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Ah. But glancing through the character section, I noticed someone else.

@Angel Eyes Do you still intend to make a character?


They should! It's Valentine's Day, afterall: we need the power of love!
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Nop, he dropped out too
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Appearance:
His Primal form is that of a humanoid man, standing tall and dressed in heavy, black robes. He wears a mask made from a shiny silver metal, in the shape of a skull (without the cheekbone). One can only see his bright purple eyes, and the his mouth with black lips and fair, blue-greyish skin around it. On his right hand he wears a gauntlet made from the same metal as his mask. He carries a lantern with his armored hand. Within it burns a purple flame. His left hand is left bare. It looks boney and meager. Even the skin doesn’t look right. A dark blue, like it’s frozen.


Try as I might, after reading that description, I will never be able to shake this mental image :


( I love your character, however)
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Watching RWBY is the worst thing that ever happened to me, seriously, fuck Miles Luna.
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Figured I might as well do what all the cool kids are doing and try (and probably fail) to get a spot on the first page of the OOC for work in progress stuff. I'm leaving this purposefully bare-bones as all heck because I should really be in bed. Also may or may not add in a Water (Oceans) God tomorrow after I've recovered some of my faculties, assuming multiple characters are a thing.

More exciting developments coming tomorrow morning. I hope.



Are you still with us? If so, then I just want to say...that 'CS' (?) isn't going to get over the threshold. If you're no longer interested, let me know
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Watching RWBY is the worst thing that ever happened to me, seriously, fuck Miles Luna.


Here's a comment I made on another thread, where some analysis was taking place, if you'd like to read:
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@Cyclone I withdrew my CS, and have so far failed to make a new deity that satisfies me.
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@Cyclone I withdrew my CS, and have so far failed to make a new deity that satisfies me.


If you still want to be part of the RP, just let me know. Your CS, though you didn't like it in the end, was brilliant and would have gotten you through, I'd say. On that basis alone, and since it is an exceptional case, I'll be allowing you to take some more time to make another that satisfies you - if you still wish to be part of the RP that is.
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@Kho Is my CS accepted? Or rather, what should be improved to be accepted?

((also i know it's supposed to be in a hider, i'll post it in one when it gets accepted))
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@Kho Is my CS accepted? Or rather, what should be improved to be accepted?

((also i know it's supposed to be in a hider, i'll post it in one when it gets accepted))


He's not accepting anything right now, and won't be until tomorrow.
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@Kho Is my CS accepted? Or rather, what should be improved to be accepted?

((also i know it's supposed to be in a hider, i'll post it in one when it gets accepted))


I would give you feedback, but a bit pressed for time atm ^^'
Maybe some of the other players can read it and given you their thoughts, if they like it I doubt I'll issue with it
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@Kho



(Any feedback from anyone is appreciated)
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@Kho



(Any feedback from anyone is appreciated)


Holy hell. I see why it took you so long to post. Great sheet m80
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@Legion02

I like Reathos as a concept. Since you asked for feedback, here's a few things that it might behoove you to expand upon in your sheet:

1. More on his personality, specifically when it comes to how he would interact with other gods. Does he mind his own business in their affairs? Would he be willing to fight them, and if so, over what?

2. Expanding on the above, how would he react to mortals beyond appreciating those that don't resist their own death?

3. Maybe elaborate a little bit on what powers he has.

As a simple thought exercise, I'd encourage everyone to stop and ask themselves what they're going to be spending their Might points on. Is your god going to make their own private fortress/planet/dimension? Give the mortals some kind of new magic? Create life? Assemble a bunch of Holy Orders to carry out their will?

Thinking about that will help you figure out if you like your character and probably shed some light on how you've been envisioning their personality. For instance, if you realize that your character is probably going to be doing more meddling and destroying than they are creating, that might b worth adding to your character sheet, and them from there you could explain why they're like that in the personality section, and so on.
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Since everyone is asking for feedback on their sheets, how's mine looking
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@Nevix This is just a cosmetic thing, but why is he wearing a 20th century magician outfit?
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@The Omnipotent SphereWhy are we talking about humans and mortals and why are other people's gods dressed in stuff like 18th century dresses? None of these have really been invented yet.

It's probably just ease of communication. We are not ultimately our gods.
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@The Omnipotent SphereValid point, I'll consider a change.
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Holy hell. I see why it took you so long to post. Great sheet m80


Awwww, thanks. I'll remember that when Vulamera is killing Daegon
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Awwww, thanks. I'll remember that when Vulamera is killing Daegon


I think I'm going to turn Daegon into that slightly obsessed character from every movie where royalty is ever featured. You know, the guy who gives the princess all the creepy compliments and calls her something like "darling", and then when he's revealed to be the bad guy, he tries to convince the female lead the he and her aren't so different.
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