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@Maxwell: I'll say Taula was caught up in fighting at the royal mews when the invaders broke through the defenses and couldn't make too much headway towards the king as the stables burned, enemies rushed in and animals panicked.
Set in 1993 America within the fictional metropolitan city of Cherub Copse, California S4 is intended to be equal parts deconstruction and tough love parody of the formulaic monster-of-the-week children's shows we all grew up on. Placed inside the role of a reasonably athletic but otherwise unremarkable senior at Cherub Copse High I expect those that get accepted to keep as human a perspective to their writing as possible. At its core this is a story of young adults thrust into extreme situations by extraordinary circumstances and their struggle with the teenage woes of sex, discrimination and life after high school.

I won't shy away from a typical premise: An evil from the depths of space sets his sights on earth and it falls to a group of teenagers with attitude to defeat him. Most if not all of the tropes and conventions audiences have come to expect will not only be present and played straight but brought to their logical conclusions. Causes and consequences for the above will be examined as the international community responds to the threat both our heroes and the villain pose, the enemy's true motivations are unveiled and the cost and temptation of true power becomes clear.

That's the pitch. If you're interested in applying before the OOC goes up this is the place to post CSs and any questions you might have. Standard advanced roleplaying standards apply with the small caveat that you be excellent to your fellow writers. Keep in mind that this is set during late November of the 1993 Clinton administration; Don't ask, Don't tell is being signed into law, the Los Angeles riots and world trade center bombing weigh heavily on America and the Soviet Union dissolved--ending the Cold War--barely two years prior.

@Maxwell = Will do!
@ Maxwell: Hope you didn't pull the same mistake I've made a million times out from under your hat--Typing it all in post window then accidentally telling the computer to go back a page.
Peer Pressure!

Here's my CS from the interest check too!

@Hank = Feel free to have him attribute it to the poor girl spending too much of her time around Taula!
@Raptorman = Gotta say I'm with Maxwell on this one but in the interest of being excellent to each other I'm more than happy to offer a little unsolicited advice.

*Personality wise I don't really think she should be at all kind. Civil perhaps, or superficially kind even, but not truly kind. Having read your CS start to finish it seems to me she was raised by a father, mother and culture all focused on the domination. Wars and feuds raged for thousands of years until her father murdered and intimidated his way to the throne, once there he kept to the proud Vyndarian tradition of viking-age economics by exporting murder and sailing back with anything and anyone they could carry.Her mother on the other hand used drugs, sex and manipulation to make a puppet of the man that raped a child into her and presumably had everyone she'd ever known killed or in similarly dire straits. Not only that but her homeland considers humankind ((and I'd wager all non-giant humanoids)) as lesser beings to the extent they liken them to livestock, this little tidbit of information opens up a seldom used opportunity...

*Your family doesn't need to be dead. Nobles from all walks of life had tons of ways and reasons to get rid of their unwanted offspring. As both Lin'Lise and her mother have evolved sexual predation as a biological imperative perhaps the Queen felt threatened by her maturing daughter. Your character could just as easily be foreign royalty sent abroad and supported via a yearly remittance--it might even have been at the King's order. He can't be happy to have an heir that's both female and only half a lorenvolk.

*It doesn't seem like she went raiding with her father's men, especially with a displayed interest and talent for healing over harm. Maybe work with that--if she hasn't been killing foes by the scads she's probably not all that good at it. Given that she's in her thirties, has had a child and led what seems to not be a physically active life. ((Healer at court, raising a kid, studying magic)) she could even be a little out of shape for a nice breathe of fresh air.

*The last thing i'd say is she should certainly be a pampered princess who had everything in life handed to her. She was born into royalty then lucky enough to marry into another Kingdom's direct line of succession. Heck, I'd even go so far as to say the captain of the guard would have made her his concubine rather than kill her the night of her father's death, the rebel guards were using loyalty to the late King and his legacy to justify their actions after all. Even in her original backstory it really only sounds like she only had to suffer through a coup d'etat and getting hungry during a long boat ride between periods of unimaginable luxury, excluding the death of her firstborn of course. I honestly think she'd be or soon grow to resent suddenly being a commoner at least as much as an act of infantcide.

Hope some of this helps Raptorman.
@Maxwell/Lexicon = You guys are probably right, I'll stick with Taula. I think I'm just a little too eager to start posting. Fun fact: I actually ended up with two other CS's I didn't submit!
@Maxwell = I think I just might have been fumbling with the concept, since 'race' tends to be used to describe different species in fantasy worlds and I treated it more like an ethnic group

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I couldn't help feeling like not making a sufficiently non-human character was missing the boat on my part, so I scribbled up an alternate CS. I actually think this one might mesh a little bit better as we are want for a cowardly, combat incapable skullduggerer.

Can't wait to play as Taula
@Maxwell = Glad to hear it, I'll be sure to scope it out. I'm pretty much done with my CS unless there's anything more you want me to add. I've also fleshed out her appearance as well.

On an unrelated note I've been ruminating a bit on the no rubber forehead fantasy races policy, and I'm open to any suggestions you or any of the other players might have on the Drungr. So far I'm thinking of them as humanity's less enlightened cousins, more prone to knee-jerk reactions and doing things they instantly regret thanks to a hopped up flight-or-flight response they've inadvertently cultivated over the course of generations. That being said however I'd be more than willing to accommodate any strengths or weaknesses you think would be fun to write around.
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