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BlackRose79-SinfulSkills: Half-Blood Adventures

Kou wakes up quickly and wided eyed, he looks around slightly forgetting where he was. The warmth of the room helped remind him, also the comfy bed…He cuddles up in bed for the last bit of warmth ‘I really don’t want to get up, and I certainly don’t know when the next time I’m going to feel a bed again’. The pastor of the church near here always told Kou that he could stay in the homeless shelter they had but Kou always felt unwelcome there the one time he slept there for some reason… He sighed and got up. He looked out the window and frantically looked at his pocket watch. The little watch indicated that it was 7:50. He ran down the stairs and looked around. There was no signs of the baker, Benjamin told Kou to leave by the opening of the bakery but he had no idea what time that was. He decided not to push his luck or the kindness of Benjamin. Kou took one quick look around the baker, embracing the warmth one more time before walking out the side door of the bakery.

Kou makes his way out to the front of the bakery. The bright light caught him off guard. He doesn’t do well in the daytime, he’s more of a night person, among the shadows… He always felt their present and he couldn’t tell if it was poor health or mental illness for being on the streets all his life but he swears he has some small control over them. Sometimes he swore shapes appeared in the shadows when he focused on them hard enough. Kou stuck in thought wasn’t paying any attention as he walked right into a girl standing in front of the bakery. He fell right into her nearly knocking them both onto the ground. “Oh Ma’am I’m so sorry, I wasn’t paying attention.” he looked up at the most beautiful blonde he may have ever laid eyes on. He stood there in awe for a few seconds waiting on her to react.

BlackRose79-SinfulSkills: Half-Blood Adventures

See? You are helpful, brought my previous 130 post to 346 words and I made it in two paragraphs. *Does a happy dance*

BlackRose79-SinfulSkills: Half-Blood Adventures

Hey I use ' ' for inner thoughts, I know some people use italics but I mainly use that for flashbacks. Would my ' ' work for inner thoughts for you?

BlackRose79-SinfulSkills: Half-Blood Adventures

Yea... Mine isnt close to 2 paragraphs.. Its one paragraph, like 130 words.

BlackRose79-SinfulSkills: Half-Blood Adventures

My next post might not be so long considering we are going to hit dialog here in a second. I hope its going to be ok, if not I can always figure out something else to write to make it longer.

BlackRose79-SinfulSkills: Half-Blood Adventures

Yea no problem, get back to it whenever you have time.

BlackRose79-SinfulSkills: Half-Blood Adventures

Name: Kou Dormir
Age: 18
Appearance:
God Parent: Hades
Power:
Can sense when a mortal or half-blood that he knows has died through a buzzing in their ears. On with this, he can see/sense auras.
Umbrakinesis: ability to control shadows for offense,defense or shadow travel. Able to make himself and others he touches invisible for as long as they remain still.
Personality: For being a dark mysterious person he is a really big smart ass. He is sarcastic and witty
Fear: Oddly enough has an intense fear of fire, can tolerate it but doesn’t like to.
Mini bio: Kou’s mom was a disappearing act much like his father. Grew up in an orphanage until he ran away at the age of 13. As a child a lot of weird things happened to him at the orphanage he grew up in so he didn’t make friends easily. He sulking personality didn’t help either. As time went on he became a loner, spent most nights on the run and rested and ate what he could find during the day, for some reason darkness was easier for him. He once made friends with people on the street while he was on his own. He saw one of them die by being killed in a street fight, as his friend died he has this high pitch buzzing in his ears. He didn't fully understand what had happened. Around the same time he noticed different shades of grey around people, some were darker, almost black, while others were almost white. He didn’t understand what they meant but he slowly took note of them in his mind to think on later.
He can also play with shadows, which he discovered one night, he can make them solid like swords or other objects, he can slightly cast them around him but he gets tired easily so he doesn’t push it as much.

BlackRose79-SinfulSkills: Half-Blood Adventures

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BlackRose79-SinfulSkills: Half-Blood Adventures

Kou sat still in a small alleyway, a slight chill in the air made him huddle to maintain body heat. He stares at a small bakery in front of him. It’s snuggled between a large building and an alley that he calls home half the times. The larger building seems to have fallen out of business, so it’s really curious on how the bakery is still open. The name Heavenly Bakery was written on the windows. The bakery was decorated with snakes and wheat plants which was really unusual for a bakery. After a couple of minutes sitting down he pulls out a small black pocket watch. It’s about 10 pm, the owner of the bakery throws out all the old bread around this, he normally doesn’t mind when Kou takes the bread. It’s not like the owner needs it for anything. Kou hungrly jumped to his feet when he heard the small bell ring and the back door to the bakery opens. The owner steps out, this is the first time Kou actually sees him. A big burly man, with a round belly and a round face to match. He has red facial hair that looks like it's taken years to be there. A half moon of hair sits on his head that match the color of his beard. His eyes look like they belong in a forest of trees, and the smell of bay leaf follows him, which Kou can't differentiate from the man or the store. The man goes over and stands in front of Kou, “Hmp back again I see?” Kou looks to the owner with a half uninterested look, he tries his hardest to not look desperate, it doesn’t seem to work though. The owner smirks and throws the trash outside the door. Kou hesitates before jumping to the bag and ripping it open. There is nothing, just boxes and bags. ‘Fuck… now how do I leave without making a fool of myself’ he thinks to himself. He calmly gets up from the ground , dusting himself off and slowly walks away from the bakery. The baker lets out a deep belly laugh “Now now, why dont you come inside for an actual meal? Eating old bread must not be good after a while” The owner walks after Kou, placing an arm around him and guides him into the shop. Kou tries to protest and hide his eager grin on his face. The bakery smells of wonderful foods, there are so many colorful pastries on the racks and a clear case full of others foods. The shop is warm from the giant bread ovens located in the back, next to the ovens he notices a stairwell leading upwards, which he takes to be where the man lives, since he never sees him leave. Kou takes in all the warmth, not knowing when he will feel it again, with fall nearly over, winter is quickly approaching he will have to find some way to keep warm. The bakery goes up to the counter and waves Kou over to meet him. “So what can I get you boy?” The bakery said in his jolly deep voice. Kou walked up and looked at the display, not really know the names for any of them just points at random things and looks back at the man. The man laughs and pulls out the goods that the boy pointed at and brought them over to a table and set them down. Kou followed and took a seat, only hesitating for a moment before eating as much as he could. The baker sat down “The names Benjamin, nice to meet you there” he looked over to Kou expecting a name in return. Kou wipes his mouth “The names Kou” he says hesitantly. The baker stands up and walks over to the pathway with the stair well. “Well whenever you're done you can stay here for the night, just be outta here before opening.” The baker walks to the side door “Be seeing you boy” Benjamin says and leaves.

BlackRose79-SinfulSkills: Half-Blood Adventures

This good? I'll post the post when you see this, just wanted to make sure I did this part right.