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@KentsukanThere is always time for character interaction.

I wouldn't say we'll have a lot of it before we get to the "meat" of the story. But yes. I expect some chatter in the OOC about how characters will interact because most everyone (but the Romulan) would have spent at least a few days on the ship already getting used to the crew. Some of you might even decide your characters knew each other before your current assignment.


Hopefully none of them met Catherine in court. :P That would be awkward.
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Vash is near done; just gotta put up a sample post now. Let me know if you want any changes with what's already there. =)
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Vash is near done; just gotta put up a sample post now. Let me know if you want any changes with what's already there. =)


I don't know why, but I get the sense that she and Catherine will bicker.

I like it! :D
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So far I like it, especially how you justified it. Just two things I noticed right off hand.

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Rank/Position: Captain/Commander of the USS Orion.

The rank is Commander and the position is Captain. Not the other way around. (And that's just me being a little nitpicky.)

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The Vulcan woman would leave Artos with the newborn child, and disappear just as quickly as she'd come.


I've read this sentence a few times. And no matter that I know what it's supposed to say, I keep reading it as the Vulcan woman takes the newborn with her. But that's just me.

I look forward to your finished CS.
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This oddness creates a distinct advantage in combat operations: few living Starfleet captains show Vashara's resourcefulness, and none may match her ability to think outside the box in a fight.


Vashara: The Dominion thinks they have us beat just because our shield systems are offline, eh? Well, lets show them we our greatest defense is our offense."

Poxx: Captain I strongly advise y-

Vashara: transfer all auxiliary power to the covariant phaser pulse.

Poxx: captain

Vashara: PREPARE FOR EVASIVE ACTION

Poxx: captain pls
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So far I like it, especially how you justified it. Just two things I noticed right off hand.

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The rank is Commander and the position is Captain. Not the other way around. (And that's just me being a little nitpicky.)

#2 <Snipped quote by Ruby>

I've read this sentence a few times. And no matter that I know what it's supposed to say, I keep reading it as the Vulcan woman takes the newborn with her. But that's just me.

I look forward to your finished CS.


Fixed. I'll try to work on the post now, may not be that big.

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I don't know why, but I get the sense that she and Catherine will bicker.

I like it! :D


Oh, yeah. Vash is not the typical breed of CO. She will doubtlessly do/say/plot something that Catherine won't like that much. lol
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Fixed. I'll try to work on the post now, may not be that big.


Doesn't have to be an essay or even a novella. Just enough so I can gauge skill (Which isn't that much of a worry because I know your skill level, but fair is fair)
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Vashara: The Dominion thinks they have us beat just because our shield systems are offline, eh? Well, lets show them we our greatest defense is our offense."

Poxx: Captain I strongly advise y-

Vashara: transfer all auxiliary power to the covariant phaser pulse.

Poxx: captain

Vashara: PREPARE FOR EVASIVE ACTION

Poxx: captain pls


Catherine: "Who here on board has not written their will yet?"
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Doesn't have to be an essay or even a novella. Just enough so I can gauge skill (Which isn't that much of a worry because I know your skill level, but fair is fair)


Understood, and finished.
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And you're accepted. I wont hold you to the two day waiting period (sorry everyone else) because it appears the people who are going to join, have already said so.

And I'm sure your second officer will want to start setting things up with you. And @DeadBeatWalking has been waiting very patiently.
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And you're accepted. I wont hold you to the two day waiting period (sorry everyone else) because it appears the people who are going to join, have already said so.

And I'm sure your second officer will want to start setting things up with you. And @DeadBeatWalking has been waiting very patiently.


Sounds good, thanks!
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Alright, I think I'll get the IC up either Monday/Tuesday, depending on my free time.

@NamelessjakeIf you are still interested in making a character, don't worry. You still have time.

[@everyone else]It might be a good idea to plan some character relations before that point. Just putting that out there. :D
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I have a feeling how Catherine and Vash will get along, but I don't know about Xiril (@DeadBeatWalking) and Xyrx (@Wade Wilson). Do either of you two have an idea about how they would react with Catherine? For Xiril I'm inclined to think they'll get along, and Xyrx and Catherine will be neutral concerning each other. Though he may appreciate her background in engineering.

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I have a feeling how Catherine and Vash will get along, but I don't know about Xiril (@DeadBeatWalking) and Xyrx (@Wade Wilson). Do either of you two have an idea about how they would react with Catherine? For Xiril I'm inclined to think they'll get along, and Xyrx and Catherine will be neutral concerning each other. Though he may appreciate her background in engineering.

EDIT: If possible, could @Blue Demon delete my accidental post in the character page?


Well, if Catherine's got a good humour, he'll get along fine with her ;)
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EDIT: If possible, could @Blue Demon delete my accidental post in the character page?


I cannot delete posts. You'd have to take it to a mod.

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If anyone wants to discuss in-depth Poxx relations, PM ya boi. Otherwise, I figure crewmembers generally see Poxx as the Data/Spock of the bridge; Socially distant, overly professional, and kind of a stick in the mud.
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EDIT: If possible, could @Blue Demon delete my accidental post in the character page?


Done.
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If anyone wants to discuss in-depth Poxx relations, PM ya boi. Otherwise, I figure crewmembers generally see Poxx as the Data/Spock of the bridge; Socially distant, overly professional, and kind of a stick in the mud.


Fantastic. CO/XO relationship with an Odd Couple slant to it. ;)

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Done.


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