[OOC] Planet of Shadows

[Flynn]

Here are some images I made a long time ago for this universe. Ignore the names, they are old versions.

[6slyboy6]

Okay what?Like how does grievous and a shadow come in the picture?Like what??I get the ship that you made in spore.I beleive I have a fine taste for actual pictures.I will post a few that could make gaps filled in.But really what are the two pictures I said match in here?

[6slyboy6]

Also like the mags are actually Enite containers that make bullets right?Or if that could be it would be amazing.

[Flynn]

The shadow thing is a Tenox and the Grievous and the worm is a Bundin. The grievous is his suit then. (I mainly just redraw stuff. Not really good at drawing stuff from the loose hand)
Hm, no bullets aren't enites. That would be hella expensive xD Let's just go with Thermal Clips

[6slyboy6]

If my clip only need energy to recharge as it is Enite based thaf is efficent.Also I still dont get what you want with thegriveous stuff so dont bither cause I feel like I wont get it XD

[6slyboy6]

More like hiw they come in place.We are paying planet of sha......oooooooo -.-

[Flynn]

Ever played with bionicles? The Bundin are basically Rakshi.

[6slyboy6]

I had Bionecles.I have all the first series still.And the second series spiders.And like 1 from the actual stuff you said.I get that but as I said the picture just put itself together.Whether what do these savages have to do with our story is a defferent question.

[6slyboy6]

Also did you ran outta idea for IC :P

[Flynn]

No, they are one of the major races. So they take a big part in the galaxy :P

[6slyboy6]

Ok well love yout IC but you have to wait cause I cant write from phone

[6slyboy6]

I so wanna wave to that alien from the top of the Argo >.>

[6slyboy6]

I can't keep expressing that we are only at the 8th IC post and I am enjoying the shit out of this RP.Althought I can barely wait for the next post as I am so interested,I also think that anticipation makes the final product better

[6slyboy6]

Flynn good to see your writing again.I am excited as ever.But I have a question.We have a Nation RP hanging in the air as we need one more person.I thoguht that you would be perfect.You are resourceful,devoted,and you are great at writing.Are you interested?I will tell you more of you want

[6slyboy6]

Hily shit,Haleluyah!!
After spending literally 10 minutes thinking about the difference between my,and your writing,I have realized it.It is thar you actually write in present.Actually my lines that are in the present also seem more fluid.I just feel ashamed that it took me so long to realise.I guess I now know the way to get rid of my shitty writing style.I knew it would do good for my book if I RP'd for a while.Thankfully I stumbled into you Flynn.

[Flynn]

I find writing in the present tense more difficult, but it just gives of a better feeling then past tense. I recently switched from past to present, so for me it's also kinda new. Glad you figured it out though. XD

PS: Sorry, I keep forgetting to check this thread. >.<

[6slyboy6]

No problem.I myself find it hard too but as you said,it gives a smoother feeling to the actions.You are using it well tho,so no worries.

[6slyboy6]

I have problems being able to write and didn't have any net yesterday.I will write when I can,mostly chunks of a few hours so please reply as fast as you can and you might just cach me.

[6slyboy6]

@FlynnYou catched a good time to post.I am currently having some free time between activities.God I feel like my text is always shittier than yours.Also I always react rather than act XD

[Flynn]

Well, come up with some situations then. :P Create problems! Besides, I did have to react to your anomaly thing, didn't I? ;)