[OOC] Paragon's End [Modern/Fantasy/Anime/Adventure]

[Prodigal Son]

@Prodigal Son you uh.. Never mentioned if my cs was goin in the right direction or not. Lookin' for some guidance. Thanks chief

@Zelosse

Yeah, sorry about that. I have been on a Greyhound bus for close to 11 hours now. All I have at my disposal is my iphone, and I didn't see your post. It looks like you put the correct amount of effort into it. But remember that your character needs to be compatible with a team whose goal is to protect the world. So, as long as Felix can actually recruit him naturally, you'll be good.

[Zelosse]

@Prodigal Son Good to know. Also, apologies for sounding... impatient. As for the recruitment thing, Felix can have him easily with these magical words. "Test your skills for the good of the world". After that it would be pointing him at something you want gone. He'll do the rest.

[Prodigal Son]

@Zelosse also, this is on Earth, so a realm to the north with an eternal winter would be the North Pole

[Zelosse]

@Prodigal Son I mark the CS as done, and will not change the 'realm to the north'. Loses the pizazz. IC he'll refer to it as the north pole, now that he knows what the rest of the world calls it.

Verdict?

[Prodigal Son]

Lemme give it a lookeroo and confer with my cohort and I'll get back to you.

[Prodigal Son]

@Zelosse first thing that strikes me is that you made the same mistake Sector did in not putting a description of the appearance with his age and stuff. All you did was put a picture. Which is fine if you did it like Dndragons and posted pictures with facial features such as eye color and hair color. But since you posted only a vague image, you'll need to describe his appearance.

Also, please remove the "character skeleton" hider

Those are the only things I can see. Remedy those and then I will give you the go ahead to post it in the cs section.

[Prodigal Son]

@Bishopneeds to remove the skeleton hider as well

[Zelosse]

@Prodigal Son Dones.

[Ghost Queen]

Alright, made the last edits to John. Made him older and added some little things to make him a little more interesting.

[Prodigal Son]

@Prodigal Son Dones.

@Zelosse

Looks good, you're in.

[dndragons]

@Skelace

Just posted and at the end Yuno calls towards Deston. Just letting you know. :3.

[Zelosse]

Hmm. Now where to introduce myself..

[Ghost Queen]

@Zelosse
Pretty much you just gotta make an intro wherever you want, Felix will come to you...you just need to ~believe~

[Zelosse]

@Zelosse
Pretty much you just gotta make an intro wherever you want, Felix will come to you...you just need to ~believe~

@Ghost Queen

Is everyone in one place or in a wide area of a city at the moment?

[Ghost Queen]

@Zelosse
The only people close together are those who have been Portales to the cabin, everyone else is spread out across the world.

[Zelosse]

@Ghost Queen Thank you :D

[Ghost Queen]

@Zelosse
Not a problem my dude.

[Zelosse]

Posted. Nothin' special.

[ShiningSector]

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I hadn't thought of that. None come to mind, save just Arch-Mage Felix. If you would like, you could pitch me some of your ideas and we can add them retroactively.

@Prodigal Son

That is okay. Arch-Mage does have a better ring to it than I originally thought. Any other names for honorifics I could think of seem a little nonsensical.

[Bishop]

Sorry to trouble you all but I became...hmmm... too "disinterested". The story was fine and everything was great... What I mean is:"It's not you, it's me". Maybe I can join in the middle of the story if you would allow it(weeks and weeks later), anyway for now I'm not currently posting or planning to.