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6 yrs ago
Sometimes I don’t feel like writing but then I look at the rest of these forums and realize they’re dead af so I can’t be dead af either
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7 yrs ago
I am tired and very stressed - I will probably not be able to push out any replies for some time.
7 yrs ago
Will be away for three days - near to absolutely no internet. I'm afraid.
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7 yrs ago
I swear to God all the icons on the page turned into emojis for a moment...
7 yrs ago
I think I’m starting to be known on the guild as the guy who expresses interest in RPs but never joins
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@Prisk Wait, so this is a black-and-white, clearly-defined-good-and-evil kind of world, like the Lord of the Rings?

I personally think this would be far more interesting if the characters, along the course of the journey, discovered the dark truth about their beloved empire.
I personally find the tone of the writing purposely propagandic in nature, as if the narrator is only telling us one perspective of the story. Perhaps the vile description of the Ashkanai was put out to dehumanize the enemy, and the Ashkanai are actually ordinary tribesmen who felt abused by the Empire and decided to retaliate?
Real sorry for the inactivity - writer's block :(
To Paradise
Lord Governor Illerio Moningstar Sunwalker of Paledune, the Sultan of Paradise (78 - 133)
The heavens proclaim your beauty, oh Paradise,
The mynah birds sing your praises.
The storehouses overflow with the finest wine,
And the lambs are being led to slaughter.
The dates are sweetened with the sun’s passing,
And the waters from the oases are as sweet as honey.
Your officials are just and bear golden rods,
Your soldiers have sharpened their spears.
Who can say when you will be assailed, oh City?
Who can proclaim the day of your downfall?
None can, for your walls are sturdy,
Your towers will never collapse.
The winds of the desert will not overcome you,
And the toothed beasts will perish.

Your minarets are raised to the sky,
Their golden tops kiss the clouds.
The washing-women sing songs of joy,
The children play in the golden sunshine.
The merchants hawk their wares, over and over,
And their customers are thricefold.
For they bear crafts, which are excellently made,
And their beauty is renowned by all.
Travelers pass by your iron gates,
They cry aloud in awe.
They proclaim that they have seen miraculous things,
They declare to the world your song.

Your scribes work diligently, unceasing in study,
They read the ancient texts.
They preserve your wisdom for the next generation,
On their pens walk the intelligence of multitudes.
All who see you tread lightly on your sands,
For they know you house the Golden Mark.
Oh, who can describe the abundant primroses,
Who can depict the glowing carnations?
Your tradesmen are bursting with silver and gold,
They need no rest, for your beauty sustains them.

Your soldiers awaken to battle,
Your bows are carved, arrows are fletched.
The eagles are hunted for their feathers,
Which will lighten the burdens of the arrow-shafts.
Great swords are forged in your presence,
Blades are gilded with rubies and diamonds.
Helmets are adorned with the choicest jewels,
Spears are kissed and raised to the sky.
How can one stand against your wall of iron,
Your armies, your legions, oh City?
Sons of Paradise, awaken your arms!
See to it that none will falter!
Swami, 130
@EvolvedHigher Submit your character in the OOC before July 14.
@Bazmund My apologies for not really being a London native. Where are its dodgy parts, if I may ask?

EDIT: I exerted some actual effort in my research and it seems to say Hackney. Can I edit my posts?
Is this dead

I hope not :(
@Innis Whoopsies
@Ardiax Woah woah dude, this is cool, but you can't expect everyone to respond to this within two hours. Come back tomorrow for a better idea of who's interested.
The street sense was kicking in: Richard was instinctively surveying the appearance, body posture, and the possible threats that his new 'companions' posed - all without actively looking in their direction. Back in Islington, you needed to know whether that chav on the other side of the street was ready to shank you, but look too long and too hard and you'd do yourself the favor.

He first noticed the only other male in the group. He was confident and well-dressed, though Richard doubted that brats like him could have survived ten minutes in this part of London.

There was a small, petite girl, who seemed to be obsessing over her fingers. Not much use in a fight.

There was also another girl, who looked rather... dull. Perhaps she was an addict. Richard had seen plenty of her kind stumbling through Islington at night, with glazed-over eyes and trembling hands.

In short, he wasn't very convinced.

The matter returned to himself. He suddenly noticed a bulge in the male's leg. Fuck. It was probably a knife. He should have brought one. He suddenly realized the rising pressure in his chest that he had suppressed for the last half hour. What the hell was he doing? Why was he not at home? Why hadn't he called the cops? Why hadn't he slept? Why hadn't he told mum?

Then his thoughts drifted back to his mother. The last he saw of her was a pale, bleary-eyed, frizzy-haired mess at their apartment door. Her salaries weren't cutting it, and it was either stay this way until Richard graduated or remarry. The latter was out of the question for Richard. He had seen his mum's boyfriends, all despicable good-for-nothings with leery smiles and perpetually grasping either cigarettes or bottles of beer. It was either he get himself to graduation day fast, or he let one of those cockshites earn his mother's living. But the way it was going, he wasn't going to graduate from college, let alone live in the next couple hours.

He felt his phone ring, and saw the text. One forced, stilted step at the time, he trudged his way up to the man in the center of the station. He looked confident, like the well-dressed bloke, but he also looked pretty alert - probably an ex-policeman or ex-military. He grimaced, and pushed the words out of his mouth.

"Richard Dohammond. Twenty. BS Government at the London School of Economics and Political Science."
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