[OOC] Gangs of Capulet city; 1930's gang warfare rp

[Clockwork giant]

Hello everyone! Welcome to the rp. Currently I don't have the whole thing set up completely, as evidenced by the lack of map and quickly written introduction, but if you're interested in joining please write a description of you're gang that includes an HQ or meeting place of some sort (speekeasy, freight yard, ect.) a basic idea of how rich they are (don't make them op though, max is about one million dollars worth of "stuf") and an origan story, which should state the gangs allegiances. (Are they a mafia branch? Are they doing the mayor's dirty work?). Also, if you're a competent map artist, unlike me, I would appreciate if you could draw a map of the city for further use in the rp.

[dragonslayer1]

Hello I would like to make a gang known as The Jesters. Their leader is know as the RingMaster there getups are black suits, masks with clown faces on them. Their meeting place is a traveling circus/traders market.. They are a branch of a much larger crime field and their main attacks are through arson, theft and the art of conning people. They will do anything to get paid. Their wealth is pretty high around 700,000$ all of which is used on weapons, leading them to be some of the best armed thugs in the city. They have a fleet of all black Chryslers. They are also know all through the U.S. as the Circus Killers,Jesters and Deaths Jokers.
Backstory:
The gang officially started in 1912 New York. It is a travelling group of criminals. They stay in town for a year and then day leave before they get found out or they get killed. The Main Leaders of the gang are The RingMaster. The strong man, The Sword Swallower, The fire breather, the 3 clowns and the Reader of the future. They have goons known as carnies. Each leader has about 20 goons.

[Clockwork giant]

@dragonslayer1 ok, it's not a bad idea, but you didn't really give an in depth description of there welth. How big are they? Do they have a fleat of hot rods or do they have to travel by foot. Also, remember to keep it accurate to the setting. There getup sounds more 1970-80's than erly 30's. One more thing, I like the base idea but be prepared to change it wen I finally get a map.

[dragonslayer1]

I updated it

[Clockwork giant]

@dragonslayer1 I like were you're going with it, although anarchy isn't really a crime of witch can turn a profit, it more just gets a lot of people hurt in a very random way. I think the crime you're looking for is arson, or maby have them as mercenaries or bounty hunters. Secondly wen I asked "do they have a fleet of hot rods?" That was just a suggestion. Feel free to give them whatever time appropriate vehicles you would like. As far as the base goes, it sounds like there just getting into town. Maby you should think about having them in something temporary off the edge of town. Maby in a hidden smuggling vessel or a camp masquerading as a circus. Although that last one is a little on the nose. Otherwise just fix the spelling and maby add a back story and you should be pretty much done!

[Clockwork giant]

Ok, you're CS is rly shaping up, so there are just a fue more tweaks. The number if members in you're gang seems pretty low and specific. Naming a fue leaders and top members would be good, but as far as goons go you need to bolster your numbers. Your trying to run the city, you can't do that with 7 guys! Other than that, sorry to be a bit repetitive but you nead to fix your spelling. Particularly the run on sentence. Commas and periods are your freinds!