@Crimson Raven Thank you!

Also, when you post a CS for review, make sure you mention myself, Caits and Expolar so we see it. Too many times do we miss CSes because they're buried in the flow of the OOC.

Also, pardon the double post, but @Leslie Hall, when might I expect a post?

@Zarkun I'm not too sure right now. I've been a little busy.

I will put time aside tonight for it though. Don't want to keep you guys waiting too long.

Not quite sure if this should go into characters nor if this is the right way to apply. :P
Name: Parrot
Age: Twenties to Thirties
Birthday: It's not recorded.
Magic: Parrot has amazing magic capabilities. Unfortunately, when it comes to offensive magic, he is limited to the absolute basics, and even that's a stretch. Most of his kit revolves around Reconnaissance and research. His stealth magic is exceptional, though not outstanding.
His Archive magic, though useful in information gathering and dispersing, is not meant for fighting. It can neither protect or harm.
He can teleport at will, though he cannot teleport too large of objects (yes to bags of stuff, no to humans and large crates). When teleporting across dimensions, he cannot take anything except his clothes and parrot. Also, he can only teleport to places that are in his line of sight or that he had already set a "marker" before. (The marker can be destroyed, though it requires much to detect such a thing).
Parrot also knows a few potent magics through his findings, but these magics are severely limited due to his nature. Though, he can use the potent magics at full power when he goes over the edge, but that usually ends poorly for his physical being...
Magic Level: A (really C in terms of fighting...)
History: Not much is known about Parrot. Records up to his teens are absent. His origin, his age, and his original name, are all a mystery. The story goes that he suddenly appeared in the forest East of Magnolia. He was found injured in the attire described below. When he was nursed back to full health, he simply, disappeared. There are reports of him being at two places in one day, when those two places were half a world away! It is said that he had settled near the Hakobe Mountain, though regularly visiting a few special people everyday.
Also, it can be deduced that Parrot knows many things that he shouldn't, considering the reports of him being nearly everywhere. His extensive knowledge and where it ends is not known. He may know where your keys were last week, or where something very powerful may lie...
Personality:
Positive: Observant, Charismatic (When needed), Intelligent, Intuitive, Curious, Stoic, Loyal
Negative: Extremely Shy, Awkward, Silent, Cowardly, Cold, Existential, Volcano (If pushed over edge)
Guild and guild mark location: He's not quite sure which one to join
Team Members: His Pet Eclectus Parrot
Three Strengths:
1. Reconnaissance
2. Research and Knowledge
3. Tactics
Three Weaknesses: (Make them Applicable)
1. Fighting and Strength
2. Curiosity (Getting into sticky situations...)
3. Anger (When pushed over edge)
Greatest Love: None (Aims to stay virgin)
Motivation: A deep curiosity with the world around him.
Appearance: Parrot is more or less five and a half feet tall and has a lean build. He has vibrant green hair with streaks of blue and red at the sides (like an Eclectus parrot). His eyes are a deep shade of green and his eye brows are a woody brown. When studying or outside, he is seen wearing a cloak similar to the color scheme of his hair. Also, he has a pet Eclectus parrot that accompanies him. When on missions, he usually dons enchanted cloak that changes appearance based on the surroundings. Without fail, you can see him wearing sandals if you lift up his robes.
Additional Details: His pet bird, an Eclectus parrot, is actually enchanted. This peculiar bird can speak and think just like a human can and can function as Aera magic user. The methods Parrot used is not known. He will not divulge the secret to his talking parrot, nor the information he's stored up in his Archive and mind. He has lots and lots of information due to him bouncing around. He may have knowledge on the performance of the mythical lost magics such as slayer magics. Along with ancient magics, Parrot also loves to study nature and its functions.

Shoot, I missed Joshua by two minutes. I'll get you when I address Zarkun as well, after his response of course.

Not quite sure if this should go into characters nor if this is the right way to apply. :P
Name: Parrot
Age: Twenties to Thirties
Birthday: It's not recorded.
Magic: Stealth, Archive (Limited fighting), Spatial (Teleportation), and a few others (though extremely limited)
Magic Level: A (really C in terms of fighting...)
History: Not much is known about Parrot. Records up to his teens are absent. His origin, his age, and his original name, are all a mystery. The story goes that he suddenly appeared in the forest East of Magnolia. He was found injured in the attire described below. When he was nursed back to full health, he simply, disappeared. There are reports of him being at two places in one day, when those two places were half a world away! It is said that he had settled near the Hakobe Mountain, though regularly visiting a few special people everyday.
Also, it can be deduced that Parrot knows many things that he shouldn't, considering the reports of him being nearly everywhere. His extensive knowledge and where it ends is not known. He may know where your keys were last week, or where something very powerful may lie...
Personality:
Positive: Observant, Compassionate, Intelligent, Hardworking, Intuitive
Negative: Shy, Cowardly, Cold, Existential, Hotheaded (If pushed over edge)
Guild and guild mark location: He's not quite sure which one to join
Team Members: None
Three Strengths:
1. Reconnaissance
2. Research and Knowledge
3. Tactics
Three Weaknesses: (Make them Applicable)
1. Fighting and Strength
2. Naive
3. Anger (When pushed over edge)
Greatest Love: None (Aims to stay virgin)
Motivation: A deep curiosity with the world around him.
Appearance: Parrot is more or less five and a half feet tall and has a lean build. He has vibrant green hair with streaks of blue and red at the sides (like an Eclectus parrot). His eyes are a deep shade of green and his eye brows are a woody brown. When studying or outside, he is seen wearing a cloak similar to the color scheme of his hair. Also, he has a pet Eclectus parrot that accompanies him except on missions. When on missions, he usually dons enchanted cloak that changes appearance based on the surroundings. Without fail, you can see him wearing sandals if you lift up his robes.
Additional Details: His pet bird, an Eclectus parrot, is actually enchanted. This particular bird can speak just like a human can. The methods Parrot used is not known. He will not divulge the secret to his talking parrot, nor the information he's stored up in his Archive and mind. He has lots and lots of information due to him bouncing around. He may have knowledge on the performance of the mythical lost magics such as slayer magics. Along with ancient magics, Parrot also loves to study nature and its functions.

Alrighty then, I'll take first crack at your CS. First of all, if you want magics like that, you need to either A)decrease the class of several to D or below or B) limit the number of magics he knows and pick one to up to at least an A rank. Second, stealth isn't really a magic so much as a skill, so it's not something you HAVE to list in magics unless you can make a magic that's entire purpose is stealth, like a Rogue in WoW. Thirdly, lots of knowledge for a character who's backstory is just a bunch of "no records have been found." I hate to say it, but unless you can provide at least myself and my fellow GMs a good reason via PM, as I can understand wanting to keep surprises for your fellow players, I'm not sure I can allow that much knowledge. In fact, until my first and third points are addressed, I can't OK this CS.

All that said, this is indeed the place to post a CS for review.

@Caits@Expolar Who's next?

@ZarkunOK. Thank you for the feedback!

@Burthstone forgot to mention you :p

Oi who said people could heat things up without Ash? XD

Oi who said people could heat things up without Ash? XD

Shhh it's fine. Eddy's just messing with folks XD

@Silver Fox
Without Ash? XD

@Silver Fox
Without Ash? XD

Don't think she's met Ash so yeah XD

I dont know who Ash is cause I can never keep track of your characters XD

@Silver Fox
The one in Frenzy Plant XD

@Silver Fox
The one in Frenzy Plant XD

ohhhh yeaaah I knew that *goes to look it up*

@Silver Fox
Fire wizard. We were LITERALLY talking about her the other day XD

@Silver Fox
Fire wizard. We were LITERALLY talking about her the other day XD

I know we were talking about her, I just have 0 idea who she is XD cause again... Honestly i cant name a character you play :P

@Silver Fox
I can name....most of them. There are a couple whose names escape me because they were there to add fodder characters into Shadow Heart XD
The main ones to remember are Ash, Cody and Ethel. They're my main trio. Then Sora, Jasmine and Jess and Mai to lesser extents.
My mains from Shadow Heart are Manami, Shiro and Maxie really.

@Silver Fox
I can name....most of them. There are a couple whose names escape me because they were there to add fodder characters into Shadow Heart XD
The main ones to remember are Ash, Cody and Ethel. They're my main trio. Then Sora, Jasmine and Jess and Mai to lesser extents.
My mains from Shadow Heart are Manami, Shiro and Maxie really.

Well it be odd if the creator couldnt name them XD

Also, just read Ash's file, funny enough she seems she'd get along with both Karn's :P

Karn: He eats alot, is also mainly a fire user. Beast fire but fire. Though unlike Fire Wizards, he has a good temper. (well.. til he goes berserk)

Edo-Karn: She's great at hand to hand and pressure points. Also flirty, mischievous, and enjoys cracking jokes. And riling up everyone else with no shits given.

Interesting :P

@Silver Fox
Huh. One might say I did it on purpose, but it's a coincidence XD
While she doesn't particularly enjoy riling people up, doesn't mean she won't XD The more riled up someone is, the more likely they are to fight her after all :P And she loves to fight!

Also there are a couple of guys who I haven't used yet who I keep going 'Oh...right, they exist' XD If I use them I *might* remember them XD

@ALonelyParrot

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