What is this, people want to talk to me and I let it go over an hour? I must be slipping.
@EsterdiI feel like Sharp and Sariel could agree on the ends, just not the means.
@IcePezzI guess I'll just go through and disjointedly point out anything that sticks out in my mind. I do not guarantee that I will catch everything or even anything useful or relevant. Though that is the intent. Oh and the usual I hold no power here that I always find myself saying.
Her powers section reads "The blood bound to hers is that of an ancient beast, or so they've been told. But it has given her enhanced senses and increased strength. One other odd occurrence, when faced with her enemies up close, she is able to instill fear and doubt." Three things bother me here. they've been told? Do you mean she's been told or is their something I am missing? Secondly, the second sentence, I am not sure what "One other odd occurrence" has to do with the rest of the sentence. It seems like you changed what you wanted to say part way through and never fixed it. Anyway, the last point here is that its starting to bother me how little a frame of reference we have for increased physical strength across all the characters that have such an ability. And yes I say this knowing full well that both of my characters are inhumanly strong and said superhuman strength is not defined on either one's character sheet. Don't feel like you need to jump on that last one, I know I'm in no hurry.
Assuming your character ends up being with the Galuntrung Rangers it would make sense for the trading city in her bio to be Merandin, the only notable city in that area of the map. As a side note if Liara ends up spending any time in or near the White Woods, which assuming she get's in with the Galuntrung ranger's she would, then Liara will know of my character Raven. Though she would know him as The Revenant of the White
Woods, a two decades old undead of incredible power mindlessly walking around the woods. You don't fuck with him cuz he'll steal your soul, but he's easy enough to track and avoid when he's mindless. Of course recently he just got up and left to go join the dark army. You don't have to update your character to include Raven, but you personally should be aware of it.
Again a thing that does not have to change, but I don't think this word has public schooling available to all the poor of the land. I don't think anything has been written to the contrary though so I'll leave that up to you or a higher power to think about.
Oh, she left on a boat? Oops. There goes the Merandin suggestion from earlier. I guess Liara would be from out of the Kingdom then. At least as far as our map would suggest.
Anyway hopefully something in that is useful and doesn't convince you to leave. I seem to occasionally have that affect.
As a side not to everyone who's still here from the interest check. Remember when we thought there were too many evil characters?
