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5 yrs ago
Current "Bother. Isn't there anybody at all?" "Nobody!"
5 yrs ago
Trying on shoes and going for a walkabout - will return to closet when I'm good and ready!
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Fell into the abyss of Closet... digging out from under all of the shoes.
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Time is mine for a full month! :) Yay!!!
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A long time player, I have been co-writing (aka "role playing") for "ae long tahm". I have a fairly involved career which some years can be nigh all encompassing for months and months at a time. However, I always seem to return for the sheer delight of creating alongside another imaginative individual.

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Alice looked up sharply from where she was humming “Working on a Building” while patching a dress to the slam of the door. “Father,” she frowned.

The man was pale as he stomped into the cheerily lit room to sit heavily into a rocking chair. He withdrew a kerchief from his pocket and wiped his pate. “Alice, Oh Alice,” he moaned.

This action was so very much different from how he generally entered that Alice sat up in alarm and set her sewing to the side. With quick movements, she was at his side, her small hand on his shoulder. “Father?” she asked, this time, worry in her tone. “What is it?”

The man was quaking and he set his hand upon hers, clutched it to him and closed his eyes. His cheek was damp with sweat and that might have been usual if only he wasn't pale.

“Are you well?” she smoothed what hair he had back and kissed his brow. “Shall I fetch Dr. Hanson?” He was so very pale looking. His cheek was generally ruddy and smiling, but of late he had been under a cloud of worry. He had worked longer hours and come home a time or two smelling of spirits. She wasn't fully certain why he might be struggling, but she had done her best to not concern herself over it. Rather, she had kept the house clean, bright, and food upon the table that he liked to eat; peach pie and what greens they managed to coax from her small garden watered from their deep well.

“Oh, Alice,” his voice trembled, low and so very unlike himself that the alarm rose in her breast to fear. She went to her knee, clutching his arm. “Oh Alice,” he looked down to her and his eyes were wet. “Daniel is dead. Shot in the street.”

“Daniel?” she gasped. He was a new acquaintance of her father's having come in on the rail but a month prior. Still, to have been killed? Shot? As in a gun?

It was a hard town, she knew this, but in some way, her father had managed to keep much of the darkest shadows in town from touching his daughter. It may not, he thought as he looked down at her earnest face, have been the best choice. She would have been better had he sent her with her brother to the East when he left for school.

He stood, left her there, and went to the roll back desk where he pulled out a letter. He came to her side and pressed it into her hands. “You will go to your Aunt's,” he insisted.

“But, but why? Father?” she cried. “You are frightening me.”

“If only,” he muttered as he returned to his seat, staring at the floor, “if only I hadn't listened to him.”
Heh - it's a saying. Something you get to say aloud. If you say it without someone aware, it sounds like something else. Generally (not in this case, but generally) when someone says "You should..." they're insulting you or trying to give you an ideal to live up to. So a quick rejoined is "Stop shoulding on me." Because, generally when someone says "You should really be a better person," it feels like we're getting dumped on.

But in your case, that was perfect. :) So I just got to be silly instead.

And maybe you are. Your writing is amazing, so perhaps you've gotten someone intrigued? Or maybe they're trying to figure out if you would be a good partner? I do that.
You, my dear, are shoulding on me.

And I will. ;) Small posts only.
Nah, I'll take a character. And I think if you or I really fall for a character and want to keep them, we can call dibs - either permanently or for a time. If it don't work, we can go back to sole control over everything. Heck, I'm willing to try it all. It's a challenge to share that creative control and I am totally up for it. :)

But yeah - I will take her on. For now. Because you know, dame walking into a cowboy's bunkhouse, her perfume the scent of lavender and something cheap. He knew she'd get his heart if he wasn't careful and if he really wasn't careful, maybe his wallet while she was at it. Never his horse though. Never his horse.
*S* You may do as you wish. I have Badger and Ribsy... I had hoped one or the other might be her eventual partner, but it's just as possible that they'd end up partnered and she'd have someone else, or everyone would get different partners. I'm comfortable with whatever route you want the story to go. :)
Oh no.. :) There are some, where it is how they do every post. I suppose I wanted to assure you that isn't the case, but yes - writing over it was totally comfortable for me.
I don't generally write back over a scene that has already been written, @eskimolander, but I figured it fit this situation. Otherwise, I'd have to process her freak-out later on and that's never any fun. Better to follow the rabbit from the beginning. :)

Jaq managed a scream half way up and the sound did little to ease away the way there seemed an attraction to every part of her body. So when she was drawn through a large hole and deposited somewhat roughly against the …

Not an idiot and just because something was unlikely, didn't make it impossible. Highly improbable, no doubt, but never impossible. And if there was metal under her knees where she knelt, boneless, then someone had put it there. She sucked in breath, coughing past the pain in her throat, then looked around her.

The room was cavernous. Large, storage tanks sat against walls and stacked upon one another, tethered with some manner of thickened rope. Not military issue then. It was silly to think “military” just because she'd been sucked into a room in the sky, but she wasn't ready for what else could be doing the same thing. At that point of time, the probability index got so large and open-ended that anything was possible and she wasn't ready to deal with time travel, aliens, or heaven being a warehouse like space with what had been a very direct beam of light as an elevator.

Her body wracked with another choking cough, almost fell and she planted her hands down, one hand coming down on her magnum. She hadn't lost it. She laughed, lost a bit, then reached for it. If nothing else, she could make some damage for whomever thought it was a good idea to nab her.

Fingers closing around the gun, suddenly the entire floor juddered underneath her and a force, very similar to thrust (who was she kidding? She'd been flying long enough to know thrust – only she hadn't flown jet planes and this was less like her old Cessna and a bit more like a F-13 press), threw her headlong, skittering down the floor. Everything inclined (ascent, then) and she scrabbled at the smooth flooring, losing the gun, and tumbling hard into one of the large crates. Her head hit the side of the container hard and she held tightly to the rope (smooth, thin, like silk almost) as the entire warehouse (c'mon, you can call it a ship) inclined and then put on an extra burst of speed.

There was a knock through the entire space, like atmospheric interference, and then the ride smoothed out. She knew, intellectually, that they had to be going fast or there would have been some deceleration forces to contend with but she'd never thought anything could be so fast without some interaction with the air.

Unless they weren't in air any more.

Her head hurt. And the air smelled funny. She coughed again, pulled herself to her feet, and wobbled across the floor just as a door opened opposite of her.

Frozen at the sight before her, her mind spinning to wonder where in hell her gun had flown, she stared at the... They were strange, alien. With a burst of panic, she turned and bolted back toward where she'd been thrown. She had to find her weapon.

It wasn't like she'd learn any time soon, but it seemed to her that she might have thought of the whole resistance is futile bollocks when she'd been pulled in by their tractor beam. Still, she had to try and she knew the foregone conclusion of something sharp pricking the back of her shoulder was going to take her down. They were fast, too. Faster than she was. She was concussed and couldn't breathe from all the panic and they – well, they were weird alien thingies with alien technology. When she hit the ground, her cheek bloomed into pain and she rolled to one side, pushed weakly at hands that grasped her arms, and then went dark.

Nothing of the panic and all of the pain in cheek and head and back were present when she woke, however. Jaq reached up to touch her forehead. She blinked and instead of the usual white of a hospital room, she saw muted colors and rounded corners. She frowned. “How bad?” she groaned out around the musty feeling of her mouth. How bad had the crash been?

”Good morning,” an unfamiliar voice with a strange accent intoned.

Turning her head toward the sound, she blinked and then rubbed her eyes. “Sorry, morning. My eyes are acting funny. What drugs you guys got me on?”

It didn't matter if she rubbed her eyes again or not. It was worth a try and she found it failed as miserably as the first time. A man sat there, undoubtedly a man. But he wasn't really a man. He looked like a Trekkie cos-player from her brother's geeky friends' facebook accounts. Only, there was something painfully different.

She'd been told they used color tints in movies to help the computer generated images work more smoothly with the real things around them, so that the eye saw movies from a distance, the colors not quite right. Maybe the tint, then, was wrong. This man looked decidedly orange and very much real, down to a slight twitch on his cheek under, was that scaling?

“My plane?” she grasped onto her first supposition that she'd been in a bad crash and fought to quell the sudden wash of bad memory from that awful dream. “Where's Papa Owen? How is my plane?” Her head hurt and she wasn't sure she could sit up, considering she was seeing things across the way.
I will not convey her thoughts on that, as they are by, and large, very much not suitable for a PG-13 site. Heh.

So... I wasn't sure just how to describe the beam... but I'm figuring it doesn't grasp at one spot on the body, but actually picks up the mass and transports it in some way. If I need to change that, please let me know and I'll fix my post.

Jaq flipped open her satellite phone and let one leg dangle out of the open door of the cockpit. Her eyes peered around the small site and then she grinned. It was perfect. Just perfect. And with the sudden draining of the beaver lake, she was bound to find some interesting things. Tomorrow was shaping up to be a good day. It was just too bad she hadn't managed to have enough day light to explore on her return flight. Not that she minded camping out, but it was a bit of a pain in the ass to get someone to watch over Rocky.

“APJ-798, calling for flight restructure.” She bit her lower lip and tried her best not to squirm in her seat.

“Flight restructure, go ahead APJ-798 and what are you doing calling out like this?” Owen snapped. “You take that generator?”

“I'll be sure to use it tonight,” she leaned to the side and patted the hand crank generator at her side. She'd have to recharge the phone so that it could be used again – the downside of being a woman in a man's job while the oldest crab at the field was her adopted grandfather. Other pilots could keep their phones off. She was expected to have it on at all times.

“GPS coordinates.”

She relayed her position and then hopped out of her plane with the phone to her ear. Opening the side door under the wing, she pulled a small pack out of the mid section and let it thump on the ground. “Beaver Lake is drained, Pops – I'm going to take a look at it tomorrow. I'd have landed in it, but at a low drive, it looked mucky so I landed just south east of the old dam. It looks to be a four mile hike in. I'll be back tomorrow night in time to take the Masters party of three up to Ron's place.”

“Was gonna have you fly in a kayak crew tomorrow,” Owen grumbled.

“Have Steve take that on. He doesn't earn his keep anyway,” she grinned. “Gonna sign off. Need to set up camp. Love ya.”

“Yeah, yeah.”

He didn't remind her to take precautions. He didn't tell her to sleep in her plane or to put her food up into a cache or to make sure she had cleared the ground or any of the other, silly things you have to tell those from the lower forty-eight to do in order to keep them alive. He knew she could take care of herself and besides, he had his pacifier, her phone was still on.

The tent went up with the swift deft hand of practice in a matter of moments and a fire was made. She cooked a can of ravioli and drank from the water tank in her plane. Jaq took off her clothing and replaced everything with sweats that she could wear just about anywhere, then she pulled out a couple of bottles of beer from her cooler in the plane and cracked them open.

There was the sound of the fire popping and the feel of the beer and an adventure the next day, Jaq could have said, at that moment, there was no other place she ever could have wanted to be. She nestled into the thin sleeping bag, smacked her lips and reminded herself that she had to brush her teeth the next morning. She hadn't done it before bed. Not that anyone would care.

Yes – perfection was the life she led at that moment. Most people had no idea what they were missing out on.

That was, of course, all before the sudden flare of light. Jaq blinked, it was silent and the light was as if she were in the middle of a high school football field during a home game. Her skin rushed all over prickles and she blinked, stared at the roof of her tent as she tried to get her head into the reality of whatever had just, very unexpectedly happened.

“What the hell?” she covered her eyes and scrambled out of the tent, grasping for the five hundred magnum she kept under her pillow, holding it at her side as she crouched and looked around. The entire field was aflame with bright light, unnatural light. Holding her hand at her brow, she sought out the source which was, unaccountably overhead, and then scrambled slightly to one side. If it was a helicopter, it was a silent one, and if it was silent, it was something new and military or research based.

No one was doing research as far north as she was. It didn't make sense. She went for the trees, her inner voice screaming at her to get moving. Something wasn't right and she really didn't have time to figure out what it was and decide on a perfect response to it. No – there were times when flight and then reconnaissance was the answer. She had left her phone back in the tent, but she had her gun and no matter who was flaring a light into her camp, she was fairly certain she'd set things straight for all parties concerned once she knew who it was she had to set things straight with.

So, it was with a bit of a hiccup of surprise that, before reaching the edge of the clearing, a beam of even stronger light fell around her and she suddenly felt as if every part of her was in water.

Or, something. She screamed and twisted, tried to grab onto a bush but whatever it was (not water, she breathed and she wasn't wet, but she felt 'buoyant' of all things) pulled at her and she felt the bush leave her hand. She spun a moment and then straightened out. Her arms and legs felt like they were no longer in water so much as up against molasses and she took in deep breaths in an attempt to keep calm.

Oh, that was so not going to happen. She couldn't catch her breath. Her body was so tense she might as well have been made of stone and her lungs felt shrunk; no air in the universe was going to make it inside of her, not when every cell of her body wanted to run and run NOW.

The light wasn't warm, but it was blinding in a way that the previous light had tried to be. She couldn't see the ground, couldn't see what was going on, but she knew she had left the trees because a wind which had rustled the tops of the trees before, brushed her side. That didn't make sense, because it was molasses and who ever heard of wind in molasses, she found herself thinking hysterically.
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