@GingerBoi123Alright, everything's looking fine here to me. Loving the music based theme.
@AquaknightYep, everything's looking good here as well, loving the backstory.
@NevixAll clear over here too, loving the weapon.
@GLITCHOBLIVIONI'd reccommend what Fox said if you can't copy paste the info into the reply box on the forum. Also just to mention, if you are going to play a 15 year old, you're going to have to explain what's special about her case enough that she'd be taken. Lustre Academy is somewhat desperate but an explanation is still required.
@RomanAriaDecent so far, but again, if you're going to make them 15 then you need to add that into their bio.