Tag me if I need to review anything guys.

P.S I am no longer going to use Orgasm Magic in the RP. Mainly because I don't want any of us to write porn in the story. Also I had a talk with my pals.

I'm going with Enchantment instead. Wendy Black is my favorite character :D

Evil Wendy

Hm, I've been kindly informed by @Crimson Raven

that I should tag on a new post since edited posts don't tag soooo
@Leslie Hall@Indra@Denny

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@RaijinSlayer
DeSMarkings Is your character going to have these marks?

FYI. All Devil Slayers in the RP have the potential to do it.

@IndraDon't those only show up when they get their power-boosted by a corpse, and then only last for a small amount of time while the curse energy is in them? If that's not the case, then he might have the markings from the time he got his arm taken off cause of the Hellion.

If your asking if he'd develop them in a fight with a demon, then I'd assume so since it's part of how the magic works, unless I'm missing something(which is likely since I don't know that much about DeS stuff, never got that far in Fairy Tail, so if you could explain how the marks are supposed to function, that'd be awesome.)

edit: Okay, I read the Wiki a bit more closely this time around and I don't think that he'd have them. Lazulin is extremely cautious about using his DeS magic, and takes his time in learning the ins and outs of it.

@BurningDaisies Apologies! I didn't realise I overlooked your sheet.

What a charming character you've written up! There are layers to her personality that will no doubt make for some very interesting and perhaps even emotional interactions in the future. I enjoy characters who are generally more positive but are hiding an internal pain. They make for good reads.

The history is fine, but I have to ask if the Charlotte you're referring to is the same Charlotte who was the first Guild Captain of Cloud Chasers? Because if that's the case I'm afraid it wouldn't be possible. Cloud Chasers was established by Charlotte 160 years ago. She's no longer alive.

If it's just a coincidence then pay no mind to the above comment.

I have no issue with the Magic, though I am worried about Dream Wave a little. How quick do the effects settle in? How fast does it spread out around Nemu? Just asking because an ability that can put everyone to sleep in a large radius needs to have some way of potentially escaping it before you're put under it's effects.

Other than that, everything else is great!

Character Accepted! 1/2

Please await one other GM to accept your character.

@Inertia Very nice character you've put forth! I'm curious to learn more about the ancient civilization mentioned in your history.

I think Reynolf will be an excellent fit for one of Cloud Chasers S Class positions.

Though I do need some clarification on what the 'Secret Magics' he possesses are. It doesn't really seem to be mentioned in your spells. It's fine if you don't want to put it out in the open; but please PM myself, Indra and Denny regarding what you have planned.

Other than that I don't have much else to say. Solid character. Everything is explained nicely, particularly your spells.

Character Accepted! 1/2

Please await another GM's approval.

@Leslie Hall

Thank you!

As for the secret magics, I've mentioned the specific magic(s) in the spells listed haha! Sorry for not clarifying. He may get more spells as the IC progresses and he gets more experience? (Well, more like If I can think of some semblance of clever-ish spells!)

@Inertia

Nice seeing you again, btw.

@Gowi

Haha, yep, it is!
Fancy character you got as per usual.

Don't wanna clutter up the ooc sooo;

@Leslie Hall

The Charlotte name was a coincidence. I actually forgot about the founder's name.

As for the Dream Wave spell, you bring up very good points. I guess I didn't review it thoroughly enough. I'll go back and add in a few clarifications.

Edit; I added--what seemed like--some reasonable limitations.

@BurningDaisies Looks all good on my end!

As for everyone else; special announcement.

The RP is now opened up to allow a few more people in! Additionally, you can submit a second character if you so desire.

@hatakekuro You have a designated spot if you so desire it.

@raijinslayer Good to know. I did explain in my DeS Notes that it gives a huge power boost. An example of it would be Gray's Ice Make having legit destruction capacity.

These manga spoilers are for those who want to know how strong a Devil Slayer is, I know you're no Gray but I am showing the effects of those markings and insanity as well as whatever power boosts.

My 2nd character would be named Indra. He is going to be a bratty and perverted know it all like me with a father named Denny and a mother named Leslie. His goal is to look for his Uncle, Raijin. He keeps a lot of smut in his Archive Magic. He would be the Cloud Chaser's Navigator~ and he's only 12 years old. About time we have a shota. His official quotes are: "Did you know *insert smartass comment*" and "OH MY GOWI! DEN LES GOWI TO ADVENTURE TO THE CRIMSON LANDS WHERE THERE ARE RAVENS AND ABSURD GRAVITY AND INERTIA! IT IS ALL ALTERED IN THIS TUNDRA, HOLD ON RAIJIN NO BODY IS GONNA SLAY YOU BECAUSE GOD SLAYER'S DON'T EXIST!"

@Indra Sometimes I feel like my brain is incapable of comprehending the inner mechanisms of your mind.

@Leslie Hall You can't comprehend God/Indra which is 1000 times electrifying and Godlier than @RaijinSlayer and not to mention, Indra be having a pet Kaiju named Kio.

@Indra Psst respond to the PM before I get the flail out.

Alright, my Madara I mean Jun sheet is coming. I sure hope I don't get anyone bitching cuz it\s not gonna be orgasm magic.