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@Cottonmouth What the hell is that baby eating...
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@Cottonmouth What the hell is that baby eating...


I think it's beans.
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Well, just tell me if my CS is accepted.
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The problem that my co-gm and I am having is that there are already a bunch of dark characters in this RP as it is and we need more of a variety.
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@Prodigal Son the only dark thing I had was the hood and the ring...
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@Bishop I'll let my co-GM explain.
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@Prodigal Son the only dark thing I had was the hood and the ring...

While that might be the only immediate thing appearance wise. In the personality and the backstory it leans towards a more shadowy theme as well. And that's just something that a couple of people (including myself) have already done. It's gonna stack up too much.
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@Cottonmouth I don't know how backstories can stack up, how you behave in a situation is totally up to the writer. While he tries to stay within the boundaries of personality that he himself set, it all depends. On a side note, we may be dark themed, but we all change drastically in our personalities and whatnot. Ain't Felix good? That makes it like...1 good, 1 strict caring person(Japanese cook girl), the immortal fellow who enjoys a good battle, the one who uses the curses and is full of regrets, the one who adapts personality and my CS who enjoys being a ninja.
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@Bishop Here's the thingThere was this part of the original post which contained the rules. One of them was that, your character has to be fleshed out. I am not sure if this character you have posted is a character you already made for another RP, but it sort of seems that way. And while you can drag and drop characters for different RPs, you have (at least for this one) to flesh out your character more than what you have done. Your backstory kind of is just, "I am so cool that I don't need to stick around no more. And then I will become Naruto by taking your tome away." All of these things that I have pointed out to you, are giant red flags that need to be addressed. I am not trying to disparage I am just trying to tell you what you need to improve on before we will let you into the RP.
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Character done I think. The history is a bit eh bit after being ill and brain locked but I think it came out alright. Had to try and determine a reason she would leave academia for Felix and I think I did that enough.
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Character done I think. The history is a bit eh bit after being ill and brain locked but I think it came out alright. Had to try and determine a reason she would leave academia for Felix and I think I did that enough.


I'll read your post in an hour or so. A little busy at the moment. I skimmed over it like a minute ago, seems pretty good, but I need to finish reading it.
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I'll read your post in an hour or so. A little busy at the moment. I skimmed over it like a minute ago, seems pretty good, but I need to finish reading it.


I actually just read it after my friends canceled a queue in League of Legends causing us to wait like 5 minutes.

Your character is good, you're in.
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Awesome, thanks. I might write a post or something later tonight or tomorrow then unless Felix does something.
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@Skelace I need to know where Deston is, what city he is in.
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@Prodigal Son Son of a gun! I must have erased that line while I was reworking the post. He's in Chicago... I swear I wrote that down. My bad.
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@Skelace@dndragons@ghost queen

I really don't feel like I should have to state this because it seems obvious. But if you have not read the previous posts in character, I highly recommend you do. There is some lore exposition and other little tidbits that make it almost essential to read all the posts.
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@Skelace@dndragons@ghost queen

I really don't feel like I should have to state this because it seems obvious. But if you have not read the previous posts in character, I highly recommend you do. There is some lore exposition and other little tidbits that make it almost essential to read all the posts.


Way ahead of you~ And I got a post done tonight. Being productive feel weird.
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I think I just pulled an all nighter...

I apologize for the delay; work tends to cover most of the afternoon and the evening for me nowadays.

Here is my CS - Please inform me if I need to make any changes.


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@Prodigal Son Ok, did some changes(personality wise and last sentences of bio) to my last CS post in the OOC. If you need me to remove any abilities or items just say so.
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I think I just pulled an all nighter...

I apologize for the delay; work tends to cover most of the afternoon and the evening for me nowadays.

Here is my CS - Please inform me if I need to make any changes.



I pulled an all nighter as well. Feel like I'm gon' pass out but I should get out this one reply while I work on a IC post.
You're accepted, feel free to post your sheet in the characters section and start your first post. But I should warn you beforehand (this goes out to everyone as well) since @Prodigal Son is recruiting characters and writing them in 1 by 1 into the group with Felix, it might take a lil' bit before he gets to you due to the build up of players wanting to join at once. Hopefully it goes fast.

-PS, I got a kick out of that Soul Weaving quote at the end of the backstory section.
-PSS, I couldn't help but notice the Destiny avatar. I don't suppose you play on the ps4?
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