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    1. Capra 10 yrs ago

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Cold be hand and heart and bone, and cold be my sleep under stone...

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Greetings.

I was wondering if there was interest around for a campaign set in Hell, more precisely in Pandæmonium, the infernal capital. Players would impersonate a small group of demons tasked with a special mission, with a plot revolving around a war with Paradise and other otherwordly forces. It is inspired (in random order) by Milton's Paradise Lost, Alighieri's Divine Comedy, Lovecraft's Cthulhu Mythos, Darksiders, occult and esoteric lore, and many other sources.

The setting, lore and plot are already well fleshed out, but I would first like some feedback before I start posting more detailed stuff.
I made a non-superpowered character. I hope it's fine anyway, otherwise I'm willing to adjust.

Interested. Are we allowed to play Batman-style superheroes? (no superpowers, only technology)
I might be interested.
Might be interested. Are we allowed to play as humans?
The wizard's face is surrounded by a cloud of thick, white smoke, streaming from his nostrils and disappearing above his head, in the dim air of the tavern. Orion grins slightly, looking down at the wooden table, and at the flickering flame of the candle lying on top of it. Vox is trotting around the tavern, picking up with her beak the crumbs and insects on the floor: yet, as the boasting voice from outside reached her hears, she opened her wings and fluttered to her master's shoulder. The wizard turns his head slowly, and pets the owl as he lowers his pipe. His cup of mead stands now half empty before him, reflecting the torchlight illuminating the tavern. Orion raises his gaze to meet that of the demon, then turns his head to see a strangely gesturing girl outside. Orion sighs. Another adventure, another group of bandits.

The wizard draws another hit from his pipe, exhaling from his mouth, as a faint smell spreads in the ether. Orion gets up, put his pipe back in one of his many purses, and turns to the demon, speaking in a deep voice. "I say we go outside. After all, we do need to get going." Vox emits a deep call, as Orion walks outside, raising his hood over his head.
In Judah 9 yrs ago Forum: Advanced Roleplay
Man, go wild. Talk about why he wanted to dabble with the occult in the first place, or what he used his newfound powers for.
In Judah 9 yrs ago Forum: Advanced Roleplay
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jewish_views_on_sin
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Christian_views_on_sin

This should be enough. Also, I read your new CS; while better than the last, there are still a couple of things that need fixing. First of all, there are a few typos (for example, magic is written like this, or magick if you want to listen to Crowley) and sentences that make no sense grammatically (for which to write with?), so I suggest you proofread it. Secondly, I suggest you expand on your backstory: it's kinda flat, the only thing you said was about his summoning of an angel.



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I do think that not is am word?


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