@CallMeChaotixSure, I can color it, but probably not until a week from now... Holidays and travel and such.
It's perfectly fine to criticize the drawing! As long as you're not being mean about it, which you weren't.
Yeah I didn't mean for the smile to look so wicked, it was supposed to be playful and it just got a little messed up when I inked it XD
Does he look too old? I don't see it... Maybe the line-shading looks too much like wrinkles. Or maybe it's just the weird smile again.
For the anime thing, well, you should have let me know you wanted that. I actually would enjoy giving it another try, but note that I don't normally draw anime style, so I have no idea how it'll turn out. Also, it might take a while. The holiday thing again. X)