Plus I think if you wanna be a professional author, the best place to practice would be with other people who can provide feedback, sometimes you gotta pay for feedback in the real world.
Ansgt may have been a poor word choice but Yoko is another person, strictly speaking. And I think we'd both agree Shuichi and Botan are the ones falling in love, whereas with Yoko, there still needs to be a connection too. I know we mentioned primal lust, but I am hoping once she does leave some badass skills, it will be easier balanced, in terms of Kurama's feelings for Botan. Does that make sense?
I hate when good people make bad teachers. It happens sadly. Some people are cool but can't really manage a classroom or an agenda of things to get done. Then again I feel bad people who are bad teachers, are even worse. Hopefully you having to drop a class didn't set you back too much, I'm 6 classes away from graduating, if I could drop this British Masterclass, I would. >___>
Shiroi is gonna be interested in Botan, that's for sure. Let's hope Botan can improv and keep her facts straight because I'm sure Koenma didn't really bother giving her a fleshed out identity or anything. I think I can have a post with Shiori doting on Kurama and Botan over tea and then I can hand it over to you if you want to ask anything (or you could save it for when they return for dinner?). Or should I nudge us toward school at the end of my post instead? Kurama was really popular at school mostly because he was at the top of all the rankings but he's also fucking gorgeous. I wish I could see the look on his face when he walks in with Botan tomorrow.
Oh btw, I'm kind of assuming the school day goes something like this so if you have another thought, let me know but considering a big portion will be in school, we probably need to be on the same page just for clarity's sake.
School day starts around 8 AM, you got to your homeroom class and have the announcements and then the teacher covers their subject for 90 minutes. Then the teacher changes to another for another 90 mins. Then there's a 15 min break, followed by another 90 min class, then an hour break for lunch where kids can go off campus if they like, most don't cause hey, we're nerds and we gotta study. Then another 2 90 min classes and school ends around 4=5? Maybe we could shave off one class? I assume then clubs/sports would run for another hour after school? I just recall their school days being lengthy but them getting more weeks off to make up for it? But again we'll probably only focus on certain subjects or stretches of time with skips everywhere else.
Thoughts?