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Hey Rain should i keep the durations or just use the NPs timer naratively?

Also do you mean the Higurashi Village?

Fate/Rising Sun

Hmm should I just remove durations since no one else has durations for their stuff?

Fate/Rising Sun

X-Berserker - Demonic Vice Commander-X

Hijikata Toshizō

Name: Hijikata Toshizō (AKA Demon of the Battlefield, Wicked Shinsengumi, Wolf of Mibu etc.)
Class: Berserker
Personality:
A demonic vice chief feared even among peerless swordsmen of the Shinsengumi. Hijikata displays a strict and disciplined attitude toward his master and allies typically considering them as an ordinary regimental soldier unless he has known of there deeds and character in life and dubs it worthy of the likes of his closest friends. Contrary to his demon-like fighting style, on the battlefield, he is a pragmatist who also has the flexibility to employ any means necessary to win. That being said, he doesn't endorse the ruthlessness of characters such as Nobunaga. But he venomously hates cowards and traitors and believes them to be the lowest scum in existence, deserving of nothing but a curt, silent death from his blade or a sudden explosive death from his rifle. His title as a Wolf of Mibu also symbolizes his unbreakable resolve as he will not retreat from battle even when confronted with imminent death. Nor will he give mercy to any who challenges him.

He is not fond of younger girls especially those who are childish regarding them as nothing more than children that do not know how to be women. However, the opposite is also true as he has a deep fondness for mature women and often shows the personality he had in his younger days by flirting with them regardless of their status as his master, ally, or enemy even whilst trying to kill them whole heartedly.

Stats:
Strength: C
Endurance: C
Agility: C
Mana: E
Luck: D
Noble Phantasm: B

Class Skills:
- Mad Enhancement D+: Although a Berserker, normal conversations are possible, and he even retains his rational aspect as a tactician. A rare type of berserker who can be considered sane except for his reasoning being unable to grasp that he and the Shinsengumi have already perished.

[Effect:] Ranks up Strenght and Endurance by 1.

Personal Skills:
- Demon of the Battlefield B: A personal skill related to not only Saber's moniker but also how he fights, it acts as a form of pseudo-charisma that greatly bolsters a force's physical parameters and negates instances of Charisma. Hijikata was often referred to as the Demon Vice Commander by others, often enough feared as a merciless man as he had imposed absolute order in his company, down to even killing members on the battlefield that had attempted to retreat.

[Effect:] At any instance of combat, this skill activates, boosting Hijikata's Strength Parameter as well as the Strength parameter of others that fight on his side by one rank. Not only that, but it also negates any instance of Charisma that is of B rank and below.

- Laws of the Shinsengumi EX: A Skill that places compulsory restraints upon oneself. He would receive damage should he breach those prohibitions; however, his statuses would rise in exchange. Breaching all prohibitions would render him immobile.
Normally, breaching the prohibitions that which a Shinsengumi regimental soldier would have never been allowed to breach would gradually render one insane. It is the embodiment of his resolution and madness; of one who still aspires to be Shinsengumi, even after he threw away his pride as a warrior.

One is to not go against the samurai code (prohibition of combats unworthy of a warrior)
One is to not to escape from the office (prohibition of rescinding one’s contract)
One is to not raise money on their own accord (prohibition of furnishing materials from others)
One is to not handle litigations on their own accord (prohibition of rescinding combat status by means of negotiation)
One is to not engage in personal battles (prohibition of battles outside of the Master’s instruction)

[Effect:] For each first instance the law is broken, his physical parameters rise by a single letter rank until they reach A to which they become + modifiers. During each first instance of a law being broken, the damage is incurred to his vessel as a result (This is immediate, and can be healed off normally). Breaking all five laws procs a command seal-like effect that roots Hijikata in place. This can be counteracted via using a command seal to break the rooting effect or for waiting for the effect to run out (Roughly a day's worth of time). Command seals can be used to reverse the effects of the skill itself, resetting the counter

- Disengage C: The ability to withdraw from battle, or to reset the state of affairs. It also returns disadvantageous battle to its initial state and skill condition to its starting value. Simultaneously, several bad statuses are compulsorily canceled. When he was alive, every time he thought of losing he would always rise again and continue to fight.

[Effect:] Bonus effect of returning battle conditions to what they were at the beginning of the match. Allowing Hijikata to retreat from a fight after gaining a certain distance or come back from a disadvantageous position.

- Military Tactics D: A tactical, instinctive ability in regards not of one-on-one battle, but of battle involving large numbers. Often the tactician and military leader during large scale battle, he is well versed in both one-on-one and army battles. grants advantageous correction in the case of using one’s own anti-army Noble Phantasm, or when dealing against the enemy’s anti-army Noble Phantasm.

[Effect:] Applies a rank up to single Anti-Army Noble Phantasm but not exceeding A to oneself or an ally, or a rank down (as long as it is not A rank or higher) or - modifier (as long as it has a +) to enemy Anti-Army Noble Phantasm.

Noble Phantasms:
Name: Shinsengumi - Undying Sincerity
Rank: C+
Type: : Anti-Unit (Self)

Appearance

-The sword of carnage of Hijikata Toshizō - the war-demon that made all the soldiers of the master swordsmen-filled Shinsengumi say “I may not lose, but I don’t think I can win against Hijikata either.” Those circumstances are truly a reproduction of his lifetime of continuous battle; while invoked, his surroundings turn into a battlefield where bullets fly and signal guns roar. While this may appear to be similar to an Anti-Army Noble Phantasm that summons a large number of people, its true nature is completely different. Everything is a manifestation of his madness about how “the Shinsengumi is here, even now.”

[Effects: When invoked, it acts as an advance form of battle continuation. This renders Hijikata's body as undamageable during its duration allowing him to continuously fight without being hindered by the damage he has taken even if fatal as long as it is still in use. However, it is a double-edged sword that bursts out at once all the damage accumulated by the time the effect is over.

Name: Makoto no Hata – Flag of Sincerity
Rank: B
Type: Anti-Army

Appearance

-It is the Shinsengumi troop flag with the Japanese kanji "sincerity" inscribed on it. Once the flag is raised the Shinsengumi troops are summoned in a certain radius around it. They are classified as independent servants each one possessing E-rank Independent action. However, none of them can truly compare to their prime and aren't as strong as they would be if summoned on their own. Depending on whom is using this flag the members of the troop will appear differently as they are summoned with the user's mental image of them imposed.

Effects: Roughly ten servants are summoned as only his closest friends and staunches followers would heed his call due to his fearsome reputation.

Alignment: Lawful Evil
Changes: None

Fate/Rising Sun

Up to you. I'm fine with it either way, also on the off chance we get like just servants what happens?

And am I actually accepted the question mark is triggering me? XD

Fate/Rising Sun

I don't know why it is, but those discord images aren't embedding properly on my end. But accepted?

PS: mad enhancement is spelled wrong.

@Raineh Daze

I have completely no idea. I just put them in discord to avoid image broken links.

Fate/Rising Sun

On second thought might as well diversify since I had the berserker sheet just in case. XD

Demonic Vice Commander

Hijikata Toshizo

Name: Hijikata Toshizo (AKA Demon of the Battlefield, Wicked Shinsengumi, Wolf of Mibu etc.)
Class: Berserker
Personality:
A demonic vice chief feared even among peerless swordsmen of the Shinsengumi. Hijikata displays a strict and disciplined attitude toward his master and allies typically considering them as an ordinary regimental soldier unless he has known of there deeds and character in life and dubs it worthy of the likes of his closest friends. Contrary to his demon-like fighting style, on the battlefield, he is a pragmatist who also has the flexibility to employ any means necessary to win. That being said, he doesn't endorse the ruthlessness of characters such as Nobunaga. But he venomously hates cowards and traitors and believes them to be the lowest scum in existence, deserving of nothing but a curt, silent death from his blade or a sudden explosive death from his rifle. His title as a Wolf of Mibu also symbolizes his unbreakable resolve as he will not retreat from battle even when confronted with imminent death. Nor will he give mercy to any who challenges him.

He is not fond of younger girls especially those who are childish regarding them as nothing more than children that do not know how to be women. However, the opposite is also true as he has a deep fondness for mature women and often shows the personality he had in his younger days by flirting with them regardless of their status as his master, ally, or enemy even whilst trying to kill them whole heartedly.

Stats:
Strength: C
Endurance: C
Agility: C
Mana: E
Luck: D
Noble Phantasm: B

Class Skills:
- Mad Enhancement D+: Although a Berserker, normal conversations are possible, and he even retains his rational aspect as a tactician. A rare type of berserker who can be considered sane except for his reasoning being unable to grasp that he and the Shinsengumi have already perished.

[Effect:] Ranks up Strenght and Endurance by 1.

Personal Skills:
- Demon of the Battlefield B: A personal skill related to not only Saber's moniker but also how he fights, it acts as a form of pseudo-charisma that greatly bolsters a force's physical parameters and negates instances of Charisma. Hijikata was often referred to as the Demon Vice Commander by others, often enough feared as a merciless man as he had imposed absolute order in his company, down to even killing members on the battlefield that had attempted to retreat.

[Effect:] At any instance of combat, this skill activates, boosting Hijikata's Strength Parameter as well as the Strength parameter of others that fight on his side by one rank. Not only that, but it also negates any instance of Charisma that is of B rank and below.

- Laws of the Shinsengumi EX: A Skill that places compulsory restraints upon oneself. He would receive damage should he breach those prohibitions; however, his statuses would rise in exchange. Breaching all prohibitions would render him immobile.
Normally, breaching the prohibitions that which a Shinsengumi regimental soldier would have never been allowed to breach would gradually render one insane. It is the embodiment of his resolution and madness; of one who still aspires to be Shinsengumi, even after he threw away his pride as a warrior.

One is to not go against the samurai code (prohibition of combats unworthy of a warrior)
One is to not to escape from the office (prohibition of rescinding one’s contract)
One is to not raise money on their own accord (prohibition of furnishing materials from others)
One is to not handle litigations on their own accord (prohibition of rescinding combat status by means of negotiation)
One is to not engage in personal battles (prohibition of battles outside of the Master’s instruction)

[Effect:] For each first instance the law is broken, his physical parameters rise by a single letter rank until they reach A to which they become + modifiers. During each first instance of a law being broken, the damage is incurred to his vessel as a result (This is immediate, and can be healed off normally). Breaking all five laws procs a command seal-like effect that roots Hijikata in place. This can be counteracted via using a command seal to break the rooting effect or for waiting for the effect to run out (Roughly a day's worth of time). Command seals can be used to reverse the effects of the skill itself, resetting the counter

- Disengage C: The ability to withdraw from battle, or to reset the state of affairs. It also returns disadvantageous battle to its initial state and skill condition to its starting value. Simultaneously, several bad statuses are compulsorily canceled. When he was alive, every time he thought of losing he would always rise again and continue to fight.

[Effect:] Bonus effect of returning battle conditions to what they were at the beginning of the match. Allowing Hijikata to retreat from a fight after gaining a certain distance or come back from a disadvantageous position.

- Military Tactics D: A tactical, instinctive ability in regards not of one-on-one battle, but of battle involving large numbers. Often the tactician and military leader during large scale battle, he is well versed in both one-on-one and army battles. grants advantageous correction in the case of using one’s own anti-army Noble Phantasm, or when dealing against the enemy’s anti-army Noble Phantasm.

[Effect:] Applies a rank up to single Anti-Army Noble Phantasm but not exceeding A to oneself or an ally, or a rank down (as long as it is not A rank or higher) or - modifier (as long as it has a +) to enemy Anti-Army Noble Phantasm.

Noble Phantasms:
Name: Shinsengumi - Undying Sincerity
Rank: C+
Type: : Anti-Unit (Self)

Appearance

-The sword of carnage of Hijikata Toshizou - the war-demon that made all the soldiers of the master swordsmen-filled Shinsengumi say “I may not lose, but I don’t think I can win against Hijikata either.” Those circumstances are truly a reproduction of his lifetime of continuous battle; while invoked, his surroundings turn into a battlefield where bullets fly and signal guns roar. While this may appear to be similar to an Anti-Army Noble Phantasm that summons a large number of people, its true nature is completely different. Everything is a manifestation of his madness about how “the Shinsengumi is here, even now.”

Effects: When invoked, it acts as an advance form of battle continuation. This renders Hijikata's body as undamageable during its duration allowing him to continuously fight without being hindered by the damage he has taken even if fatal as long as it is still in use. However, it is a double-edged sword that bursts out at once all the damage accumulated by the time the effect is over. Lasts 8 posts.

Name: Makoto no Hata – Flag of Sincerity
Rank: B
Type: Anti-Army

Appearance

-It is the Shinsengumi troop flag with the Japanese kanji "sincerity" inscribed on it. Once the flag is raised the Shinsengumi troops are summoned in a certain radius around it. They are classified as independent servants each one possessing E-rank Independent action. However, none of them can truly compare to their prime and aren't as strong as they would be if summoned on their own. Depending on whom is using this flag the members of the troop will appear differently as they are summoned with the user's mental image of them imposed.

Effects: Roughly ten servants are summoned and they remain for up to five posts as only his closest friends and staunches followers would heed his call due to his reputation.

Alignment: Lawful Evil
Changes: None

Fate/Rising Sun

Well, it's not like there's no precedent for Sabers who don't have NPs directly related to their sword but are still Saber because that's what they used (Gilles, Lan Ling, Jason).

@Raineh Daze

I mean true but on the other hand, FGO tends to get Lazy with the NP materials sometimes, and I just wanted to have legit justifications to stuff XD.

I just really hate using cuz FGO did it as a reason or else id get lazy making servants.

Fate/Rising Sun

Well yeah, 2/3 of the NPs are more generic, it's just that if we're going to have Okita around with Mumyou Sandanzuki and those NPs, then a Hijikata with the predecessor of that technique, then that's an almost excessive level of overlap. I'd ask @Vertigo if they're still interested/would mind.

@Raineh Daze

Honestly I just put it in cuz it was the only legit Saber qualification XD. I mean when your surrounded by 4 monster swordsman and get stuck with torture and army battles it's hard to find a saber qualification. I mostly really planned to be a stat monster that kept boosting himself and his summons to really get that tactician of the Shinsengumi feel.

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Can I get back to you on that? apart from the sudden increase in agility of all things, I'm on the fence about accepting a modified Hijikata whose Noble Phantasms are all either identical or tied to Okita's when someone has already said they're going to app Okita (and if they didn't I know someone else would).

Also, you have a broken image in the first NP, might want to look at that.

@Raineh Daze

Sure it's fine!

Although some explanations for the decisions.

The stats that was mostly cuz his berserker stats are actually STR D END D AGI C MANA E LUCK D without Mad Enchantment and usually, saber boosts your physicals quite a bit so deceptively yes Toshizo's highest Parameter is speed if he had no ME. Honestly im fine with lowering it either way.

As for the NP's well, I just tend to toss in the haori and flag if they are Kondo, Toshizo, Saito, or Nagakure, since every one of them is connected by the Shinsengumi NP's and the flag itself states that it's pretty much a Shinsengumi NP although effectiveness varies like Saito having the lowest chance of summoning a number higher than four, considering of Kondo, Okita, Nagakure, Toshizo would probably be the only ones who answered considering he basically was the executioner while Okita and Kondo are the most likely to have an actual army.

The Hirazuki though is just me being completely faithful to both IRL history and rumors since it's pretty much considered the prototype of Saito's and Okita's techniques and is the only reason Hiji would qualify as a saber.

But hey if it doesn't fit I can understand and always paste Berserker Hijikata since I just really love him. Though I gotta say if Kondo, Nagakure or Saito show up and they cant get their hands on the coat and flag i'd find that quite terrible, cuz atleast Hiji has legit reasons to why he has a different version.

Fate/Rising Sun

Demonic Vice Commander

Hijikata Toshizo

Name: Hijikata Toshizo (AKA Demon of the Battlefield, Wicked Shinsengumi, Wolf of Mibu etc.)
Class: Saber
Personality:
Unlike his older counterpart, this Hijikata has not yet discarded his pride as a warrior. A staunch follower of the Bushido Code and the Laws of the Shinsengumi, Hijikata's honor, integrity, bravery, and resolve are of the highest caliber. In this state, he can be considered as one of the "Last Samurai" because of his skill with the sword and his unrelenting iron will. He will not retreat from battle even when confronted with imminent death. Nor will he give mercy to any who challenges him. Even as a Servant he will refuse to follow anyone who he deems unworthy. He will stay his blade if ordered once or possibly twice, but doing so repeatedly will cost Command Seals - such is his unwavering dedication to his honor.

He has a vehement distaste for his older self, believing him to have forgotten the reason he set out on the path of a swordsman in the first place. Finding the use of guns abhorrent, as it was the very thing that killed him later in life and made him experience the agony of the bullet shattering his spine. Due to this, he uses his katana Izumi no Kami Kanesada and wakizashi Horikawa Kunihiro as his main weapons, wielding both rather than his rifle.

And yet he cannot truly hate the person he turned into, seeing it as an inevitable outcome due to his own nature and responsibility. Still one can say he still yearns for the days in Kondo Isami's dojo where he trained with his dearest friend Okita and would get scolded by Kondo due to the many letters left in the dojo by his many admirers. He seeks the grail, not for himself but for Okita's health. Wishing that the same sickness that had taken his mother did not take his friend's ability to fight side by side with the others. Part of him believes that things would have ended differently if Okita was by his side all the way.

A minor trait that becomes more prominent due to being in his younger days is that his flirtatious nature is more pronounced. Making him freely flirt with females such his master, allies, or enemies as long as they are to his type.

Stats:
Strength: C+(C)
Endurance: C
Agility: B
Mana: E
Luck: D
Noble Phantasm: B

Class Skills:
- Magic Resistance E: As he is a Heroic Spirit from an era with lower Mystery, don’t expect anything good from his Magic Resistance. Just a token addition to identify his Class.
[Effect:] Cancels low ranking spells.

- Riding C-: One can flawlessly ride vehicles and animals that received proper training and adjustment Due to him dying on horseback this receives a negative modifier when using horses.
[Effect:] Capable of gaining a basic understanding of modern vehicles. Capable of handling mounts and vehicles with the skill of seasoned professional riders or tamers. It seems to have innate talent whatever vehicle and mount under them.

Personal Skills:
- Demon of the Battlefield B: A personal skill related to not only Saber's moniker but also how he fights, it acts as a form of pseudo-charisma that greatly bolsters a force's physical parameters and negates instances of Charisma. Hijikata was often referred to as the Demon Vice Commander by others, often enough feared as a merciless man as he had imposed absolute order in his company, down to even killing members on the battlefield that had attempted to retreat.
[Effect:] At any instance of combat, this skill activates, boosting Hijikata's Strength Parameter as well as the Strength parameter of others that fight on his side by one rank. Not only that, but it also negates any instance of Charisma that is of B rank and below.

- Bravery A: Hijikata Toshizo’s conviction, self-confidence, and will were unquestionable to the point it turned into madness later in life, the man never faltering no matter the task he was faced with. Unflinching even under the threat of certain death all for his ideals and beliefs. The ability to negate mental interference such as pressure, confusion, and fascination. It also has the bonus effect of increasing melee damage. Not usable under the effects of Mad Enhancement. Immunity to psychic and psychological ailments.
[Effect:] Gains one + modifiers to strength and immunity to mental and psychological ailments that is of A rank and below.

- Disengage C: The ability to withdraw from battle, or to reset the state of affairs. It also returns disadvantageous battle to its initial state and skill condition to its starting value. Simultaneously, several bad statuses are compulsorily canceled. When he was alive, every time he thought of losing he would always rise again and continue to fight.
[Effect:] Bonus effect of returning battle conditions to what they were at the beginning of the match. Allowing Hijikata to retreat from a fight after gaining a certain distance or come back from a disadvantageous position.

- Eastern Medicine B: Knowledge and applicability of Eastern techniques in medicine crafting. Despite his renown as a fierce warrior and association with the samurai of the era, Hijikata was born a farmer and medicine peddler. This skill not only represents his humble beginnings but the way he found to pursue his desire for swordsmanship but his older self has already discarded it. Looking back he sometimes wonders if he had not, would he have been able to help Okita.
[Effect:] Non-fatal wounds suffered by Hijikata can be healed at a reduced magical energy cost by sacrificing mundane resources; wounds to others can have healing time improved threefold when processed by him.

- Military Tactics D: A tactical, instinctive ability in regards not of one-on-one battle, but of battle involving large numbers. Often the tactician and military leader during large scale battle, he is well versed in both one-on-one and army battles. grants advantageous correction in the case of using one’s own anti-army Noble Phantasm, or when dealing against the enemy’s anti-army Noble Phantasm.
[Effect:] Applies a rank up to single Anti-Army Noble Phantasm but not exceeding A to oneself or an ally, or a rank down (as long as it is not A rank or higher) or - modifier (as long as it has a +) to enemy Anti-Army Noble Phantasm.

Noble Phantasms:
Name: Chikai No Haori - Coat Of Oaths
Rank: C
Type: : Anti-Unit (Self)

Appearance

-A light-blue haori. The excessively famous costume of the Shinsengumi, the man-slayer squad who shook the capital during the Bakumatsu, sublimated to a Noble Phantasm. The haori that his older self-threw away for a more western style of clothing. One can say this is his most prized possession in this state, as it represents the Shinsengumi he dearly loved.
Effects: By wearing it, Hijikata’s parameters are ranked up by one.

Name: Hirazuki – The Thrust of the Disciplined Demon
Rank: C
Type: Anti-Unit

Appearance

-Hijikata’s famous sword technique adopted by the Shinsengumi and later expanded upon by both Souji Okita and Hajime Saitou. Rather than a “battle technique” or “dueling technique” it could be called a “killing technique” in that it specializes in decreasing an opponent’s chances to live with each strike. Even though mediocre compared to his peers, due to it being a technique that helped progress the swordsmanship of his allies he cherishes it deeply.
Effects: A horizontal thrust said to penetrate between the ribs of an opponent for maximum injury. If struck by this technique, the target exponentially becomes both an easier target and takes greater damage with each subsequent blow. A supremely efficient Noble Phantasm.

Name: Makoto no Hata – Flag of Sincerity
Rank: B
Type: Anti-Army

Appearance

-It is the Shinsengumi troop flag with the Japanese kanji "sincerity" inscribed on it. Once the flag is raised the Shinsengumi troops are summoned in a certain radius around it. They are classified as independent servants each one possessing E-rank Independent action. However, none of them can truly compare to their prime and aren't as strong as they would be if summoned on their own. Depending on whom is using this flag the members of the troop will appear differently as they are summoned with the user's mental image of them imposed.
Effects: Roughly ten servants are summoned and they remain for up to five posts as only his closest friends and staunches followers would heed his call due to his reputation.

Alignment: Lawful Evil
Changes: Age