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@Indra and
@Denny, just bringing to your attention the two sheets that still need one more positive review before they are accepted.
Avicenna, Nemu and
Nestal, ReynolfNow, for my own review of
@Gowi's character.
A very intense character you've put forth. Temperamental and paranoid; a dangerous mix. I imagine there will be many a conflict on board the Cloud Chasers involving Pythia. Which is excellent. It's unrealistic to assume a guild that's just a band of glorified misfits wouldn't have a few cogs not turning together. It suggests that you plan a lot of room for Pythia to grow in trust with her comrades, as well as presenting opportunities for other characters to break through her flaming shell. Her highlighted insecurities are very relatable and I look forward to watching you develop her throughout our story.
Fucking Tsundere.
All I have to say to her backstory is that I very much welcome the concept of a character who is related to the old bloodline. In our story you will find very small, but loud groups of individuals that still swear allegiance to the old crown. I'm curious to see how her presence among them will influence the story. It also opens up a whole other slew of potential motivations for characters. Particularly the antagonists. If they were ever to find out there was one last member of the royal bloodline still living, it would drastically change their course of action.
No comment on the magics. Fairly archetypal and I trust you will use them in the appropriate ways.
Character Accepted! 1/2Please await the approval of another GM.
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