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*"I'm not saying I'm a villain, but my character sheet has a suspiciously high charisma stat."*
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Howdyy
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Maidens? I'd prefer a bastards son lol
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Imma ghostttt
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"Now I am become Death, the destroyer of worlds"

-J. Robert Oppenheimer,
Father of the atomic bomb after witnessing the first test

Work like you don't need the money. Love like you've never been hurt. Dance like nobody's watching. Satchel Paige

A bullet can have your name, but a grenade simply says "to whom it may concern"
Meme by foster

A hero need not speak for when he is gone the world speaks for him
-unknown

The pen is mightier than the sword. The world as your canvas, what you paint on it beware.
-unknown

Either die a hero, or live long enough to see yourself become the villain
-unknown

You know some people see catastrophe and their first thought is 'I need to help' others simply are glad it didnt happen to them, but there is very few who simply grin and think 'I caused this' run from those ones.
-blue

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Two formatting nits. Throw a newline between action symbols and dialogue for readability and you can change the speaker with

Speaker1: I'm talking!
Speaker2: I'm talking now!


I rearranged it is that better?
@Blueflame

*Dances in a nightclub, when a visible chill down my spine freezes me in my tracks*
Ah, yeah, haha—otherworlders...
*Makes my way to the concrete-laden hall to the dimly-lit and grungy bathrooms, watching my back at every turn*

They know..
*shadows begin to darken around the hall as the shadows speak at a hushed volume*
your like me.. Lost and a long way from home..
*others in the area appear unfazed as if they can't hear the voice as it picks up again still just out of veiw*
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Shade Weaver:Damn, really?
*sits on the edge of the sink after having opened the small windows near the ceiling attempting and failing to light a smoke*
*sighs*
Ofcourse it can't be easy
*attempts a second time at lighting the smoke keeping the door in veiw as Umbras presence is felt approaching the door*


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Hahaha fair enough. Do you want me to kick it off? What do you want for the specific setting?


You can kick it of as of the setting Dealers choice, be it one of the group noticing the encroaching darkness or hearing the hushed voices from within that darkness, almost familiar voices, almost your own voice
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Sure. And the character I'm working with has plenty of negative emotions to result in interesting interactions, too.


Your characters Shade would be powerful once risen, Umbra will remember that ;P
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Sure, makes sense. I've had someone acting as a sort of guide recently, so I'll use them. You can pick the setting.


Maybe someone getting angry or frustrated and just feeling defeated begins to feed and draw Umbra as the surroundings begin to darken slowly at first but noticeably more as emotions highten causing Shade to step in to difuse umbra and attempt to help
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Reading up on MR will make you schizophrenic with how many things are going at once

If she's green at the whole Existence thing, are you hoping for something more actiony or "get to know everyone"-y?


Good point, I feel maybe a bit of both cause while she isn't a passive person but she also wouldn't enter a situation unless there was a need for her to interfere be it danger for the surroundings or bystanders
I gotta figure out how or where to introduce them next so ig I need to read up some lol @Legend Begins
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Yeah, generally the right idea. We use asterisks for *actions* and don't narrate anything. And I'm fine with that explanation—how far along in her out-of-dimension journey would she be?


I'm thinking maybe not like fresh off the boat new but certainly still trying to get her bearings
@Memory I get that it's in first person and about the need italicized in some way to make difference know and that you generally stick the what the five senses of the character are and that if you wanting to make in other than that it needs to be in a way everyone can see almost like a camera in a movie. Other than that I may be a little rusty It's been a while since I've been on here, as for ideas I thought maybe during training with one of her students with gravitational powers opened some sort of wormhole anomaly dragging her through and out the other side
No I think I get it and it's kinda alot


I do also have a picture I can change my avatar to that has them both
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