@BurningDaisies Apologies! I didn't realise I overlooked your sheet.
What a charming character you've written up! There are layers to her personality that will no doubt make for some very interesting and perhaps even emotional interactions in the future. I enjoy characters who are generally more positive but are hiding an internal pain. They make for good reads.
The history is fine, but I have to ask if the Charlotte you're referring to is the same Charlotte who was the first Guild Captain of Cloud Chasers? Because if that's the case I'm afraid it wouldn't be possible. Cloud Chasers was established by Charlotte 160 years ago. She's no longer alive.
If it's just a coincidence then pay no mind to the above comment.
I have no issue with the Magic, though I am worried about Dream Wave a little. How quick do the effects settle in? How fast does it spread out around Nemu? Just asking because an ability that can put everyone to sleep in a large radius needs to have some way of potentially escaping it before you're put under it's effects.
Other than that, everything else is great!
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@Inertia Very nice character you've put forth! I'm curious to learn more about the ancient civilization mentioned in your history.
I think Reynolf will be an excellent fit for one of Cloud Chasers S Class positions.
Though I do need some clarification on what the 'Secret Magics' he possesses are. It doesn't really seem to be mentioned in your spells. It's fine if you don't want to put it out in the open; but please PM myself, Indra and Denny regarding what you have planned.
Other than that I don't have much else to say. Solid character. Everything is explained nicely, particularly your spells.
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