[OOC] Heros' of Olympus -Secret Behind the Eyes

[Dragon princess]

The story of a demigod when fate isn't always in your favor but its not that it matters its the fun and memeories you get that make your time worth it. Even when your friends with a very strange demigod that washed up on shore.

[Dragon princess]

Her Theme song

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ci3ugUmoUpE

[tsukune]

Thread added to my sub list. :)

Anyway, how's progress with reworking your character?

[Dragon princess]

It's coming a long it should be done within a few hours my first post was changed slightly.

[tsukune]

On med for these couple of days and feeling rather disoriented due to the side effects, so replies will be much slower than usual.

Normally I reserve the first CS post for link listing to the respective characters as we add on to the cast - this is so that I give my partners the freedom to go back and update their CS after an event has happened in IC.

The half-dragon form looks good - I'm totally fine with sticking to that and no need for all those full dragon stuffs. You might want to also cut down the number of powers she possesses - I don't mind her being an artificial hybrid-demigod of more than one god/goddess but I would like you to still put a cap to make sure she's not too powerful for a demigod. You can remove them all first and add on to the list after some development in the IC, just have 1 to 2 that she can use on a more frequent basis while the other abilities are only applicable if she performs some sort of ritual or whatever to "borrow" a bit of power from the individual gods for a limited duration. What do you think?

[Dragon princess]

Okay that works I am on it. I'll update powers as time goes on

[Dragon princess]

Oh question could a power be based on her emotion?

[tsukune]

Do you mean something like Starfire from Teen Titans? For example, feelings of joy/anger amplifies her power while insecurity would cut off access to those powers?

[Dragon princess]

Yes or like a certain emotion triggers apower like if she gets spooked Greek fire appears in her hands.

[tsukune]

What's with the obsession over Greek fire? XD

Anyway, if I remember correctly in Riordan's books it's a type of weapon, not a mystical fire.

[Dragon princess]

Yes but what comes out of the weapon is a sort of flame or destructive fire which she can harness. Its in her necklace the same stuff in the weapon is in her necklace, but she can take the mystical flame and tak it out of the necklace and use it.

But its hard to do.

But more like if she got scared so cou;d use raw dark magic (It wouldn't kill but mostly stun or scare someone off)

Her antrual ability is probally she is more agile and more durable then most demigods.

[tsukune]

Ok, some form of raw dark magic I can understand, but the ability to summon a cursed weapon? If you mean the necklace is a Greek fire (which is a weapon, not a mystical flame - I have to emphasize this) in disguise I'm cool with that, but to have Greek fire appearing on her hands out of nowhere or even controlling its flame is stretching my tolerance level for Mary Sue-ish characters too far. I believe that she has no whatsoever relationship with Hephaestus, who is the god of fire.

[tsukune]

I'm sorry if I sound kinda demanding with regards to your character - I'm just trying to help you make your character more realistic, not nitpicking on your OC. I hope you don't have hard feelings on me?

[Dragon princess]

True but there are flames down in Hades, Mostly her main powers of fire come from the phoenix flames she has. Phoenix counting as a monster

Just because she has powers doesn't mean she knows how to use them and she is very clusy and most likely slipping on wet ground XC

Don't worry there are a lot of different things that she doesn't do or understand how to do because she doesn't understand things. Like why they need a weapon or why they have to hurt a poor monster XC YOU ASSHOLES!!!!

[Dragon princess]

oKay, switched up my powers there is no more Greek fire ,

[Dragon princess]

I don't have hard feelings I like helping out my partners

[tsukune]

Yes, phoenix does count as a mythical creature, but it cannot use nor control Greek fire (which is a weapon not just fire) - depending on sources it's can be normal fire or other kinds of mystical fire (certainly not Greek fire). Again, I have to repeat this that since Celuis isn't related to Hephaestus in any way, she should not have any power over any kind of fire.

Even for Hades he doesn't have any power over fire - earth and metal yes, not fire.

You might want to read up for more details about the world of Percy Jackson and Greek Mythology as depicted in the book series on the wikia. Hope it helps you to better understand the lore.

EDIT: Eh like I already told you before, I cannot keep up with speed-posting. See what happens when you do that? I end up repeating myself in my replies... /sweatdrops

[Dragon princess]

Okay well my three powers I am starting with has no elemental powers no fire nothing just natural powers.

[tsukune]

Thumbs up for the change. Telepathic control over hellhounds or Underworld creatures is perfectly fine, as she's a "princess" of the Underworld. ;) Enhanced agility and endurance are also ok, but make sure she isn't near-invincible and still can be killed with swords or arrow shots like any other demigods, just that she won't die immediately. (I mean she's still a human not a freaking robot, yeah?)

I'll repost my character's sheet later, so that I can update it freely when the IC progresses. I don't have the power to edit your posts, haha.

[Dragon princess]

Yeah she can be hit and stabbed and all but takes more to keep her down like she can take more hits then most demigods.