Mine goes to The Meta Universe.
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@vote Grab Keyguy's vote for The Meta Universe and my vote for A Tale of Two Soldiers
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Grab Keyguy's vote for The Meta Universe


I knew what I was doing! I was just waiting to edit my post for dramatic effect! It was gonna be a all like "Ooooh, will he vote or not?"

It was going to be a metaphor for the Cold War.
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