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@BlackSam3091@MrDidact

Here's my CS reposted so you guys can better find it! I made all the changes you guys asked and hopefully it's good now!


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If we have too many biotics I can change my character to a different race and class if need be~
@AquaAzura – I like the concept of an Asari warrior who’s more bodybuilder than ballerina, very unique. The thought of her stomping around the battlefield like a Krogan makes me smile. Just a few issues though, if you could help clear them please.
  • At 913 she’d nearing the end of the Asari’s average lifespan. While I’m not sure if it’s ever explicitly stated in the ME verse, I imagine there would be some old-age wear and tear affecting her by now. I imagine she’d almost certainly be slowing down to some extent, her experience still conspiring to make her incredibly effective but perhaps not as sharp as she once was. After all, even the Krogan start to show the effects of time as they get older.
  • The bit about torturing enemies for info seems tacked on. Is torture the first option for her, or is it the last? Does she enjoy it, or does she view it as a necessary aspect of war?
  • Where was she raised, Krogan or Asari space? Being raised by her father would imply Krogan, but then she would find it difficult to join a Commando unit as they are raised by the Asari communities that they represent.
  • How did her skill at tactics improve? Was she given a command of her own? If so, why, if she wasn’t a skilled tactician to begin with?
  • Why did she become a mercenary if she was already a part of an Asari Commando unit?

Also, while she’d be acting independently of her own squad while working with the Spectre’s, I think the addition of her Commando’s is a neat idea, and I’m sure we could find scenarios were our team can work with them somewhere down the line.


Okay, I fixed the issues the best I can! I hope she's good to go now!
@MrDidact My Asari is done!
I'm still working on my CS but I had to change it big time after changing my Quarian to an Asari so it will take a bit!





@AquaAzura We'll certainly are still open. We did recently get a healer though (of course another couldn't hurt)

@Chieri It'd be interesting for both of our characters to know the others' family name. I mean they were nobles in warring kingdoms.


Oh if that's the case I might pick either Manakete, Fighter, or Apothecary then.
I know this is late, but are you guys still open? I understand if your not, but I just seen this and wanted to join~
I see that you guys still need a healer and I'm willing to play that!
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