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Kalas said
I'm sorry but I'm going to have to drop out. If you're this finicky over a name of an NPC, then we're definitely going to clash about other things in the future and I'd rather not go down that route.Apologies for wasting your time, Good Luck with your RP.

Alright. Sorry to hear that.

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@Razqua: The correct way to format your picture would be {hider=George}{img=http://lh5.ggpht.com/-IgaLXjjq2vQ/RllSrPZP2XI/AAAAAAAABPg/eDi6JcnK0u0/Wizzard1.jpg}{/hider}, replacing the {}s with []s.

@Kalas: Before I forget, if the sister isn't going to be a Player Character, than she can't have found the secret link (it should not work for her).

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@Card Captor & DragonBeastMode: Approved.

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The character sheets page is not the place to do so.

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@Kalas: I'm still sort of iffy about the sister being Japanese and having a non-Japanese name. I recommend this website to find a name for her.

@DragonBeastMode: Could you write the personality as a paragraph with full sentences?

@Card Captor: Yes, I am aware where New York City is. It's called a format, please follow it.

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I would say there's room for about 2 or 3 more people. We need supports, c'mon, guys.

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@Kalas: Alright, I do have a problem with the biography, and that revolves around his being a professional gamer. Firstly, MLG is a North American organization, so using it as a term is incorrect. Secondly, the the esports scene in Japan is almost non-existent, due to Japan's anti-gambling laws being really broad. If she's going to be a professional gamer with any sort of recognition, she wouldn't be living in Japan, and if that's the case, I'd like to see that specified.

(Also, Isis isn't really a Japanese name.)

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@Espi: Approved!

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@LowKey123: Looks good! Approved.

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@LowKey123: Could you move the picture into a hider and put it under an appearance section? I know it seems a little nitpicky, but I'd like to keep everything condensed. Also, you'll need to state what city Jacenta resides in. If you meant that she lives in Quebec City, you'll have to specify that (Quebec City, Quebec, Canada).

@Grey Star: Everything looks okay to me. Accepted.

@Espi and Plightz: The following sentence will seem like "well duh", you'll need to put United States of America or some variation thereof after the state in the Location section. I'd just like to keep things like that standardized.