[OOC] Shadow of the Skyline

[The Narrator]

@OnlyThePie I did understand that I just want to know if you understand my character completely?
His age has as I said no merit whatsoever.

[Wade Wilson]

We're waiting on Wade and Dreaming for their characters, and then we should be good to go!

@OnlyThePie

I'm doing my character now, expect it up in a couple of mins ;)

[The Narrator]

@OnlyThePie But well if you want I'm just gonna make him 18 then.

[Wade Wilson]

Scrap that, I'll get it up tomorrow.

[FantasyChic]

@bluetommy2

Can I just say how adorable your icon is? It's so fricken' adorable :D

[Bluetommy]

@FantasyChic Thanks man, Skelebros for life.

[Athinar]

@bluetommy2 I love Undertale.

[Bluetommy]

@Athinar Schweet!

GOTY 2015 No competition

[Athinar]

@bluetommy2Yup!

[OnlyThePie]

Looks great Dreaming, go ahead and move it over

Just some thoughts for what I might do with Jim, not all of these will happen, maybe none of them:
Probably going to be some kind of meeting with Viole over expanding Jim's territory
Was Jim the one who killed Lucia's husband?
Lance and Jim butt heads once one of them gets too close?
Sam's new gang poses a threat to The Wires?

What does everyone think? I'm gonna start the IC post in the next day or so.

[Wade Wilson]

@OnlyThePie Finished my CS.

Cole Erickson

"Scared?"

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Name: Cole Erickson (Alias: Fear)

Age: 21

Alignment/Position: Chaotic Evil, Gun for Hire

Preferred Dialogue Color: A52A2A

Height: 5'10"

Weight: 163 lbs

Appearance: Cole is tall for his age, but it isn't often realised as he's usually leaning over his opponent, staring sadistically into their eyes. His face often is a mix of twisted insanity and slyness, his wide eyes glaring at his opposer - only a few minutes staring at his sick expression is enough to make a man cower in fear.

General Apparel: When not on the job, Cole will be seen in black trousers, with a chain hanging from his right hip. His shirts include short-sleeved or vest like shirts, in a a variety of different designs that reflect his mischievous side. He also sometimes wears hoodies, and these are mainly black or grey.

When on the job, however, it's an entirely different story. He sports trousers similar to his casual ones, and wears a long, black trenchcoat and silver chain necklace. These are accompanied by a grey waistcoat and white shirt. If in battle, he will remove his trenchcoat, leaving only his chain and waistcoat, and often rolls the sleeves of his shirt up, revealing part of his dragon tattoo.

Lifestyle Notes: Cole once had a wife and two children before he became the man he is today.

Location: You'll usually find Cole lurking around the alleys of the Industrial District.

Afflictions: Whoever hires him for an assassination.

Likes: Torturing others, messing with people's minds, murdering people and inflicting fear on others.

Dislikes: People taller than him, the police, the authorities, heroes and germs.

Fears: ... *cough cough*

Superhuman Ability and Description: Cole's powers match perfectly with his alias & personality. He has the ability to inflict fear upon his opponents, and even make them attack their teammates out of fear that they'd be betrayed by them. A higher rate of this power is that, if enough fear is inflicted, he has the chance to even turn somebody insane, or make them commit suicide. Another one of the abilities he has gained is that he has incredibly fast reaction time. He could probably catch a bullet if he concentrated hard enough.
Equipment
Cole carries a dart gun, and takes it with him everywhere. The ammunition for it is:

• 17x Sleep Darts
  • Causes the victim to sleep for 10 - 30 minutes
• 9x Poison Darts
  • Causes the victim to die within 3 minutes
• 10x Hallucination Darts
  • Causes the victim to hallucinate their worst nightmare

He also carries fifteen throwing knifes, five with the sleep effect, five with the poison effect and five with the hallucination effect.
Strengths

• A tough egg to crack.
• Very agile and capable of outrunning most people.
• Can take down three people at a time.
• Incredible reaction time.
• Able to pinpoint the weaknesses in a person if he gets to know them.

Weaknesses

• If tired out enough, his combat is incredibly weak.
• Even though he has the capacity to, he cannot catch bullets.
• Though able to withstand mental torture, physical torture overpowers him after thirty minutes.
• If his memories are restored, he would more than likely commit suicide.
• His violent nature can get the best of him.

History: Cole Joseph Erickson once had the perfect life, surprisingly. He was a physicist, had a loving wife, two children (with one on the way), and a $3,000 check in the post addressed to him due to his work on a life changing serum. The serum, once completed, was going to be able to cure the mentally ill. The first few days of testing hadn't been all successful, however, and they lost three subjects in total. It only got worse.

On the sixth day, something tragic happened. The test subject broke free of his restraints and stabbed Cole with his own serum. This caused his brain to be disfigured, and it sent him clinically insane and made him incredibly violent. However, the serum also drained his memory of his past life, leaving him no clue of who he was or why he was there. His family had gone down to the labs immediately after they'd heard what happened, but Cole himself broke free of the guards' grip, and murdered everyone there, including his family. He escaped shortly after, and was pursued by the police for a week.

That week went by, and the police didn't manage to find him (despite a few close calls). He was lost on the streets, alone, with no clue of what to do or who he was. However, an anonymous group found him, and taught him how to utilize his new powers that he had gained. They turned him into a criminal; a murderer. He went off and became a gun-for-hire, torturing the innocent and gambling with the guilty.

[OnlyThePie]

@Wade Wilson A few things, mostly nitpicking:
-a 21 year old no way had a wife and two kids, and was a physicist, he's just too young
-30 minutes is pretty exact for a torture limit
-The ability to take down three people at once is impressive, but lets try to keep this not a 100% thing.

Otherwise, it's good, if you fix those things, add it to the list!

[Wade Wilson]

@Wade Wilson A few things, mostly nitpicking:
-a 21 year old no way had a wife and two kids, and was a physicist, he's just too young
-30 minutes is pretty exact for a torture limit
-The ability to take down three people at once is impressive, but lets try to keep this not a 100% thing.

Otherwise, it's good, if you fix those things, add it to the list!

@OnlyThePie

Got it.

[Wade Wilson]

Cole Erickson

"Scared?"

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Name: Cole Erickson (Alias: Fear)

Age: 34

Alignment/Position: Chaotic Evil, Gun for Hire

Preferred Dialogue Color: A52A2A

Height: 5'11"

Weight: 163 lbs

Appearance: Cole is tall for his age, but it isn't often realised as he's usually leaning over his opponent, staring sadistically into their eyes. His face often is a mix of twisted insanity and slyness, his wide eyes glaring at his opposer - only a few minutes staring at his sick expression is enough to make a man cower in fear.

General Apparel: When not on the job, Cole will be seen in black trousers, with a chain hanging from his right hip. His shirts include short-sleeved or vest like shirts, in a a variety of different designs that reflect his mischievous side. He also sometimes wears hoodies, and these are mainly black or grey.

When on the job, however, it's an entirely different story. He sports trousers similar to his casual ones, and wears a long, black trenchcoat and silver chain necklace. These are accompanied by a grey waistcoat and white shirt. If in battle, he will remove his trenchcoat, leaving only his chain and waistcoat, and often rolls the sleeves of his shirt up, revealing part of his dragon tattoo.

Lifestyle Notes: Cole once had a wife and two children before he became the man he is today.

Location: You'll usually find Cole lurking around the alleys of the Industrial District.

Afflictions: Whoever hires him for an assassination.

Likes: Torturing others, messing with people's minds, murdering people and inflicting fear on others.

Dislikes: People taller than him, the police, the authorities, heroes and germs.

Fears: ... *cough cough*

Superhuman Ability and Description: Cole's powers match perfectly with his alias & personality. He has the ability to inflict fear upon his opponents, and even make them attack their teammates out of fear that they'd be betrayed by them. A higher rate of this power is that, if enough fear is inflicted, he has the chance to even turn somebody insane, or make them commit suicide. Another one of the abilities he has gained is that he has incredibly fast reaction time. He could probably catch a bullet if he concentrated hard enough.
Equipment
Cole carries a dart gun, and takes it with him everywhere. The ammunition for it is:

• 17x Sleep Darts
  • Causes the victim to sleep for 10 - 30 minutes
• 9x Poison Darts
  
  
  • Causes the victim to die within 3 minutes
• 10x Hallucination Darts
  
  
  • Causes the victim to hallucinate their worst nightmare

He also carries fifteen throwing knifes, five with the sleep effect, five with the poison effect and five with the hallucination effect.
Strengths

• A tough egg to crack.
• Very agile and capable of outrunning most people.
• Very slim chance that he can take down three people at a time.
• Incredible reaction time.
• Able to pinpoint the weaknesses in a person if he gets to know them.

Weaknesses

• If tired out enough, his combat is incredibly weak.
• Even though he has the capacity to, he cannot catch bullets.
• Able to withstand mental torture.
• If his memories are restored, he would more than likely commit suicide.
• His violent nature can get the best of him.

History: Cole Joseph Erickson once had the perfect life, surprisingly. He was a physicist, had a loving wife, two children (with one on the way), and a $3,000 check in the post addressed to him due to his work on a life changing serum. The serum, once completed, was going to be able to cure the mentally ill. The first few days of testing hadn't been all successful, however, and they lost three subjects in total. It only got worse.

On the sixth day, something tragic happened. The test subject broke free of his restraints and stabbed Cole with his own serum. This caused his brain to be disfigured, and it sent him clinically insane and made him incredibly violent. However, the serum also drained his memory of his past life, leaving him no clue of who he was or why he was there. His family had gone down to the labs immediately after they'd heard what happened, but Cole himself broke free of the guards' grip, and murdered everyone there, including his family. He escaped shortly after, and was pursued by the police for a week.

That week went by, and the police didn't manage to find him (despite a few close calls). He was lost on the streets, alone, with no clue of what to do or who he was. However, an anonymous group found him, and taught him how to utilize his new powers that he had gained. They turned him into a criminal; a murderer. He went off and became a gun-for-hire, torturing the innocent and gambling with the guilty.

Hope I interpreted it in the right way, just wanna post the edited version here before I post it in the Characters Tab.

[OnlyThePie]

Much better, maybe change the combat one to "Capable of taking town two guys at once, possibly three" it just sounds better. No need to post it in OOC again, you're good.

[Athinar]

I've noticed that everyone in the criminal underground wears a trenchcoat. Where's my drug dealer who wears polo shirts and khakis, dammit!

Edit: Aleksandr, Violetta and Samuel are the only differences, and they all look like Abercrombie and Fitch models.

[Bluetommy]

@Athinar When you're the don, what else are ya gonna be wearing.

[OnlyThePie]

@Athinar Trench Coats are good rainwear!

[Athinar]

@bluetommy2 Suits, tuxedos, etc.

@OnlyThePieSo's a hoodie. :| A hoodie also covers your face in rain.

[The Narrator]

I am hyped!
Just wanted to say that