ok last try, i hope all i really changed was the magic part because i was told to be more detailed with how she would use it. here we go.
Name: Tori, nickname: T
Age: 16
Race: human
Appearance: blue hair to the side, natural hair brown ( see my profile pic) 6 foot 5, usually has light blue shirt and grey shorts.
Role: mainly is just a hunter but will fight if needed.
Bio: Tori is from a area where the woods are thick and the town is far away. One day during a hunting trip, her mother and father were attacked by a bear which had hurt them so much they couldn't move their legs, Tori was then put in charge of the family at age 11, her brother being only a year younger than her was able to take care of the family when Tori would go hunting for food. Her mother and father were still able to use magic sense they were advanced in it even if self taught. They would teach Tori every day but her mother's magic ( plant magic) stuck more, one day Tori found a school for magic. After saving up enough money she went to school for magic, after school she had just turned 16 and learned her mother and father had passed away after a sickness struck the town. Her brother kept the house together and had told Tori that he would be ok and going to school also. Tori then worked as a guard of a richer and bigger town's royalty, after months of only small news the town was buzzing with talk of a new land, Tori had never thought she would be able to go, one day an attack was made on the castle with all the other guards fighting outside of the walls, she was trying to get the king and queen out of the castle. After the victory Tori thought she would just go back to a calm guard life. With her name going around the town for saving the royal family, she had been talked to and asked about what happened, one day someone came up to her with a flyer talking about a new land in a portal. Seeing as she could find a new place that her and her brother ( with him leaving school in two years) could live safely. She took that chance and hasn't looked back.
Skills: Skilled hunter, guard, and pretty good with a sword
Magic: Plant ( able to make small walls of rose bushes but if she doesn't focus they will wilt, breaking the wall. In a less of a battle guard stance she can sprout small trees like apple trees, that's not very useful though because it starts off as a sprout. )
Equipment: Bow,arrows, sword, natural made face paint ( will share with friends)
Other: Tori has a bit of a trust issue even with close friends, seems really closed off until you get to know her.
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Ok i hope i did good now ^^