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Galen Derricson


Gale grinned, glad to have a conspirator in his plot to have a hunting adventure in the woodlands. "Great, I-" Then he was surprised by another body wrapping around him- or just the body's arm anyway. Alph's voice brought an excited smile to his face, one that was sure to endure all day because of the older boy's return to the village. Only it didn't. He glanced down at the compliment, embarrassed at the flush of emotion that ran through him, and glanced back up just in time to see Alph's expression flicker, making Galen doubt the honesty of the words.

Feeling doubly embarrassed about his feelings twisting up in response to false words, Gale's expression fell, and he looked away to hide it while Gren invited Alph along. It was a good idea, embarrassed or not, Galen wanted to hear the stories all the same.

He began looking around for the others they were going to invite. Maybe one of the girls? Few of them hunted, and it would be nice to change things up and bring on of them along, or a few if they wanted, Galen had no desire keep the wonders of traipsing about the woodlands to the menfolk only. A glance back at Alph revealed the distraction for what it was. He hastily forced himself to forget the fleeting misunderstanding on his part.

He was about to voice the idea, of seeking out the girls, when a new voice called out to them. Demund had found them, and was now fussing over Alph's sword. Alph was quite popular among the youths in Mashal, he wasn't even surprised really, after all, Gale was quite fond of the reckless young man himself. Demund's fretting was actually quite amusing, and returned the grin to Galen's face. "He won't be needing that where we're going." He commented, "Why don't you come with us? We're going to try and get the jump on something furry munching on the still-dewy leaves." He said almost teasingly, though who he was teasing was up in the air. "I'm feeling lucky today, think we might even make some extra." That wasn't exactly true, he wasn't convinced that was what he was feeling, but something was going to happen and what was more likely than a good hunt?
Galen Derricson


Gale stumbled forward a step when someone crashed into him, and he turned to see an apologizing Grendel behind him. He hid a wince, having entirely forgotten about the boy and that he likely hadn't been able to get out of the storm what with everyone who was awake focused on protecting their possessions, livestock, and crops rather than the homeless kid.

"Don't worry about it," he dismissed easily, after a night like the one Gren no doubt had, Galen could forgive something as minor as an accidental collision. He then gave the boy a speculative glance over, concluding he was probably hungry, and likely bored. "Say, feel like scoring a meal?" If they left now they might be able to catch a few woodland critters just stumbling out of their homes after a long night sheltereing from the storm. Gren probably needed that food, but they could always sell the extra to the butcher's and make a bit of coin, splitting it between them.

Really he just wanted to get out of town, that feeling that something big was happening was still stirring cheerfully in his gut. They could invite a few others too, this soon after such a nasty storm the woods were likely quite full, enough to score a surplus if they were lucky. Much of the village seemed content with their lazy day or too busy repairing the storm damage to participate in a hunt however, so they'd have to go it alone or pick up those they felt they could convince to go. "We could get a group hunt together, what do you think?"
@ViolentViolet I like it! And having a village educator telling stories to the kids about the outside world fills in a lot of holes. Lots of small towns and villages will have questionable knowledge of the outside world, flawed with stories of elves stealing children, dwarven cannibals, and urgals growing to the size of mountains, none of these things have any evidence supporting it, and yet people don't have any evidence against it and it's exactly the kind of thing small uneducated isolated villagers would believe. Having well traveled people, and ones willing to tell stories of the world to children, essentially bypasses these flaws.
@BurningCold Glad you pointed this out, I was just about to go look it up myself. Couldn't recall them being mentioned ever, so I figured I'd brush up on what they are in canon.

@ViolentViolet Keep in mind the Empire and the Elves are not in a good place, if she looks too elfy someone might report her and get her caught or killed. Then it's away to be bound by loyalty oaths to Galby and join his spell casters or become a spy among the elves. You could have her look more human for now, naturally assuming the traits of those she lives with, and then highlighting the elfy parts once she's with the elves and their elfy costumes and elfy ideologies.
Mashal, The Broddring Empire
October 10th, 7999 AC


It had rained in the night, a dark and viscious storm who's wind tore across roofs like the wings of a thousand dragons scraping overhead. The sky lit with charged light, flashing across the landscape and coming down on the earth with vengeance. To any spectator it might have appeared as if the sky had gone to war with the ground.

The worst had been the rain, pounding down as far as the eye could see, and washing away everything that wasn't nailed down. Many farmers forced themselves out of their homes to watch their fields and make sure the channels and other precautions they had set did their job. More than a few would be hastily replanting small sections that gave way. The more neighborly farmers opened their barns and sheds up to those who didn't have any, allowing their animals to mingle for the sake of keeping them dry instead of letting them get sick and cold.

The storm petered out late in the night, but before the sun rose. The village slumbered for a few more hours than usual, trying to make up for lost sleep. Even as the day went on the village came into motion slowly and with wide yawns being traded in the streets. Despite the weather, the storm moved quickly and was out of sight before the first rays of light. The day grew steadily hotter, and soon there would be no signs of the storm except for the bloated river to the east and the bridge whose western end was in the now-expanded river.

If anything, today was shaping up to be the slowest and most unexciting day in the town's history.




Galen Derricson


Something big was going to happen today. That was Gale's first thought when he awoke that night. Moments later he was wondering why, exactly, had he woken up in the middle of the night? As thunder cracked the sky, he decided that that must have been the reason. The sound of rain striking the ceiling also might have done it.

He was half a thought through deciding to roll over and continue sleeping when Freya popped into his mind. They hadn't finished her shelter! She was going to be soaked!

Thus explained the reason he was among those up and racing about the town in the middle of the night. In the end, he was soaked no matter how fast he ran, so he inevitably stopped running. Freya was allowed to sleep in the neighbors shed, which also played home to three cats and five sheep that night. The horse didn't seem thrilled at the arrangement, but neither did she wander into the fields, even when the doors were left open and the storm had passed.

Gale spent the morning back in bed, but even after the few hours he'd spent napping he was cold. His hands were at least, and his face and feet. The blanket around his shoulders did a fair enough job drying and warming the rest of him. It was long after the usual time he woke up everyday when he finally left the house, finding it empty and his parents likely busy.

For a moment he stood outside under the sun, trying to decide what he should do for the day. Then a horse whinnied from nearby and he started off to collect Freya. She couldn't stay in the neighbor's shed all day, and he needed to feed her and water her, and give her a blanket, just in case she was still cold too.

It didn't take long to do those things, and soon he was wondering what to do again. After a moment of thought he decided to go to the forge. The sun was quite warm that day, considering how cold and nasty it had been that night, but Gale would bet the forge would be much warmer.

He wasn't the only one to think so, and by the time he arrived many people had been shooed off and a ring of fires had spread out nearby while a few people huddled by the forge itself. The fires were mostly small campfires, but in a nearby field a taller fire had been made with thicker logs, hosting a larger group of people. Many had decided this was to be a lazy day, despite how rare those were. Most of the attendants were mothers, their children nearby playing together, others were those who could afford a day off or were too old to work.

Gale was one of those who could afford the day off, but something in him said this wouldn't be one of those days.

He approached the biggest fire, in the field, sure that if he wanted to rid himself of the lingering chill that fire would do it fastest. A large log had been rolled over, providing a few with a place to sit, and another was in the process of being moved closer to provide more seating. Gale wasn't concerned though, he didn't need a place to sit.

He wasn't just going to stand there all alone though, so he started glancing around to see if he could find any of his friends.
@Awesomoman64 Accepted!

I'll start on an opening post today and post it tomorrow. We've got a good number already, so I'm not going to make you guys wait too much longer! Those who don't have characters done don't worry, you've still got time!
Alright, I got you. Galbatorix will have some interesting surprises in store, but the whole name of magic or whatever, that's out.
@Gisk@Forsythe

Can you guys elaborate on that, Gisk is saying nerf Gally and Forsythe is saying leave him as is?
Of course! There's a lot to learn and a lot of story to cover, expect timeskips as necessary.
@BurningCold I'm fine with any number, the ones who've shown interest are certainly enough for me to start, but I'm fine with more additions.

The sudden appearance of more dragon riders is going to attract the attention from all the people that eragon attracted, so we're going to be intertwining with them quite heavily. If anyone wants to play one of those people (Murtagh, Eragon, Thorn, Saphira, Arya, Nasuada, Islanzadi, Brom, others..) then please pm me a short audition for the role. Just a short paragraph or two to prove a grasp of the character's reactions, traits, and motivations. If no one wants to play them I can fill the role myself, though that is a bit of a hefty load if people start splitting up.

Gallywix- I mean Galbatorix- is one badass OP SOB, but even he would be overwhelmed by so many new riders if they're allowed to grow. I have plans in place to even the odds however, both new additions to the enemies' ranks and Galbatorix himself. The king may have piddled about unconcerned with news of one lowly untrained rider parading about and gathering his enemies in one place where he can slaughter them all in one go, but with so many? Expect him to make a personal appearance instead of plotting in his palace.
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