I suppose there's no point in reviewing Crash's sheet now.
@Crimson Raven, your input is valuable and you're entitled to give it; but could you refrain from doing so until at least one GM has given their full review? Especially where new characters are concerned.
While nothing you said was technically wrong, it was said in a manner that does not reflect the attitude of myself and the GM team of Cloud Chasers.
And to clarify, when I said the sheet was fine (which I did), it was less of an acceptance and more of a "It's fine, go post it in the OOC for proper reviewing". I don't read through or accept sheets that have been PM'd directly to me and me alone because I'm pretty adamant about "If you want a proper opinion, put it in the OOC so I can get to it with all the rest". I apologise, I should have made that clearer.