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@BurningDaisies Apologies! I didn't realise I overlooked your sheet.

What a charming character you've written up! There are layers to her personality that will no doubt make for some very interesting and perhaps even emotional interactions in the future. I enjoy characters who are generally more positive but are hiding an internal pain. They make for good reads.

The history is fine, but I have to ask if the Charlotte you're referring to is the same Charlotte who was the first Guild Captain of Cloud Chasers? Because if that's the case I'm afraid it wouldn't be possible. Cloud Chasers was established by Charlotte 160 years ago. She's no longer alive.

If it's just a coincidence then pay no mind to the above comment.

I have no issue with the Magic, though I am worried about Dream Wave a little. How quick do the effects settle in? How fast does it spread out around Nemu? Just asking because an ability that can put everyone to sleep in a large radius needs to have some way of potentially escaping it before you're put under it's effects.

Other than that, everything else is great!

Character Accepted! 1/2

Please await one other GM to accept your character.

@Inertia Very nice character you've put forth! I'm curious to learn more about the ancient civilization mentioned in your history.

I think Reynolf will be an excellent fit for one of Cloud Chasers S Class positions.

Though I do need some clarification on what the 'Secret Magics' he possesses are. It doesn't really seem to be mentioned in your spells. It's fine if you don't want to put it out in the open; but please PM myself, Indra and Denny regarding what you have planned.

Other than that I don't have much else to say. Solid character. Everything is explained nicely, particularly your spells.

Character Accepted! 1/2

Please await another GM's approval.

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@zellected Review time!

Okay so personality; I have to say I quite like where your going with this character. I can see what you're aiming for, but I do have to point out that as great as you've explained his traits and quirks there is a substantial lack of any flaws. While I don't doubt that Azazel is a good, honorable person; he is still human and is therefore flawed by nature in some way.

From the way his personality has been written he appears to be level headed with a strong will, appreciating the value of hard work and reaching your goals by your own hand. Though at the same time he believes that helping others is the way one should lead ones life. He's friendly and charismatic with a tactical mind. He does not disrespect his foes, meaning he is not arrogant. He's said to be quite logical, but at the same time he knows when to follow his heart.

The impression I get from this is that you're trying to give him the best of both worlds. Now I'm not saying it's impossible for realistic people to have traits that contradict each other. Though I have to be honest, there doesn't seem to be a single personality flaw listed. I would highly recommend sitting down and really thinking about some of these traits and how his positive traits can be used to create realistic negative ones.

The history is fine. There's some unnecessary details in there that could have been omitted, particularly in the second paragraph during the first time he used his powers. Though you've left enough secrecy to work off of in the IC so I can't complain.

The Magic is iffy because we really don't know a lot about the Arc of Embodiment. It's claimed that there are several limits and restrictions to how it can be used; though we never see any of them in the show. If you can come up with said limitations for the magic then I will be happy to accept it. As it is though, just Arc of Embodiment isn't going to cut it. It's too easy to abuse.

All in all I'm very happy with the concept of your character and I feel with a little tweaking based on my suggestions he'll be ready for acceptance. Until then,

Character Acceptance Pending 0/2

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Hotel Lobby
Interacting with: Jane Addeson @Zarkun

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Isabella couldn't help but start to blush when she saw Jane. Nervously giggling into her hand, she started to feel the wines influence; making her incredibly giddy. Or perhaps Jane's stunning outfit had caught her off guard? Whatever it was, she was surely making a fool of herself. She quickly turned her head away with a small chuckle.
"A Lord? How fitting." She teased, clinking her glass with Jane's before taking another sip. She tilted her head to the side, intertwining her fingers delicately in between each other.

"I didn't expect to be so nervous. I've never attended such an affair with another lady before." Truthfully, she had never felt this way about a lady before either. At first she had accepted Jane's invitation, which may or may not have been serious, as more of a playful way to help break the ice between them. Though as the hours passed, Isabella soon found herself unusually excited to be attending with Jane.

"Well," She began, standing up, "I suppose we should make a move on. Won't want to miss the first dance." Extending her hand out to Jane, Isabella awaited to depart for an evening that no doubt would be a merry one.

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Hotel Lobby
Interacting with: Marlene Evangeline @Lmpkio, Jane Addeson @Zarkun and Isabella Pinelli

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Bullet offered a thumbs up and a grin to Marlene's pleasant reaction to his gift. Though he was caught off guard by the sudden hug, standing there like a stunned mullet. After a few moments, he awkwardly returned the hug by wrapping his arms around Marlene. When the tender moment passed, Bullet took a step back and hid his blushing face by turning to face the door.

"Man, I'm hungry! Let's get going to the ball." He went to take a step, only to stop himself in his tracks. He turned back to face Marlene, extending his arm hesitantly out to her.

"Go get 'em, Bull!" A loud, familiar voice called out from across the room. Immediately turning to where Isabella was, Bullet saw her and Jane departing the lobby themselves for the party. Isabella in particular was very obviously pointing to Marlene before giving her friend a thumbs up. He responded in turn with an awkward smirk. He caught Jane's eye briefly, his face softening to a gentle smile. Despite everything, he was glad that Isabella was with someone that made her happy. There was no point being bitter that it wasn't him right now; not when he was with Marlene.

Turning back to Marlene, he held out his arm to her more confidently this time; shoulder squared and chest held out proudly.

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Ballroom
Interacting with: Sayatachi Nijiki @Lmpkio

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Rosalina was briefly lost in the festive music that breathed life into the ballroom, admiring the finesse of those playing the instrument. She had briefly wanted to pursue a career in music once; though that was before her life became complicated. Despite seemingly zoning out, she was still attentive to everything Sayatachi was saying. Finishing her drink with one final swig, she set the cup down on a nearby table for a server to pick up later before addressing the other woman's concerns.
"I didn't see the girls Magic, but she has a strange presence. The man is incredibly powerful. I didn't exactly see his magic but he was capable of appearing out of thin air without me noticing. They no doubt would be assets. Though I find their relationship curious."

Sighing, Rosalina offered a soft smile to her friend before accepting another drink from a passing server. She briefly considered slowing down, but the last few days had been taxing enough to merit cutting loose a little.
"It shames me that I would be so desperate for recruits to consider accepting random strangers who I find on the streets. Desperate times, eh?" While she spoke, Rosalina scanned the ballroom in hopes of finding some Guild Masters present. As the new leader of the Knights and their representative on the Council, she had hoped to formerly introduce herself to them. Though with so many people dressed up, it was hard to pin point any direct person.

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@Zarkun I'm not too sure right now. I've been a little busy.

I will put time aside tonight for it though. Don't want to keep you guys waiting too long.

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@Apollosarcher Thank you for letting me know.

That means, @Inertia, there is a spot for you if you desire it.

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@Lmpkio @Raijinslayer @Pkken and @Fenris123

With all of your sheets finished, we're going to start the review process.

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Now to the people who expressed interest and haven't shown up yet:

@zellected @Kal-El @Sarcelle Renard @Guilty Spark @Aegis1650 @Neurovoid @Apollosarcher

Friendly reminder that the OOC is up. If you no longer have any interest or feel you can't participate for whatever reason, please let me know asap. You're all entitled to a spot, but we do have about three people waiting to see if they can join the RP.

Phoenix Wing (A Fairy Tail RP-Always Open, Open)

@Lmpkio I will post today once I just finish sorting something out for CC

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Obligatory reminder to everyone that we have a Discord. It's the perfect place to share memes and get no actual roleplay related discussion done. PM me for the link.

Phoenix Wing (A Fairy Tail RP-Always Open, Open)

@Expolar I'm cool with it!