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<Snipped quote by ColouredCyan>

She's in, I just wanna call her something other than Thorn or Symbiosis. Would you be okay with purple and being called Parasite?

~KL~


Parasite is fine and a dark purple was what I had in mind.
What if we colored the thing purple and called you Parasite? Superman's enemy can be called Leech or something LOL

~KL~


Tough to tell if you're being serious or not. Is she in?
It doesn't look to be altered? What'd you go with for a new alias?

~KL~


Thorn, but I'm open to suggestions. I'll edit my proposed changes in the CS for you now.
@The Kid Lantern Are you happy with my CS? I'm I ok to posted it in Characters with the changes?
Come up with a better codename and trim a few of the powers down and I can accept this. Reminds me of something of a mix between Blue Beetle and Skitter. My thoughts on the powers...

Enhanced Strength
Envenomed Claws, cumulative paralytic
A projectile gunk shot, hazardous to health long term
Hook Shot Capabilities <<< Can you just explain this one?
Shell Armour Plating
Smokescreen <<< Batman's providing utility belts. Gotta give him this one LOL
Additional Chemical Sensors
Hazmat-lite, Bug Detoxes and filters Caitlyn's blood, making her resistant to chemical and biological warfare.
Defib-lite, Bug's Heart continues to pump blood around Caitlyn's body, even if Caitlyn's heart isn't.
Bug is semi-sentient and communicates Caitlyn neurally, feeding her powerful messages of hunger and self preservation.


@The Kid Lantern, I can agree to all of that, never was particularly happy with the code name. I was kind of fond of the smokescreen, thought it fit with Caitlyn's stealth/thievery and to reinforce how alien Bug is, but if you think it should go, it can go. The hook shot is a barbed chameleon tongue used for pulling light objects to Caitlyn, it can't support her weight.

I'm dreadful with names, how about Thorn? I'll keep thinking about it.
Just finished up Caitlyn's Bio/ Sample post, its longer than I usually write, largely because I was having a dialog between myself. Same quality though obviously.
Mind if i join?

"Bumble?" He requested. "How do you fare in the dark?"


"Better than I fare in the light, do you think I should lead or do you just want a warning before something big bonks you?"

Bumble retrieved her throwing axes from their resting places. Unfortunately, in all the fire and excitement one of the handles had be rendered to ashes. She slipped the remaining axes into their place on her belt and tucked the axe head into her bag as she retrieved her sandals, foot wraps and poop weren't a good combination.

The party began to mobilize and as exited their first trial, Bumble gathered up three of the biggest charred rats by the tail and dragged them along behind her. The stench of fecal matter intensified as they descended into the dungeon, but it could we worse, it could be Goblin Smell, or Dwarf Smell. She stood out the front with Ozend, whose shadow stretched out long in front of him, obscuring his view but not Bumbles. Bumble had perfect view of the chests which she had to refrain from throwing herself at. The could be trapped, they could get ambushed and their was a good chance they couldn't carry the contents to the end and back out again. They could be inspected on the return journey, plus bigger treasure lay ahead, she just knew it.

They reached the end of the corridor again, and this time were met with a door with a barred window. A noise emanated from within, an inhuman howl, as well as several more large sleeping rodents and a big wonderful chest. This was the one, the contents of the chest had to be marvelous, magnificent! Jewels? Ingots? What ever it was Bumble wasn't leaving till she knew, or her life was in serious danger, maybe then.

"You know what? I've had enough creepy crawlies for tonight. I'm gonna let Femurro handle this."


"No Alice, Plea-"

"GO FORTH, LOYAL SOLDIER! SMITE MY ENEMIES!"


A bone rolled under the threshold of the door, propelled only by its desire to complete Alice's bidding. Bumble sighed, we really weren't the Whispered Venture,and braced herself against the door facing her team mates. No doubt she'd woken and excited the rats, rats they could kill quickly and efficiently if they all attempted stealth. They would wait for them to calm down, go back to sleep and then they could be disposed of. She looked disapprovingly at Alice, but not for long, several small projectiles were pounding at the door and applying far more pressure than disorganized rats should be able to produce. She stepped away, and a wave of little rats poured out into the corridor in front of them. She dropped dinner, swapping it out for a throwing axe and her trusty battle axe.

In front of her stood a real rat golem, god knows how high, squirming and wriggling, hundreds of tiny hearts pounding away. It didn't look like it could get much closer to them but they certainly weren't getting to the chest without going through it. Bumble started thinking as she backed off, what would be effective against such a monstrosity? She pondered for a moment before realizing Alice could go off again any moment and only Og'Og knew what chaos might ensue after that. She stuck up a finger to Alice's lips and one to her own, axes still in hand, and stared deep into her eyes. In a calm voice she whispered,

"Shhhh, no magic yet."

She alternated between watching Alice and watching the Beast, right now both were equally dangerous.
Yeah I'm still here, but you need to learn to be more patient man, Rome wasn't built in a day.
post was missing something yesterday, think I fixed it.
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