SirBeowulf Welcome to the fold. You posted first and reminded me to add the date, so it's in there now right under the general topic 'Regions of Léva. Go ahead and put it in. For now I imagine your character as someone with quite a bit of experience in life, regardless of in Night Kiss, I see someone in their early to mid thirties. Very interesting character. You seem to be on the same vein I normally might follow. I could see Darius as a practising apothecary, but think the strengths you chose are a good balance of Charisma, Intimate Killing, and Expert Brewer (an interesting choice). To be clear, your weaknesses are Lack of Strength, Easily Swayed by Temptation/Lust. I like it and the history. You left a bit of a gap as to how Darius joined up, but I suspect this may be related to your not having a date reference. I'll be building a character in the near future, if you'd like, they can be related to your entrance. Feel free to PM me if you fancy that.
Oh, I'll just throw out there, while I watch a couple anime here and there like any other, you are dealing with someone who'd prefer not to see it describing characters. See anime is great for how easily acceptable it is to the eye. Each expression is big and clear, even when we barely know them. Here we're developing the characters and writing all those expressions. That furrowed brow that seems to rest like an excited, if uneasy V could be better served left to the written word or another type of image. I'll say you've at least chosen a better image as far as that area is concerned for this. So, that said, if you find another image please do switch them out, but it's not top priority.
Krauxis You BeoWulf may now gloat of your position. Just to be clear, you must've made at least three excuses for your CS before I even opened the hider. Not the best way to present your work, right? Have some faith and don't apologize for what you create. You were excited to make this and that should come with no shame.
The youth and the possession seem solid. I was a bit suspicious in the earlier bits, but your writing in the history sold me that you'd give this some thought and would play it with excitement. Rosa is possessed and will likely gain knowledge given time in the IC as well as being strangely effected by what lands manipulate Lef. Severity of these effects can be determined between us as we go, but dice will probably have some part in it (I don't do dice/stats much, so it's gonna be easy). Just know that.
Your strengths are Excellent in Close-Combat, Energy Drain, and Fierce Loyalty. Weaknesses include Violent Stubbornness and Perpetual Hunger. First, she's young and I'd prefer if you clicked Excellent-anything to Intermediate -- can hold her own, but could use further training as she will get with Night Kiss. Let's talk about the latter. You made Energy Drain require the will and need to eat, but you always need to eat -- possessed or not. I'm going to aim for more precise language here just so what I expect you to give into the possession is clear. If Rosa does not drain regularly then she losses mass, her body fat and muscle are literally consumed as energy for Beezelbub. Why not instead change your weakness of Perpetual Hunger to the life-threatening need to regularly feed off others' mass. I'd also use your explanation at the end to more clearly explain that the mass is converted to energy to sate the demon and sustain you. It's beyond you taking their Lef, you're sort of ignoring that and going right for the meat -- similar to taking plasma and not blood. I imagine the person literally looking gaunt and starved as you do this, probably suffering some weakness along the way. Your 1/10 of their mass per hit idea is also a good move toward balance, but still, you're talking about taking 20 pounds in a glancing blow from a thick man. Also, if they wear armour, does it consume that's mass -- if so, does it physically change the armour like moths eating cloth? Finally, easiest concern to resolve, I like the demon of gluttony, but would you mind creating your own demon or pulling one less commonly known? Other myth stories are just fine, but the standard Christian Demon of Gluttony is so popular already I'd prefer we create/use another. That demon will probably have a cult so-- oops, spoilers.
Those are a lot of questions and me pointing to areas that could use some work. Here's my advice: Rosa has some potential with Himlan as a lonely youth being consumed and left to her own. Instead of just having her learn from the demon, I am open to Rosa waking up/being guided to one of the hidden Temples of Myth (and only one) and being brought up by the monks/priests there. We can build the temple together and the occupants, if you like. That'd enrich your backstory some and give Rosa some guidance, perhaps being taught Corrupt Lef there. I'd also consider replacing Loyalty with an adept knowledge of the chakras/energy flow. This would mean instead of scoring 1/10 mass from any hit, Rosa could pinpoint her attacks (seemingly basic punches) to pressure points and areas of the body known to store energy -- taking mass from these areas easiest. It would allow Rosa to be a small person who has the knowledge to be effective. In short, this would make Energy Drain more balanced (you could roll on if you hit a pressure point and how well, if I ask you to), would highlight her Combat skills, and would give Rosa a little bonus perk. Just a suggestion, feel free to PM me if you'd like.