AllIsOne

This Hurricane's Chasing Us All Underground

Is this still open or nah?

@Rage Lonethorn

Someone recently quit, so I would think it still is.

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From experience - mgalfd never works.

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@Orior Everything looks good.

@AllIsOneSorry if you misunderstood. I wasn't saying that Kragen's beard is huge(although i does cover half his face). I was saying that Kragen himself was huge(6 feet 8 inches in height). I mentioned the red beard because red is a less common hair color so it's a distinguishing feature.

@Razqua

LOL got it. @Orior I guess you're the only one who can edit that now, so if you could please do that, that would be great!

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@Riaxh I see you there, lurking.

@AllIsOne and @Razqua, because I have changed the CS so many times, I kinda edited the two of yours. Please make sure they are still the same when you get a chance. :]

(Sorry for double posts, edits dont send mentions)

@Orior

Still the same sir.

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Oh, for God's sake, you don't have to pretend. I know you hunters aren't as strong. She thought while observing him struggle with opening that bottle. While he was searching for the cups, Mori listened to the sounds coming from the bar, trying to distinguish what was going on in there. Since there was no sound of screaming, yelling or breaking things, she concluded that everything was alright.

With hidden disgust she took the cup Anthar had given her, and clenched her fingers around it, wondering how could she get herself out of drinking alcohol. She followed Anthar's example, and raised her cup high in the air, only to then lower it again, far from her lips. His particular facial expression was enough proof to her, that she made a right decision not taking a sip. If Jet Fuel did that to him, God knows what would have done to Mori. But since she couldn't just stand there with a full cup in her hands, she had to act quickly. After his question, she took a few steps forward, and landed her hand gently on his chest. She licked her lips while observing his, and then raise her gaze up to his eyes. ''Me? Oh, I just come here to lure good looking men into this room, and then tricking them into drinking that awefully strong shit of a vodka,'' she smiled temptingly, sliding her hands to the sides of his waist as she was slowly to hug him.

@Manticore

Anthar noticed she didn't drink from her cup. He was going to ask about it, but before he got a chance to she put a hand on his chest and said seductively, ''Me? Oh, I just come here to lure good looking men into this room, and then tricking them into drinking that awefully strong shit of a vodka.''

Is she just making fun, or was there actually something in that vodka? Anthar wondered. But then he looked into her stunning eyes and she gazed back, putting her arms around his waist. At this point Anthar couldn't think about anything really, other than Mori. He didn't know what he felt, if it was love or nothing more than momentary passion, but he didn't really care. The only thing he could concentrate on were her eyes. And then, as if out of instinct, he leaned in, cupped her face in his hands, and kissed her.

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@AllIsOne
Alright, he looks awesome! I just have a few comments, but nothing too bad. I really like your character, he's not what I was expecting.

Even though his father is a King, he'd still pay some sort of homage to the Emperor, but the whole concept is fine (not necessarily complete sovereignty, but you get it right?). That's just me being nit-picky.

The only other issues I have are his abilities being just a bit too involved for costing 1 SP. Is there an upgrade to Quickness, the plus sign? Because then I believe you have one too many SP in your skeleton. For Illusion; what kind of illusion? Auditory, visual, or both? How big can it be? (Please remember that you will be able to upgrade these abilities.) The tracking seems a bit OP, so could you pick a terrain/environment he is a specialist in?

@Orior

So I think I took care of the issues. As for the the size of his illusions, the bigger they are the less detailed they can be. So he could create an illusion of a table, but it would seem not so realistic, or he could create an apple that would look quite realistic.

@AllIsOne
Cool. I like how you tied in my character to your reason for being in the city. I am curious though. Does Jakken know what Kragen looks like at all? He's a huge red bearded guy carrying a ridiculously large axe so he's kinda hard to miss.

@Razqua

Well, since it probably makes sense that people would know what he looks like, I'll edit it in that Jakken heard the man has a huge axe and a beard.

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@AllIsOne
Alright, he looks awesome! I just have a few comments, but nothing too bad. I really like your character, he's not what I was expecting.

Even though his father is a King, he'd still pay some sort of homage to the Emperor, but the whole concept is fine (not necessarily complete sovereignty, but you get it right?). That's just me being nit-picky.

The only other issues I have are his abilities being just a bit too involved for costing 1 SP. Is there an upgrade to Quickness, the plus sign? Because then I believe you have one too many SP in your skeleton. For Illusion; what kind of illusion? Auditory, visual, or both? How big can it be? (Please remember that you will be able to upgrade these abilities.) The tracking seems a bit OP, so could you pick a terrain/environment he is a specialist in?

@Orior

I was thinking that the tracking might be a bit too OP too.
Alright, I'll fix it up, but for the next 24 hours I won't be able to be active here, so expect it to be ready in like 26 hours.

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Name:

Jakken Pantyr

Age:

269

Race:

Moon Elf

Appearance:

Jakken is 6"3 in height. His hair is black like a moonless night, cascading down and ending at the middle of his back. His skin is pale white, his face long and clean-shaven. his eyes are blood red in color. He wears leather armor, including greaves, vambraces, boots, gloves and a belt. Over that he wears a robe that reaches just under his knees. Over his shoulder is a quiver filled with steel tipped arrows laced with Hemlock. On his back he carries an ash flatbow.

Personality:

Jakken is quite arrogant and condescending. He looks at any non-elf as a lesser being, unworthy of his attention. He is brave, almost to the point of foolishness, because of his thinking that no creature can defeat him. Some might call him selfish, but he does care very much for his brethren and he does his best to assist any Moon Elf he encounters. Regarding his enemies, he is merciless and ruthless.

Morality/Religion:

Before The Great Decent Jakken was a devout follower of Sylsetria, as were many elves. Since The world went dark, Sylsetria has become weak and almost helpless, and so Jakken left her following, with the belief that she has deserted her people. Now Jakken pays homage to Elanom, The Lady of the Night. Nothing is wrong to Jakken when protecting his people.

Biography:

Growing up as the son of the king of Marduil, the biggest Moon Elf tribe in the land, puts a lot of pressure on a young elf. He was supposed to be smarter, faster, stronger and better looking than all the other elves in the tribe. His father was very distant, showing him any attention only when he would win a competition or come back from a good hunt. The only time he saw his father show any kind of feelings was when Jakken's mother died.

His father's expectations, as well as the rest of the tribe's, caused Jakken to put almost his entire time into studying. Archery, tracking and magic were only some of the things he learned during his first two-hundred and fifty years. On his two-hundred and fiftieth birthday, he set out into the dense forests on his mission.

It is a Marduil tradition that when an elf comes of age at his or her two-hundred and fiftieth birthday, that elf must choose a mission for himself. Then he proposes his mission to the council of elders who decide if it is a honorable mission or not. If they agree to it, the elf will set off to complete his mission, and not return until he has done so. If the council disapproves the mission, the council will choose a mission for the elf, which the elf then will have to complete.

When Jakken came forward before the council with his proposal, the elder elves were amazed. They quickly agreed to his proposal, and so the next day, Jakken set off. His mission: To speak face to face with Sylsetria, his matron goddess. He was out in the forests when The Great Decent happened. With everything falling and dying around him, he started to believe that Sylsetria does not really care for her followers. Caring for his tribe, Jakken returned to his tribe's city. What he saw there made him fall to his knees and weep.

Only ruin. Ruin and death. All the beautiful buildings he remembered from his childhood destroyed, huge pieces of stone laying in the streets. It was as if a huge fire-breathing giant had ran through the city, utterly destroying everything in his path. Jakken walked among the ruins, searching for life. So many bodies lay in the streets, pouring their blood into the gutters.

Jakken left the city with one goal in mind. Find Sylsetria, and avenge his tribe. He has heard whispers that a man only known as "Demon Hunter" has arrived in Uranda who has found a way to kill a god. He is known to have a huge red beard and carry a great battleaxe. Jakken must speak with this man, and find out the truth. If he will not speak, Jakken will make him.

That is how Jakken arived in Uranda.

Other Notes:

(Anything you want to add)

Class:

Ranger

Skill Points:

0 / 6

Weapons/Tools:

• Ash Flatbow - 1 SP

Skills/Abilities:

• Fighting Style: Archery (pretty self-explanatory) - 0 SP
• Natural Affinity: Quickness - 1 SP

Natural Abilities:

• Moon Elf: Jakken has the ability to see in low-lighted areas and with infrared (heat) vision. - 0 SP
• Tracking: Jakken has learned the basics of forest tracking from some of the best trackers in the realm. Using all of his senses in their fullest, he tracks his prey. - 1 SP

Magical Abilities:

• Magic Style: Arcane Knowledge of the Wild: Jakken spent almost his entire life training with royal rangers and royal mages in the art of the wild. The mages taught him to tap into his mana and cast Primal spells, though Jakken specialized in the Natural School and the Illusion School. - 1 SP
• Animal Tongue: Through studying Natural magic, Jakken has gained the ability to telepathically communicate with most animals. - 1 SP

Spells:

• Illusion: At the start, Jakken can create simple visual and auditory illusions, but as he gains skill he can come to bend light and sound to create much more detailed illusions, and even solid ones. - 0 SP

Pet:

• Young Gray Wolf - 1 SP

General Equipment:

• Water Canteen
• Some Food
• Small Knife

FINALLY.

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I'm working on my CS now, should be up within the hour.

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If I'm an elf, then age 29 is really young, no? Until what age does each race usually live?